100 Word Challenge #2

11/9/2015

This week you have 5 words that must be put into your writing. They can be in any order but must all be there. The words are:

Pepper Crocodile Orange Forgot Soft

It would help me greatly if you could highlight the words in bold so I can see them in your writing.

Good Luck!

36 Comments

ruby o

11/9/2015 09:34:14 am

one misty morning I began to walk down the creeky stairs and i forgot it was my birthday so i had to wake everyone up. As soon as i woke everybody up we all headed down stairs my dad went down first to see if i had been a good girl and my dad said come in. I was first to walk in. There was a big orange 9 year old balloon,presents and loads of cards. The first present was a paper note book because i realy like art and a soft crocodile teady

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:35:27 am

Good work Ruby. You have included most of the challenge words. I like the use of short and longer sentences.

Liam M

11/9/2015 10:45:31 am

One day I went to the zoo. We went to see the long CROCODILE and it was scary. I then went to the cafe and had sandwiches with PEPPERS in and an ORANGE. I FORGOT my coat so I bought a SOFT jacket which kept me warm like being in bed. Later on a person was showing a parrot and the parrot flew past me in a flash. There was a baby tiger trying to get up on the mountain. I then got an ice cream with a flake on top of it. My favourite animal was the baby tiger.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:37:01 am

Well done Liam. You have included all of the challenge words within your writing. You have used a range of openers within your writing. If the crocodile was scary, use punctuation to tell me that! (Hint)

James

11/9/2015 11:01:37 am

Homework
The magic orange crocodile lives in a giant palace in the centre of the swamp.
He's allergic to soft peppers but every day he forgot about it because he has TERRIBLE memory no human ever pays attention to him manly because he looks like an orange with a crocodile's face drawn on it using a permanent marker, I know it's a weird sight but he is very powerful and you don't want to be around with when he's angry.Anyway,one unusual day he tried to eat a pepper again for breakfast and after about an hour he recovered and went for a walk in the forest as soon as he stepped outside he already knew it was going to be strange day.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:38:30 am

A good effort James. Well done for including all of the challenge words. I found it very amusing that the crocodile was allergic to the soft peppers!

Amelia

12/9/2015 08:58:54 am

Once when the bright sun was dazzling in the sky, I saw a crocodile walk down my street! At least l thought that, but body else believed me! He had soft claws and bumpy skin. Suddenly I remembered my dad had some pepper spray stored in the garage. Slowly trying not to disturb this dangerous beast, I crept towards the garage but I was so scared I forgot to read the label. Accidentally, I picked up my mam's spray tan and rushed back outside. Quickly I sprayed the beast and all at once he was orange!

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:39:35 am

Good use of the comma Amelia. I love the ending. This is a very clever and effective piece of writing, and one no doubt that will ever be repeated.

Grace

13/9/2015 01:01:50 am

One sunny day we went to Hamsterly Forest for a picnic with all of our friends. First we went in the park and Seb lost his Thomas the train toy because he had FORGOT where he had placed it down whilst going down the slide but then we found it behind a little boy's CROCADILE toy. Next we had a picnic with lots of snacks and the ORANGES were so juicy and for some reason the grapes and cherry tomatoes were so soft. Our sauce stand that we have got is really cool because it has tomato, mustard salt and pepper AWESOME !!! we had a great day !!!

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:40:30 am

Good work Grace. You have included all of our challenge words within your writing.You have used time connectives.

kate

13/9/2015 03:00:09 am

Once there lived a lonely CROCODILE who was named FORGOT because he always forgot what he needed to do. Yesterday, Forgot forgot to pick a PEPPER off his Pepper tree so he could have his dinner. Now he had no dinner to eat! But Forgot found a ORANGE in front of the great orange cave where there was lots of oranges. He felt the orange and it was soft. He smelt the orange and it smelt like a fresh flower. He looked at the orange and it was a perfect shape. He eat the orange and it was...bitter!

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:41:40 am

Interesting challenge writing Kate. I like the idea behind the story. Check your tense. He eat the orange or he ate the orange?

