100 word challenge # 2

28/1/2014

The prompt this week needs you to put these 5 words into your writing somewhere.

…GRAND PINK GORILLA BICYCLE
LAUGHED…

They can be in any order but all 5 must be there. If you can use your IT skills to highlight them, it would really help your readers see that you have included them all. That means your piece should be 105 words long.

Please take care of your linking and make sure your writing makes sense. Read it through before you publish!

27 Comments

Jacob

28/1/2014 12:32:51 am

Once upon a time there lived an enormous, fat, pink gorilla who despised exercise. All of a sudden his TV signal went dead so he swung up to his tree house top and wiggled his antennae about ferociously. A shiny golden lamp crashed down from heaven and hit the gorillas head,he then rubbed the lamp and guess what?, a monkey who was wearing jewellery said, " if you have a ride on your bicycle I will make you the grand champion of bike riding." So he grabbed the bicycle and started peddling so fast he flew of his bike and in to the pool of water. Then all the animals laughed at him, and the gorilla became the champion.

Jake

29/1/2014 09:49:01 pm

Well done friend

emily

14/2/2014 02:52:45 am

yere really good

Ben 2

28/1/2014 11:57:04 pm

Amazing story Jacob

Mr Temple

29/1/2014 01:53:03 am

Fantastic idea, Jacob! I was impressed by the word 'despised' and your adverb 'ferociously'. I think your writing is so exciting it deserves a ! - where would you put it?

Jacob

29/1/2014 09:49:28 pm

Thank you for this comment Mr Temple I really appreciate it

Mr Turner

29/1/2014 07:06:35 pm

Well done, Jacob! So this is the pink gorilla you were keen to discuss with me in class. I'm really impressed with the work you have been producing recently, both inside and outside of class. I agree with Mr Temple - where could you plavce a !

Millie

31/1/2014 02:01:42 am

Long long ago an ancient gorilla who loved styling did something impossible ... Well for a grand, hostile gorilla. Due to his lack of ex resize, the gorilla laughed and magically made a original, unique bicycle with just grass and banana skins! Obviously it collapsed so the gorilla was depressed in a hairy way. Determined and focused he had another idea HE WAS GOING TO DYE HIS HAIR PINK! Made with just flowers he dyed himself pink. Unlucky for him his apparel hair has been laughed at by the other gorillas so unfortunately he dived into the nearest pond and washed uncontent.

Erin

31/1/2014 04:27:55 am

Once there was a gorilla. He wore a massive pink ballet dress, it was fluffy. He never took it off. Until, one day a little boy wearing a dress the same as the gorilla's dress.The little boy was riding a small bicycle.The boy was laughing at the Gorilla because he was in a tree. What a strange thing. The boy laughed and laughed.

molly 1

31/1/2014 05:58:47 pm

This story starts with a cage containing five, pink gorillas and a large bunch of bananas hanging above some stairs in the middle of the cage. Before long the grand gorilla goes to the stairs and starts and starts climbing towards the bananas. As he touches the stairs, all the gorillas got squirted with cold water. After a while another gorilla makes an attempt on a bicycle, but same results-all the gorillas got sprayed with cold water. Everytime a gorilla tries to reach the bananas the others are sprayed. Eventually they try leaving the bananas alone. But all they did was laughed!

Abby

31/1/2014 06:03:28 pm

Long ago lived a gorilla he was mighty and strong and could ride two bicycles at once. He lived in a grand mansion full of gold, gold and more should I say gold. Every night he tucked into bed watching the funniest films and all the way through the night he would laugh and laugh until he was laughed out. Every morning he would grab his bicycle and set of to the news agents. He would always get a newspaper and a pink chocolate bar every morning and gobble down the chocolate bar on the way home. After that he would rest all day.

