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We have another part sentence prompt. This week there is a capital letter at the beginning so it needs to go at the beginning of your sentence.
…As the flashing lights came towards me… Think about the setting before you start your writing. Where are you?
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michael
2/10/2015 10:34:31 am
As the flashing lights came towards me I knew it was the cops. Evan though I never done any thing I was cutting a plant down from some private property what was wrong with that. I opened the bag what the plant was in while I was driving a Shelby cobra. I had plenty other cars and my favourite was my Lamborghini Aventador and Gallardo. I wized through the city of new York with the cop son my trail.
Liam M
2/10/2015 11:07:51 am
As the flashing lights came towards me I stood and froze as I realised I was near a dangerous crime scene. I heard doors slamming as the police ran from their cars to secure the crime scene. A helicopter was dropping SWAT to the ground next to the bank. There were many people running out the bank to safety but the police didn’t realise that the robbers escaped into the crowd. One policeman noticed a member of the crowd acting suspicious and walked towards him, but before he could reach him, the robber dropped the money, ran away and escaped.
thomas
2/10/2015 12:21:39 pm
ruby o
3/10/2015 12:55:47 am
OMG! are we really going to see little mix tonight. Yes we are my mam replayed. My sister huffed and puffed really stupid little mix again. AGAIN i haven't seen them once stop laughing you. STOP fighting and get ready because we are going know. yes, no said Bethany. We both came down Bethany had here phone to play on when we are watching. Hear we are kids! Mam why are little mix stood at the door i don't know you tell me.Come sing!now because your late i cot nerves as the flashing light came towards me.
LUCY.B
3/10/2015 05:45:07 am
"I'm so nervous!" It was show night my mam is watching so that doesn't help at all! The rehearsals went fine, great actually. But today was it, getting recorded as well. In my first outfit. "Time to go backstage," whispered Michelle, as she lined us up in order. As the flashing lights came towards mean the slippy stage,I almost got blinded they were that bright. Ending position. "Well done!" Screamed someone in the audience. Off stage I couldn't see a thing. I was sticking to my friend Tireney.
Tilly R
3/10/2015 09:14:45 am
One stormy night, with clouds hovering above my head, I took my big, cuddly, brown dog out for a walk. We strolled throw the woods like a lost fox, and we stopped on this old rotting wooden bench. We came out the forest and we were crossing the road, and I saw some flashing lights coming towards us. As the flashing lights came towards me, my dog started to barking loudly. They stopped next to us and it was my best friend liv. Liv and I went to school together. I said hi and liv said do you won't a ride home and I said yes.
grace
4/10/2015 12:33:17 am
Monday,6:30pm. Emily and I were playing in my bedroom, doing
Ethan Stokes
4/10/2015 01:56:15 am
The Blue wolf was falling from a tree that over hung the white crispy snow, suddenly he crashed to the ground, moments later he woke up, as the flashing lights came towards him the panic was rising rapidly, he tried to make a run for it but the hunters caught him, tied him up and threw him into the back of a mysterious truck. After trying to bite the rope off he finally did it, now he just needed to jump up and grab the shiny handle to open the door so he did just that, before he knew it Blue wolf was free racing back to his pack-family!
Daniel
4/10/2015 02:41:00 am
One stormy night I was sitting in front of the fire waiting for the storm to pass. Strokes of lighting was drifting closer to the house. As the flashing lights came towards me I was getting scared. The sky turned pitch black I could not see anything apart from the light of the fire. Suddenly the fire went out I drifted off to sleep. Then it was morning and it was still pitch black but the kitchen light was on I went to investigate. I saw nothing. Soon it was light again and I went to my car to see if it was damaged. Luckily it wasn't.
kate
4/10/2015 03:01:23 am
One day as I strolled in the park, I bumped into a sales man. He was sitting on a table with a huge sign above. It read: Sign up for the world’s biggest run. Get a free eye test today if you do! Anyway I needed an eye test by the end of the month so I did it, I signed up for the world’s biggest run. I trained very hard to get here today. When the day came I saw something bright. AS THE FLASHING LIGHTS CAME TOWARDS ME I could see it was the press because I had my new glasses on. Thanks sales man!
Alicia
4/10/2015 03:21:07 am
One day I was having a peaceful stroll through my local park with my four legged friend Max the strangest thing happend to me. Max started to run up ahead as something must of caught his eye, I could see him scratching something on the ground and his tall was wagging quickly. He was looking at me and started to bark I knew we wanted my attention, I started to run faster towards what he was digging up. Then suddenly the sky started to go grey and then black, I then heard some whirling noises coming from the sky and I felt something hovering above me. As the flashing lights came towards me I saw a gigantic spaceship above me. It's bright lights shone above where Max was stood and in the flash of a light Max was gone. The darkness then lifted and the sky turned back blue, but Max was not seen
Connor
4/10/2015 04:02:05 am
This weekend we went to the farm to see the animals , there were pigs , sheep, cows, rabbits, ferrets and horses . We also went to visit the baby chicks which we could hold and they were fluffy yellow little chicks .At lunchtime we had picnic with our cousins we were so hungry we ate all our lunch.Later that day there was going to be a fireworks display and we were very excited.