Alicia

13/9/2015 03:18:48 am

One day Mr PEPPER decided to go for a walk to salt water lake, It was a favourite walk of his especially with his pet dog Max. As he set off he remembered that he had FORGOT Max's stick he couldn't walk Max without his special stick that he normally plays fetch with.
As they got closer to the lake he saw something glistening on the edge of the lake amongst the reeds. It neon ORANGE and gianormous, as he got closer he could see that it was moving slightly and watching him every step he took.
Mr Pepper walked up to the large orange object to see that it was a enormous crocodile. Mr pepper turned to run however the bright orange crocodile said "don't be afraid I am not a scary CROCODILE I am very SOFT".The crocodile explained that he had become separated from his family when they were migrating to Austrailia for winter.
They chatted for a little while and Mr Pepper pointed the crocodile in the direction of South and off the crocodile swam. Mr Pepper walked back home with Max not quite believing what had just happened to him. He sat down on his favourite arm chair and fell asleep. Hours later he woke up and realised it was all a dream. He still had Max to walk, this time he didn't go to Salt Water Lake and took a different route just in case.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:43:39 am

A very detailed piece of writing Alicia. In fact almost 2 1/2 challenges in one. I really liked the attention to detail within this and how you have really drawn the reader in.

michael

13/9/2015 03:30:48 am

Once there lived a fierce crocodile who had three baby's named Croono ,Charlotte and Oh. All three baby's were not fierce but all kind and gentle. Oh was as clumsy as a puppy ,he had a soft orange love heart pillow. Croono and Charlotte were basically the same because they acted like each other in a way. When they grew up they were very clever since they went to crocodile school. Croono became a science and maths teacher and after a few years Croono became the head teacher of the crocodile school named croco lane. Charlotte became a English teacher but she forgot a lot.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:44:43 am

Good use of the simile within your writing Michael. You have also used a comma to denote a clause. What other punctuation could we use next time?

michael

27/9/2015 09:21:07 am

I don't know? But I will think of some spectacular punctuation

daniel

13/9/2015 04:17:19 am

Once there was a CROCODILE called Chop Chop. He lived with his friend Dunker. Dunker is a shark who is desperate for food and never stops eating. Chop Chop on the other hand, loves fish. One day he screeched to the shark “want to go diving for fish?” So off they went strolling down the road to the beach. On the beach they stumbled upon one of the largest fish ever. It was ORANGE and soft. Dunker caught it and cooked it on a scorching hot fire. But they FORGOT to the bring PEPPER. So they had it with soggy seaweed and it was disgusting.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:45:49 am

Good work Daniel. You have included speech within your writing. I like the adjectives used. If something was disgusting, use punctuation to tell me about it!

LucyB

13/9/2015 05:27:56 am

Lilly was playing out with her friends when she suddenly remembered that she was going to the zoo. "Oh no I forgot that I was going to the zoo!" Lilly set off with her mam and dad, wearing a bright orange jumper. While they were walking Lilly didn't realise that her soft fluffy teddy bear was missing. She began to cry only crocodile tears though. Finally the had arrived. All the animals were very fascinating. It was time for a break in a cafe Lilly tried for the first time a red pepper. "Hot, hot, hot too hot!" He snatched it out of her hands and eat it up.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:48:49 am

Good effort Lucy! I like the use of description within your writing and the use of short and complex sentences.

Sol Barker

13/9/2015 09:19:43 am

Today i went to my Nana's house for Sunday lunch it was a roast beef dinner. the potato was very SOFT, the carrots were bright ORANGE, the gravy and Yorkshire puddings were delicious for everyone else but not me as i don't like them. i FORGOT to add salt and PEPPER. to the full meal it was tasteless and boring. afterwords i sat with my granddad to relax and watch a programme on TV about CROCODILE'S in the Amazon river.I found the programme very interesting and was amazed by how they survive in the wild, although i would not like to work close to them as they could be dangerous.