Elizabeth

31/1/2014 10:55:44 pm

One day in the middle of nowhere, Henrietta was riding her neon pink bicycle along the narrow winding paths of the countryside. Henrietta was in a jolly, wolly mood, singing to herself. Suddenly out of the corner of her eye, Henrietta saw a grand dark shadow. To her amusement a gorilla peddling his bicycle was catching up to her. Henrietta began to peddle as fast as her little legs could go but Mr gorilla was peddling fast too. Now Mr gorilla was riding beside her, he pull at his black, fluffy mane. Mr gorilla was a disguise for George, Henrietta's brother.
As this was the first time Henrietta had adventured on a bike ride herself George thought it wise to follow her from a distance, to ensure that his little sister stayed safe. George and Henrietta laughed all the way home.

Lauren

31/1/2014 11:12:28 pm

Once opon a time there was a pink gorilla and as you can see she's a girl ,the gorilla wore a violet tutu she suited it . She loved stuffing her pink fluffy face with custard pies. The other animals thought she was a diccrase even the slugs were sticking there ting slimy tounges out. So she went to go and and get a wash in the mud bath when she reached it she soaked her fury skin into the mud all of the other animals were astonished by how well she got washed it was amazing. When she got home she saw a little letter out side her door she opened the little letter and read these words : you can attend the grand ball she laughed with joy she decided to go on her pink bycicle the ball.

abbie

1/2/2014 11:36:13 pm

Once upon a time there was a pink Gorilla who lived in a jungle in the middle of nowhere .One day he decided to go for a walk through the jungle and swinging from tree to tree was a monkey.The monkey laughed at him because he was pink and then he said "follow me". So he followed him nervously and wandered where he was going.suddenly he stopped and in front of him was a grand bicycle.The only problem was he dIdn't know how to ride a bike so the monkey offered to help.After that he ride his bike everyday.

Romana

2/2/2014 12:49:28 am

A billion years ago when the world was young in a jungle there lived an lonely little baby gorilla called shika who was abandoned because he was different from all of the other gorillas in the jungle. You see he was pink. The only memory he had of his parents was an old and rusty bicycle which he learnt to ride really quickly for a six year old. In fact his dream was to become a famous bicycle rider where he would ride his bicycle throw the big green jungle feeling the whip of the wind as he went at top speed. One day he was riding his old bike when he saw a snake slithering beside him he looked down at it and saw its shiny and golden scales it looked very important so he stopped and put his big hairy feet on the ground with a thud . The snake stopped with him and said “you must be a very important gorilla look at your fur its pink”. Shika glowed bright red with delight and said happily “oh no I am not important bet you are though.” The snake looked up with tears of joy coming down his face he murmured something to shika saying “I am not important either by the way my names mintu I like your bicycle do you want to go for a ride?” Shika had never heard that someone liked his bicycle before so he happily told mintu “I would love to go for a ride with you and my names shika” So from then on shika and mintu raced throw the forest as fast as they could go a they laughed so much that they never got the thought that they were different they were just unique.

emily

14/2/2014 02:52:04 am

I really like your story Romana its really good well done

Ben 1

2/2/2014 01:39:29 am

Was my story good thanks for luking at it

Ben 2

2/2/2014 01:54:32 am

One miserable stormy day a fat pink gorilla named Fredrick was riding on his new bicycle that laughed whenever you hit the brakes. Then suddenly out of nowhere was a voice shouting " hello everyone a new competition is opening it's called the grand gorilla bicycle race". The gorilla practised as much as he could but unfortunately he couldn't enter because he wasn't old enough so for the rest of that night he climbed up his favourite tree, curled up into a ball and started crying.

ellie

2/2/2014 03:31:52 am

I am very exited because I am going to the zoo today.I only have ten minutes to get ready so I run up the stairs and through on my best grand pink dress .I slip on my wellies and me and my mum drive to the zoo ,she laughed at me.We joyfully wander into the zoo gates and see weird gorilla on a bycycle.We keep on walking and see a fierce looking tiger,then a monkey who was a magician."lets go home"mum said .So we went home and went straight to bed