deyla
4/10/2015 05:13:31 am
All I could hear was the extremely loud live rock music blasting out from behind us. “I wish they would turn the amplifier volume down a touch,’’ Melissa groaned whilst ramming her hands over her ears and thumping her elbows on the table. “I know it would help if there was one room in this building where you couldn't hear this music!!”.We spun round to glare.As the flashing lights came towards me I exclaimed “Close your eyes Melissa!”before a swirl of bright light hit us. “Oh well at least its nearly time for the sleepover”
Amelia
4/10/2015 06:42:59 am
One Saturday morning, I quickly rushed out of bed and felt really excited because I was going to perform in front of millions of people with my best friends Lilly, Phoebe,Grace and Emily! Then I had my breakfast, changed into a beautiful dress and raced into the car. As I was travelling to Durham Gala l started to get butterflies in my tummy. I was beginning to feel nervous, I had never ever been on stage before.We were going to play our Violins.At least the Violin teacher was with us so we didn't make any mistakes. Now it was our turn! AS THE FLASHING LIGHTS CAME TOWARDS ME I felt more nervous as the Show went on. At the end everyone was cheering for us,I was so proud. When we were home I had a long rest.
Casper
4/10/2015 09:52:11 am
We walked to the deer house but we got lost. We looked on our phone, the battery became flat we were defiantly lost, what we didn’t know was that we were in the Trolls territory. ’’ Some people are in my land!’’ said the Troll, We came to a halt when we saw the Troll. The Troll attacked me and dragged me to his lair. I managed to escape. As the flashing lights came towards me, I knew I was almost out of the trolls cave. I turned right and hid behind a rock, I made a break for it.
SCARLET
4/10/2015 11:41:01 am
Their was a little girl who always wanted to be a rock star so this is a story about how she became one.Roxie was 10 and she was playing a song for her friends unknown to her in the audience was a talent scout. He talked to Roxie's father after the gig and said she could be a superstar in a few years with enough practice. 6 years later the talent scout came to audition her.After he gave her the results. "You can go out on stage!" She was on stage and she sang."As the flashing lights came towards me I felt like I could sing,dance to my hearts desire. She became a rock star.
Jessica
5/10/2015 08:34:08 am
Yesterday I went to Spennymoor Swimming Pool with my Dad and it was so much fun. Afterwards I went to buy some flowers as it was Grandparents Day. Dad and I then drove to my Grandparent house to surprise them - they liked the flowers. Whilst I was there was my cousin and her boyfriend where there too. After I had been there we drove home and I played on Minecraft for a minute then I had a movie night with my Dad and it was so much fun. We also watched Despicible Me which had flashing lights that came towards me.
James
5/10/2015 11:10:31 am
Homework
Tilly B
5/10/2015 12:58:01 pm
Meteors were everywhere. The sky was darkening quickly. Houses collapsed, people were going mad, and it was pandemonium. Explosions were happening in a blink of an eye.
Sol
6/10/2015 10:53:52 am
As the flashing lights came towards me I felt frightened as I thought the police were coming to arrest me. I was standing at the petrol station. I turned around and saw a man with a gun robbing the petrol station. I panicked and felt paralysed and couldn't move. After a few seconds I jumped behind a car in case he started shooting at me. The man behind the counter looked terrified and began to empty the till. At this point five police cars surrounded the petrol station and shout for the man to drop his gun and throw the money to them. He came out and started shooting at the police. At the last minute, a policeman snook behind the man and forced him to drop his gun. He was then arrested and taken away to jail.
RUBYA
6/10/2015 11:23:46 am
AS THE FLASHING LIGHTS CAME TOWARDS ME I FROZE IT WAS AS BRIGHT AS LIGHTNING AND AS LOUD AS THUNDER I FELT LIKE SOMEBODY TRIED TO KILL ME. I WAS SO PETRIFIED I RAN BUT IT WAS DARK AND EVERY WHERE I TURNED I FELL THIS MADE ME FEEL WORSE, I TIRED SO HARD TO PULL THE WALL BUT THEY WAS GOING ANY WHERE. I SAID TO MY SELF OH I HOPE TO WIPE THAT GRINN OF YOUR FACE.I HEARD MY MUM IN MY MIND SAYING DONT WORRIE HAVE COURAGE AND YOULL BE FINE SWEET HEART THIS MADE ME CRY.
Kelsi
7/10/2015 02:12:02 am
I was walking the dog back to from my aunties house with my mum and dad, we had been to a party at her house. It was late at night and the roads and streets were quiet all of a sudden the night air was filled with the sound of sirens. As the flashing lights came towards me I wondered what was happening, the sound of the sirens was loud as the fire engine, police and ambulance whet speeding past me up the road. I asked my dad were he thought they were going but he didn’t know he said it looked like there must have been a fire somewhere.
Lucas.Gaines
12/10/2015 11:36:56 am
A big fire started at our house in the kitchen so we had to evacuate the house and get outside. Once outside we called 999 to get the fire brigade to come and help us. All the neighbours came out of their houses to try to help us. We heard the siren coming. As the flashing lights came towards me we all waved to show them where to come, there was smoke everywhere. They got out of the fire engine and put their breathing apparatus on, they made everybody stand back and put barrier up to stop us getting too close. They put the fire out quickly.
Ethan w
22/11/2015 01:26:20 pm
One morning In Bethlehem I was in bed sleeping until I woke up to my wife screaming I was shocked because she usually sleeps like baby but I went in there was a BRIGHT LIGHT IT CAME TOWARDS ME I HID and listened but I couldn't hear so I approached until I heard I had a baby his name was Jesus Christ then 2 minutes later a massive bang was to be heard from a mile away Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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