100 word challenge #6

9/10/2015

This weeks challenge must include:

…then, in the middle of the noise…

You need to think about what the noise is before you start your story. Where are you? Is it a good place? How do you feel?

23 Comments

Liam M

10/10/2015 01:53:02 am

The fire brigade was called out on a mission as a block of flats had caught on fire. The fire seemed under control but THEN, IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NOISE, one of the firemen saw a puppy on the 6th floor. The fire engine lifted the ladders up to the 6th floor where the fireman reached out and caught the very scared puppy in his arms. He could not find the owner; neither could the police, so they took it back to the fire station for food and water. The puppy ended up becoming a very successful fire dog.

Michael

10/10/2015 02:12:23 am

Then, in the middle of the noise stood Doctor Nifariho who invented our Cyclone chips in our body. We coursed all this destruction just because we hated it when the GANGRIHNO team of bad guys killed you. We couldn't stop thinking of you so that's why we destroyed the GANGRIHNO team but while we were fighting the bad guys made loads of destruction by throwing buses, cars, lorries and even old ladies who mostly survived. We are truly sorry. Will you forgive us? If that was yes, can I please have a x-box one and an I PHONE 6 S because I want one!

Lucy.B

10/10/2015 02:25:10 am

It was halloween night, and Emma was all dressed up as a ghost to go trick or treating. Out the door she went, up the street to Mrs Chesterfield house. Knock...knock...knock. Then there she heard a noise, not just any old noise a scream. Then, in the middle of the noise, at a house all dark and misty, Emma could make out a black figure running towards her it was her friend Tilly she must of been trick or treating, Thought Emma. "Come on Emma!" Tilly grasped her gloved hand and the sprinted back to Emma's house, that was just up the lane. Before Emma could make out who chasing them, she woke up from her dream.

Ethan stokes

10/10/2015 03:35:46 am

I went to a rally; there were lots of different cars there, some sports cars, some rally cars and lots of other vehicles that I had never seen before! The race was about to start and all of the cars were making their way to the start line. There was a strong smell of petrol and exhaust fumes, the cars were revving like crazy ....then, in the middle of the noise... the flag went up and the cars were off, the rally cars were really fast over the dirt section and were leading the race, it was very exciting.(WOW!)

Grace

11/10/2015 02:09:29 am

Up high in the sky, past the moon and the stars on an orange planet lived lots and lots of aliens. Spaceships soring through the sky with little voices screaming weeee! The aliens were all different colours of the rainbow. Then in the middle of the noise an alien shouted "dinnerba"! Then all the others ran into a giant blue building. It was pandemonium. You could see all the aliens running through the clear glass windows. What was going on ? Was there something bad going on? But it turned out they were only going for dinner ......
Which I probably should be doing now.... BYE

kate

11/10/2015 04:47:01 am

One day, I was on my way to a music competition for schools. I was there with me school, obviously. It was really noisy and busy because there were lots of schools and that means lots of singing and that means lots of noise! THEN, IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NOISE... I saw a sudden movement. But just then I remembered the poster read the host is a surprise pop star. I think the person I saw walking towards back stage was the pop star because I recognised his coat with the band logo on. It was the biggest and noisiest band of all time. I love them!

Daniel

11/10/2015 05:04:51 am

One gloomy night, as I was trick or treating, I heard echoing around me. I listened... then, in the middle of the noise I heard the sound of a bloody knife getting scraped across the ground. The noisy sound of the doors creaking open and shut as they threw rotten, out of date, sweets into the children's bags. I went home later that night and did not know what was worse, the scary noises or that all of the sweets were out of date. So maybe next year on Halloween night I will just stay in and hand out my chocolate to my friends instead.

Amelia

11/10/2015 05:59:42 am

Hello I'm Charlie Bucket,can I tell you about the most amazing day of my life?

