100 world challenge #5

3/10/2014

The prompt this week is:

…as I looked around…

Make sure you use the prompt as it is written. Take care to make sure it is your best work with lots of creative vocabulary. Always read it through so that it says what you want it to. You have 104 words altogether so make sure you use them!

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Kayleigh

3/10/2014 01:19:04 am

I was playing outside in the trees, until I toshed a magical tree,I felt dizzy and I was getting tiny! The next moment, I had grown tiny little wings! As I looked around, I was in a fairy school. But this wasn't an average school, you had to learn how to make fairy rigs and stuff like that. There were also children who had too toshed the magical tree! I woke up it was only mammy who was opening the blinds! This is mine 104 word challenge I hope you have enjoyed it (has a dream about this challenge) bye!!!!!

Guy

3/10/2014 02:41:17 am

There is friendly boy called Sam he loved football and one summer day the sun was so hot that every one was sweating but Sam still wanted to play with his bright orange ball. On the other side of the narrow road where he lived there was a creepy, haunted shack every thing was dead even the grass! It was his fear to go nearer the house but Sam kicked his orange ball on to the dead grass so Sam said to him self let's conquer

Guy

3/10/2014 02:45:24 am

( sorry the first screen froze) his fear to go on the dead grass. So sam was brave and fell down a trap door that was hidden and fell to his death!

Sadie

3/10/2014 08:10:54 pm

On Friday the 31st of October 2005, I was getting ready with my two friends to go to a haunted house in Spooksville. Every year we went there for Halloween, but we had never been in the 'Never Ending Maze Of Doom' before because legend says that in the 1940's a girl went in and never came out! This was the year that we had plucked up the courage to enter the maze and here we were face to face with the 'Maze Of Doom'. I slowly stepped one foot inside, as I looked around my friends had backed out and I was alone...

Katie

3/10/2014 09:42:03 pm

Having decided due to the unexpected sunny weather we headed north towards Seaton Carew. Meanwhile on the radio the lady said "In Seaton Carew it is extremely busy so if you are heading there go bright and early".
Before very long I got bored of travelling and as I looked around I saw the blue,wet water drifting towards the sea.
"I am so excited because we are here!" I shouted.
"I am too" mam replied.
At the yellow sandy beach I discovered a shiny pink seashell as wet as a dogs nose. Inside was a hermit crab, I decided to call it Crabbie!.

Jessica

4/10/2014 02:38:08 am

I walked Into the dense forest. AS I LOOKED AROUNED I felt inky black eyes watching me! I felt scared because I didn't know what was going to happen. I walked further into the forest... CRASH a old man, who was wearing a ragged jacket and ripped jeans, fell from a tree! The old man had wrinkled skin and a walking stick. "Who are you?" I whispered quietly
"My name is Dennis, what's your name?" Dennis shouted back.
"My name is Jessica", I replied "Why did you fall out of a tree?"
"Because I was hiding from the wolf!"
"What wolf?" I asked Dennis.
"THAT WOLF!!!!" Shouted Dennis pointing to the enormous, hairy wolf with saliva dripping from the wolfs dagger like teeth! Dennis and I ran as fast as we could back to my house. When I got home I told my mam what happen. She was really shocked!

Cobi

4/10/2014 02:48:21 am

While trekking through the rainforest in the west cost of America looking for an almost extinct tree octopus.As I looked around,under bushes and in trees along the rain forests rivers edge,a bright light caught as I got closer it became brighter,a voice said "hello my name is Olly". Olly jumped from the waters edge up a tree and swung from branch to branch until he reached me.He was funny looking he had three arms, three legs and one eye,orange skin but his face was white . My friends in the rain forest call me Olly the tree octopus.

Josh

4/10/2014 03:49:32 am

It was a lovely Saturday afternoon Just after lunch . I was tidying my toy filled room AND AS I LOOKED AROUND I saw my Volvo fire engine , I carefully lifted it of the cabinet and opened my toy chest and picked up two scania fire trucks and said its time for play . but suddenly mam shouted " Josh time to go to butlins holiday park . Then I said excitedly can we go swimming on rapid rivers . Mam replied yes of course we can Josh darling . hang on a minute what about Grandma and granda . they will meet us there said dad yey !!!!!!!!!

kody

4/10/2014 07:34:09 am

As I looked around my bedroom I couldn't find my i pod. was scared very scared I felt wired without my I pod. I thought my brother had took it or my sister had it in her manky bedroom. HOLLY is my I pod in your bedroom she shouted back NO must be ben then BEN do you have my I pod he shouted back NO. I know were it is at school so the next day I went in to school and asked if it was in they said no so were is it I said in my head then I got back home I went up on the xbox and it was there I was so pleased and that was the story of my I pod

McKenzie 5

4/10/2014 05:30:20 pm

When I woke up I was just drinking my juice as I looked around there was birds, birds, and more birds and some just flew into my house it felt werid but when I just took a few more steps...