Ava

2/2/2014 04:18:42 am

Jessie was a eight year old girl who lived with her mum and dad . Today was a very special day for Jessie because her mum and dad we're taking her to the zoo, Jessie had been waiting for this day forever because she loved animals. She had been told that there was a pink gorilla that lived there. Because it was a special day Jessie thought she would put her favourite dress on. When she arrived at the zoo she ran straight to the grand entrance,that's were she saw a monkey riding a bicycle . She thought it was really funny. Next they went and visited the gorillas but one of the them stood out from all the other gorillas because it was pink. Jessie laughed at him,started pointing and making fun of him so he walked away looking very upset. That's when Jessie's mum told her that you should never make fun of anyone no matter what colour they are or what size they are. Jessie said sorry and she would never do it again ,she never realised how hurtful she had been. Jessie and her family enjoyed the rest of the day at the zoo and all went home very happy.

pippa

3/2/2014 02:46:41 am

You’ve heard of Gangster Granny, but I bet you have never heard of Gangster the Gorilla. A cheeky gorilla named BOB aka Bags of Bananas! His favourite thing to do is steal the brightest, tastiest and biggest bananas .When Bob was little, his mother told him the story of gangster granny he loved it and it always made him laugh. As he got older he began to follow in gangster granny’s footsteps he did this by stealing whatever he could, he loved to steal he favourite food of all bananas .When he was much older he wanted to steal the most tastiest bananas so early Monday morning he set off out to Asda on his grand pink bicycle in the hope that his dream of stealing bags of bananas would come true.

Holly

3/2/2014 03:19:07 am

Everything was so strange! I walked around, the grass was pink and the sky was green. I was startled as a gorilla suddenly rode past me on a bicycle. In the distance I saw a man wearing a grand suit, I walked over to him but as soon as I stepped forward he vanished into thin air. I couldn't help laughing even though everything seemed so wrong. Suddenly, the ground started to shake, the wind howled and the gorrilas comically fell of their bicycles. A few moments later it stopped and to my amazment I was back home. What was going on?

isabelle

11/2/2014 05:12:42 am

Great story!

Jake

3/2/2014 03:06:25 pm

All the ecstatic people milled through the entrance of the grand big top and took their seats. The atmosphere was electric as they anticipated the start of the show. The circus Ring Master introduced the first act, the audience lent forward eagerly awaiting their arrival. The curtain opened and out rode Georgina the gorilla, she was wearing a fluorescent pink tutu and her bicycle was embellished with sparkly jewels. The crowd laughed as Georgina amused and delighted them with her tricks and stunts. The audience rose to their feet and applauded as she exited the floor. It was such an amazing sight to see.

Lewis

10/2/2014 01:44:44 am

Once upon a time lived a gorilla he was covered in pink fur he dyed it pink. The first colour fur he had was the colour brown. His habitat was a mysterious jungle in the middle of nowhere. He had a grand garage which is weird for a pink gorilla to have a garage. Inside he had a bicycle that laughed when you rang the bell it tickled him a lot. So in the garage there was a bed so that meant he slept in the garage every night. There was not that much space for any other animals.

isabelle

10/2/2014 04:16:17 am

Once there lived an old pink gorilla that had a very hunched back and he had a walking stick.one day a very energetic elephant came wizing down the bank on a grand bycicle doing tricks as he went.minutes later the elephant was going the speed of lightning until he hit a rather large rock so he flew over the handle bars and layed flat on the floor. The pink gorilla hesitated and called an ambulance. The ambulance raced over the hill with its loud flashing sirens . It finally reached the elephant but suddenly he rose up from the ground.suprisingly he started to laugh so the rest of them laughed. After that he got up and did some amazing tricks.

emily

11/2/2014 12:20:48 am

once apon a time along time ago there lived a family of gorrilas they worn't your nomal tipe you see they were pink. They were really popular untill one day a bicycle riding monkey came to the jungle he was stealing every body attention untill one day the family of pink gorrilas decided to try something new.What shall we do shall we do danecing or gymnastics untill jack the smallest gorrila said why don't we do some acting what a great idea they all said so when the bicycle riding monkey went to get a snack they decided to do it then.when they had finished they were so good that they got a grand part in greatest movie ever made goerge in the jungle.

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