Mr Turner

16/9/2015 10:49:35 am

Well done Sol. You have included all of the challenge words. Remember to include capital letters at the start of a sentence.

Tilly R

14/9/2015 09:25:41 am

One morning I was laid in my soft bed, and I was thinking what can we do today? I thought we can go down to the lake and see the crocodile. We got to the lake and I forgot my lunch so we bought one there, and in my lunch was a sandwich, orange, pepper and a yogurt. I started to eat my lunch but I forgot to eat my pepper (I didn't eat my pepper because I didn't like it) After we ate all our lunch we went and saw the crocodile. After, we went to the park and I went on the the swings and, my dad pushed me.

scarlet

14/9/2015 10:59:50 am

I am at school and my homework is to feed a CROCODILE a hot ORANGE PEPPER. When I do it I need a SOFT pillow so it does not bite me to hard. I FORGOT my SOFT pillow and this is what happened, so I went to the zoo, and I asked the zoo keeper if I could feed the CROCODILE an ORANGE PEPPER and he said yes and he came with me for safety. Unfortunately the CROCODILE bite my arm and the zoo keeper had to wrest the CROCODILE to save me and my arm, My arm was broken, oh dear.

Kelsi

14/9/2015 11:11:55 am

One rainy day I woke up got dressed and went down stairs, I went into the kitchen to get some breakfast and a drink of orange juice. once I finished I brushed my hear and brushed my teeth.
I put a soft coat on and went out to play on my crocodile scooter. Later on that day I went shopping with my mam because she forgot the peppers for tea we where making home made pizza with pepper topping and chicken slices with ketchup and grated cheese. after tea it was time for my dad to wash up all the dirty plates, pots and pans and put them away.

Emma

14/9/2015 12:18:30 pm

Tomorrow it is my friend Pepper's birthday. She is 10 and she wanted a soft, cuddly, orange crocodile off, me but I had forgotten to buy the it, so I rushed to the shop. Luckily there were 5 left, I quickly grabbed the orange one and strolled to the counter to pay for it. I was using my pocket money, but didn't have enough to pay for it. My mam felt sorry for me and gave me the rest of the money.
The next day, I got dressed and went to Peppers party. I gave her the present and she was delighted, to see she got the present she was hoping for. We partied all day.

Casper

14/9/2015 12:21:05 pm

While on my holiday in Australia we visited a zoo with all kind of animals like CROCODILES, penguins, bats, and an otter. We all had a chance to hold a koala bear my mum said it was very heavy. They like to eat leaves and there fur is SOFT and fluffy, we saw a ORANGE Orang-utan in its huge cage. We had a picnic for lunch, we had sausages, steak and couscous. We cooked the meat on the barbecue and dad FORGOT to pack the PEPPER. I had a really fun day but I didn’t really like feeding the kangaroo.

Thomas

14/9/2015 12:56:35 pm

In Africa the orange sun shines brightly as I waddle along the beach soft sand in between my toes. Two hours later I reach the rain forest. Deep down in the undergrowth I spot something extremely extraordinary, an undiscovered species of crocodile. Later I go for a delicious meal with my amazing family walking along by my side for my meal. I scoff it down because it is too nice to take my time with. I have fish and chips I put on some pepper and it makes me sneeze. I thought about what I might have done today but I forgot what I did.

Lucas.Gaines

15/9/2015 11:01:41 am

Orange is the new green in crocodile style this season.
Snappy, an 8 foot 2 inch crocodile, is sporting orange skin and he’s looking fabulous and feeling fine!
But it’s not really a fashion statement. It’s because he has eaten too many orange peppers that people visiting the enclosure at Roaming Reptiles Animal Park in Australia had given him. Snappy has always had a soft spot for peppers, “I’m sure he’s forgot that he’s a crocodile” laughed his owner.
Snappy is expected to go back to his normal colour eventually, but only if he stops eating so many orange peppers!!!