Well let me begin...
It all started when I had been given one more chance at finding a Golden ticket what everyone had been searching for over the last few months. Four tickets had already been found and there was only one more remaining! Grandpa Joe gave me some money but I knew I was never going to find it! Nervously, I gave the shopkeeper the money and he handed me another Whipple-Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight. Slowly, I opened the bar and to my surprise there it was!! Outside the shop people began cheering when the news spread.THEN, IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NOISE, I realised that my dream had come true...

ruby o

11/10/2015 07:55:51 am

Time for bonfire night we will go to Escomb pub at 6 0cloc. in excitement I lucked at the clock it said 5.30 I yeld and said to my dad we have only 30 minutes to get ready. So i quickly got ready .As soon as i was ready we had a gentle walk to the pub. THEN IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NOISE of the fireworks i herd a rustle in the bushes so i went to discover what was there. suprisingly
there was a alien from mars he had come to watch the fireworks with me

Emma

11/10/2015 09:08:27 am

One spooky Halloween night me and my best friend Paige, were about to go Trick or Treating, but the funny thing was that we were wearing the same costume, zombie school girls. We where just about to go and Trick or Treat and see Alicia and Elsa, then BAM, we ran and ran until we got to the top of the street to find Alicia and Elsa and then, in the middle of the noise was a voice that said who's there. We ran and ran all the way home and hid under a quilt

Alicia

11/10/2015 10:45:32 am

It was the Fourth of July and my mum and dad were off to celebrate the Independence Day in New York City. I also had my own celebration planned with all of my college friends. I had secretly arranged my own party in my house,my parents did not know anything about it. As soon as they left I made the signal in the garden and the flocks of Foxford high school came round.
The party was great fun and we were all having a fabulous time, people were singing to the loud music we had playing it was such a racquet when suddenly the front door opened, Then, in the middle of the noise my Mam shouted "everyone get out!"
Everyone quickly left and I was left to tidy up and work at the hotel next door for one week with no pay.

Tilly R

11/10/2015 12:16:56 pm

One gloomy day, I was going to a concert with my family and my friend Molly. We arrived there and we entered the loud noise. There was a person who did face painting so Molly and I jumped over there and I got my face painted as a dog and Molly got hers as a blue strawberry. We went over to the stage and then, in the middle of the noise the police came and everyone was told to go. We ran to the car and we drove as quickly as we could back home. When we got back home I went in the shower and after the shower I got a hot chocolate.

jessica O

12/10/2015 11:52:11 am

Whilst my friends Eve, Jess and I were building a den underneath the caravan we heard a big bang from the forest .We thought that some one was trying to kill rabbits but i didn't think that is actually happening. We continued to build our den and laugh and play...the, in the middle of the noise...then we decided to have something to eat. Jess's mum said we could go for lunch at her caravan. W had cucumber, tomatoes, wraps, pizza with chips and to drink I had a glass of milk whilst Eve and Jess had a glass of lemonade.

Connor

12/10/2015 12:06:31 pm

At the weekend we went on a train to London and stayed in a really cool hotel. The next day we went to the Chelsea v Newcastle match at Stamford Bridge, then in the middle of the noise Cahill scored a goal and the crowd went wild . At half time we went to get a meat pie and a can of pop and my dad had a pint of lager. Chelsea won the match 3 nil and it was a really exciting match. We went to get some tea and caught the train home and mam picked us up in the car.

casper

13/10/2015 07:42:58 am

At first we were only rookies and needed lots more training. After getting debriefed we went and trained day and night until we were ready to fight the Sith. We went from planet to planet and after searching 19 planets we came to the Lavermount system on the way to the rondiview point. The Army insisted we came to check something out on the way we heard something unstable. Then in middle of the nose the engine exploded into flames. Then boom! We crash me and my cousin managed to survive the crash and collected the supplies to make basecamp.

thomas

13/10/2015 11:31:02 am

One night I get invited to a disco so I get dressed smart for the disco and head of to the disco at twenty past seven. I run down the corrie doors and slam open the doors and I say to myself wow this is a crazy amazing loud disco with wired people in it. Then in the middle of the noise some one asked me if I wanted a nice brew so, I said yeah go on then 2 mins later there he is standing in the grand que with scruffy people in it. There stood right in front of me there you go “arrrrgghhh”.