Lucy

4/10/2014 09:03:37 pm

Last night I lost my pencil and my pencil case. As I looked around my cluttered bedroom, I just didn't know where to begin. I came across some skittles and the packet to them. I looked in the skittles packet. Next I found a sock from weeks and weeks ago it was mine I smelt it I went dizzy after that it smelt disgusting. I found my pencil case but the pencils where gone. I found them but I forgot what to do.what I am i doing? I thought it was weird. I just remembered I needed to do my homework mam shouted and said "are you doing your homework" I said "yes I am" I replied and I needed up doing it.

Madelene

4/10/2014 09:44:20 pm

“Who wants to go on the haunted house ride” said Dad who was now paying for us to go on so we didn’t have a choice.
“Me” said Tom and I.
Then we both stepped through the huge arched doorway. As I looked around I saw creepy ghosts zombies and Draculas.
“Errrrrrrrrr” tom whimpered.
I slowly turned around and there running towards us was an axe maniac and he chased us all the way to the end of the ride.
“Did you have a good time” dad asked us
“sort of” we said trying to slip a smile in because they were still scared.

Neve

4/10/2014 11:12:32 pm

As I looked around all I could see was posters avertising the fun fair coming to town next Saturday, I was so excited. I asked if Millie wanted to come with me, she said ok, I was delighted that she said yes. That Saturday we were thrilled that one of the rides called the frog was there! The frog goes up and down round and round and forwards and backwards, there's a frog in the middle that makes noises like hahaha, shall we go faster and let's go backwards. But the voice is really creepy! We had a really fun day but we had to go home sometime

I wanted to use inverted commas but it wouldn't let me put them in

Robbie

4/10/2014 11:17:02 pm

On Friday after school I went to the swimming baths with Ethan and his little brother and Ethan's mum . We were going to go to spennymoor but it was closed so we went to bishop in insted . We had a great time . We went into the little pool with finly we played catch and as I looked around I saw someone waving,it was Alfie. After that we went into the big,deep pool . It was cold but we still jumped in but we got use to the water.

Ethan

4/10/2014 11:36:45 pm

As I looked around I saw Robbie at the shop, I asked him if he wanted to come over my house.When Robbie was over my house we went to the swimming baths, we played catch in the big pool. When we were board we went to the top of the big pool and did star jumps into the water, to see who could make the biggest splash into the pool.We stayed at the swimming baths for about two hours,after we went to McDonald.

bethany

4/10/2014 11:42:13 pm

we pulled up in the drive way and i caught sight of our new house.as we walked up to our door in heard a sound coming from inside,oh boy i said under my breath.we had all been unpacking and choosing our rooms i chose the big one as i looked around the room everything was perfect but...i heard the noise again but it came from under my bed i opened my mouth but nothing came out so i crouched down my teeth clashing together i grabbed my torch and randomly some chattering teeth ha i laughed.

Luke d

5/10/2014 01:12:37 am

As I looked around the old spooky castle I was terrified. The floors creeked and the wind howled through the gaps of the walls. I couldn't work out why I was here i think I was looking for something, then in the distance I saw a wooden brown door so I quickly ran over to it, I tried the handle but it was locked. I Saw something shining in the light of the moon, it was the key! But it was to high to reach. Then I heard a roaring sound coming from behind me, I was petrified I needed to get that key.

Kate

5/10/2014 02:38:43 am

I was walking down bishop Auckland in Beckett close at 16:20 and I saw something very unusual in a bush and I didn’t know what to do so I tried to see through the bush and as I turned around I saw it again thinking it was just a squirrel but next it stood in front of me I was very shocked it was a monster he told me his name and where he came from he lives in bushes in summer and in winter he goes to a different country but a scorching hot country like south Africa it was amazing...