RUBYA

15/9/2015 01:07:08 pm

YESTERDAY ME AND MY FRIEND BEAR GRILLS WENT TO THE AMAZON RIVER , DO YOU KNOW THATS IN BRAZIL ,UNFORTUNATLY I FORGOT MY ORANGE DESIGNER AFTER SUN !!,AS WE WALKED THROUGH THE SOFT SQUIDGY WET SOIL AND LEAVES MY FEET STARTED TO GET AWFULLY SOGGY AND VERY UNCOMFORTABLE THE MUD HAD SOAKED THROUGH MY SHOES.
SUDDENLY BEAR SHOUTED RUN , RUBY RUN !!! THERE IN OUR PATH WAS THE BIGGEST CROCADILE YOU HAVE EVER SEEN , IT WAS GREEN WITH BLOOD DRIPPING FROM ITS HUGE JAWS, LOOKING AT US LIKE WE WERE TO BE ITS NEXT MEAL.
SUDDENLY I REALISED THAT BEAR HAD LEFT ME, SO I STARTED RUNNING AND SCREACHING AT THE TOP OF MY VOICE BEAR,,, BEAR HELP,THEN I HEARD A FAMILIAR VOICE SHOUTING FOR HELP, BEAR HAD BEEN BITTEN BY THE CROCODILE, BUT CLEVER BEAR THINKING ON HIS FEET THREW PEPPERIN THE CROCS FACE, THE COC GAVE A BIG SNEEZE AND BEAR MADE A SPEEDY ESCAPE,,

Emily

15/9/2015 01:16:16 pm

One day, my friend and I went on a picnic at the park!
We had to go to the shops first for our sandwiches though, I picked ham and secretly sneaked an orange in the basket and Carla picked a salad.We reached the park and we laid the soft blanket on the floor, we grabbed our sandwiches and sat down!
"OH, NO" Carla shrieked!
Then it went silent, after about a minute of drinking water, Carla said "It has an incredibly hot pepper in this!"
All of a sudden a sock puppet popped from behind the bush and said "I'm a scary crocodile"
We jumped out of our skin, it was Ben, Carla's brother!
"What are you doing Ben" asked Carla.
"I forgot my football boots and mam has locked the door!"replied Ben "Do you have the spare key?"

Ethan s

19/9/2015 02:36:31 am

One misty morning down at the swamp laid a crocodile, but one young boy did not know about the crocodile, so there he went strolling along the marshland with a pepper and orange sandwich in his back pack. At last he sat down on some soft mossy grass! When he was packing away he started to hunt around for his fire kit but then he realised that when he was packing his bag he forgot to put it in, he must of left it on the kitchen table, he started heading back and saw a toad crossing the path, then lots of toads followed latter!

Ethan W

30/9/2015 08:39:27 am

One night I had a dream about a crocodile made out of peppers and loved soft oranges but he had forgot what happened to his parents and if he didn't know no one did. bish bash bosh FLASHBACK
well when he was a young baby croc he loved playing out with his alli and croc friends but one night when he came home his parents were not there hi looke high low left and right still no sign of them his friends thought he was joking but when they went home there parents were not there no one new were they had gone when there parents did say they where moving out well they all thought they wondered for ages probablys 22yr

Lucy Etherington

2/10/2015 09:37:29 am

Once there was a CROCODILE that was named PEPPER and lived in a zoo, he was vegetarian and every week if he was good he would get an ORANGE carrot, he was very old and would FORGET things a lot! He’s old so he doesn't really like being in a zoo because children are always being so loud and annoying because they always win the easy games like “grab a bag” and get little SOFT toys also there are always people crowding around his cage and screaming because there mums and dads say “it’s going to eat you all up!”

Jessica o

7/10/2015 10:55:33 am

One morning my mum woke me up so early, I forgot, its because my mum had to Groom some dogs today. I woke up thinking today is going to be a good day because I am going to my Grandma and Grandads and sleep in there soft comfortable bed. I finally made it to Grandad and Grandmas house .... it is going to be fun. When i saw that my mum left i went in and I had something to eat and it was delicious we had peppers and cucumber sandwiches. The peppers where orange and my Grandma cut the cumber and it looked like Crocodile teeth.

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