rubya

13/10/2015 12:41:30 pm

Homework

I am in America visiting my friends in Kansas; it was a scorching hot day and i was was enjoying a picnic with my best friends Caroline, bethie and tiba when I looked up at the sky I noticed some angry looking black clouds in the distance, I said to bethie I hope it doesn’t rain, she said she thought it looked more like thunder, at that I heard I loud howling noise, oh my goodness what’s that? Tiba said thats a tornado alarm! We need to move fast and get into the under ground bunker , up we got and started to run as fast as we could in the middle of all the noise it was hard not to panic but we managed to get to the bunker. Then suddenly i was awake the noise i heard wasn’t a tornado alarm, it was my alarm clock!!!!!!!!!

James

13/10/2015 11:24:48 pm

Homework

One day I walked to my Nana's house for Sunday dinner and when I reached my destination the rest of the family was already there! My cousins ,Jacob and Ben, wanted to play with me like always so I said ok it took a while to decide what game to play but we settled on dinosaurs ,Ben is SO loud you could hear him from a mile away! Then ,in the middle of the noise a large explosion erupted from nowhere ,everyone rushed outside to see what was going on. We saw an unusual monster wriggling towards us and everyone ran inside apart from me ,I ran home and grabbed my bow and arrow to fight.

Kelsi

14/10/2015 08:46:24 am

This weekend I went to watch Disney on Ice at the Metro Arena with my mam and dad. The show was presented by Mickey and Minnie Mouse. During the show we watched Toy story, the little mermaid, cars and my favourite Frozen. I sang along to all the songs, then In the middle of the noise and music there was a big bang this was to represent summer turning to winter it gave my mam me a bit of a jump as we were not expecting it.

I enjoyed my night out with my mam and dad and look forward to doing it again soon.

Tilly B

14/10/2015 11:44:49 am

When I was walking through the woods, it seemed like the most beautiful place anyone could ever see. The wind was howling, blowing the leaves and trees. Then in the middle of the noise, a branch snapped, so I looked up to see what it was. In the tree there was a nest and on the branch was a heron, spreading its wings ready for take off, and there it went, off into the slowly darkening sky. So I kept on walking through the enchanted wood, but it looked like the heron was following me. I was scared at first, but I’m not afraid any longer.

Deyla

15/10/2015 10:11:30 am

Everybody screaming and shouting “the guards; look! look! The guards are coming through the streets!” There I was standing at the front of the crowd… In London, watching the changing of the guards. Then, in the middle of the noise a shrill whistle was blown “quiet please!” shouted a police officer who was stumbling through the crowd. Suddenly trumpets began to blow and a beautiful gold carriage was pulled across the path. “The QUEEN!” Somebody who was rather overexcited yelled, breaking the silence. Sure enough the Queen was inside the beautiful carriage waving as she passed by. I was ecstatic. I’d seen the Queen!!!

Lucas

17/10/2015 06:50:28 am

The stadium was going wild then, in the middle of the noise came a loud booming voice. It was the England Captain shouting at his team to try harder to win the game. “Come on England you can win this” he bellowed at the top of his voice.
They pushed harder in the scrum and made every tackle count, but still Australia fought through their defence. Australia were quick off the mark scoring try after try making conversions count. England were no match for this on-form team coming second place, losing the game by a large number of points.

Ethan W

23/11/2015 12:37:42 am

On the year 2010 the queens jubilant was rehursed at Buckingham palace.Later that day there was a noise for the queens 50th year of ruling throughout that noise I was jumping,clapping and cheering all at the same time. Then in my estate me and my friends decided to go to a party that was being hosted at the top of my estate. So later that day we went to the party to see what it was all about but non of us really liked it. So then my mum said she'd take us all for Sunday lunch

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