Daniel

5/10/2014 04:49:39 am

Jack and I were at our dad's house and we were in our room playing on our tabs on YouTube, and we are going to watch some of markiplyer car crash game ,but we heard some one at the door knocking it was Patrick our friend who lives 8 doors away from my dad's house ,he asked if we wanted to go down the pit, as I looked around all I saw was trees and dirt ,but we found a new bike in the pit and we rode the
bike up jumps and hill's and road's.

Luke p

5/10/2014 05:47:47 am

At the weekend my family and I travelled four hours In the car to Staffordshire for my uncles wedding as my dad was best man for the wedding and it was amazing when my mam told me to listen ...as I looked around... I saw my dad doing his speech my dad was stood up In front of everyone at the party talking about my uncle and his new wife Sue, and when my dad finished his speech and everyone clapped and applauded. We had a lovely meal and there was a sweet cart and me and my brothers could help our selves to the sweets. There was also a artist there doing charactatures we had ours done they were great. We stayed 2 nights then had to travel 4 hours back on Saturday we were very tired.

Jamie-lee

6/10/2014 02:03:50 am

It was a cold and stormy night as we travelled to our destination. We were moving house once we had arrived at our new house I realised how bleak and deserted the house was. Once I had finished unpacking I herd a noise...as I looked around...I saw something unusual it was a trap door. As I touched the flap it swung open I managed to squeeze into the trap door. Then I spotted a tapestry on the tapestry there was a picture of me. I wondered why. It was very strange I was confused. It made me puzzled it was very strange.

Caitlin

6/10/2014 04:14:04 am

Great story everyone

Caitlin

6/10/2014 04:31:23 am

One morning as I looked around my room, I spotted something was missing, it was my teddy. I slowly viewed my room, it really was not there. I told my Mum, she said, "I will help look for him". S together we began searching the house, he was no where! I started to cry it was my favourite teddy ever. We looked high. We looked low. We looked in front of things. We looked behind things. We looked above things. We looked below things. We looked around things. We found him. He was in the woods having a teddy bears picnic.

Joe (part 5)

6/10/2014 05:13:23 am

As Bob was getting hoisted up he said "you're back!" Bob went up, up and up. Bob reached the top but Joey tripped over and fell, fell and fell SPLASH!!! He fell in to the rapid river and away he went down the water fall. Joey saw a cave behind the water fall, he struggled to swim against the current but he eventually made it. There was an old man, Joey said 'what are you doing here' the old man replied 'what are you doing here I demand answers!' 'I fell down the water fall as I looked around I saw the dark damp cave'.

niall

7/10/2014 03:14:04 am

I was out walking my dog when I had thought of something amazing , since my dog was so small I wanted to make a machine that made it grow bigger. When I got home I made an amazing plan I new it would definitely work. After a couple of days I had finally made it 67 , I new it was going to work it had to.It had worked i left my dog , as I looked around the door my dog was giant I had to get it shrunk

Henry

7/10/2014 03:54:31 am

Whoosh, a massive flash came into the corner of my eyes. As I looked around quickly to see what it was I noticed a huge cloud of steam coming from a tiny box that had come zooming up from the ground. The box was a cube and on each face it was split into two halves, one side yellow and the other red. I touched the box curiously and, to my surprise, it shot out a blue laser beam. Before I knew it I got dragged into a decent sized room with lots of technical controls. I pushed a big red button and the room started to shake. All of a sudden I was off...

beau

7/10/2014 04:25:21 am

AS I LOOKED AROUND the corner someone tapped me. ''ahhhhhh'' I screamed loudly as if I wanted the whole world to hear me ''sorry I didn't mean to scare you'' the stranger said. I stared at it in a strange sort of way studying to see if I liked this person or not. ''is it this way to the ballet exam?'' it said at top speed ''yes ill show you I'm going their actually''. As we walked down the corridor I thought it leaned over to whisper something in my ear but instead bit me in the neck. Suddenly I collapsed to the floor. Turns out it was a vampire.

evie-mae

8/10/2014 01:35:58 pm

One sunny morning molly got out of bed and relised her mum was in agony.She diden't know what to do so she just waited for something to happen just then her mum cried out ''i'm having some kittens''.The next day molly was looking around to find her mum to say ''are you alright'' but suddenly molly spotted something very strange.Three little kittens were on poppy's,my dog's,bed and poppy has nowhere to sleep.(true story)

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