100 word challenge # 17 - the last one - ESCOMB YEAR 5 CLASS BLOG

100 word challenge # 17 - the last one

11/7/2014

Our last prompt of the year is:

…but ‘I’m afraid it’s the last one’, he said…

Make this the best piece you have written. As we have been focusing on dialogue this week; please ensure that you include some.

Please make sure you complete this task as it is the last one.

And because you've worked well this year; here's something to watch

17 Comments

emily

11/7/2014 03:00:17 am

Today was the last day of school before its the school holidays. Y6 were doing there leavers play, I bet they cant't believe its the last day at Escomb primary school.They were doing grease witch was exciting.I was playing a gme of stuck in the mood when one of the Y6 's game over to me and all my friends "we are practising for are leavers play today but ‘I’m afraid it’s the last one’, he said " I hope you do well .

Erin

11/7/2014 06:33:02 am

The video is really funny

Erin

11/7/2014 06:40:40 am

It was a warm summers day in July and two brothers were arguing over a slice of cheese. One said "I got here first so I should have it!" but " I'm afraid its last one" he said to his brother. As the boys heard the door open slowly they dropped the cheese in shock. It was their mam. As they told their mam about the story of the cheese a little mouse came along a mouse and ate all the cheese up, which means the two brother that were arguing never got to eat the cheese after all.

Jacob

12/7/2014 05:49:07 pm

Ricky the rat always kept him self fit and strong, he often did twenty mile bike rides . Today was the rat swimming competition all the other rats were very fat they had no chance against Ricky well that is what he thought .the winner would get a big pot of chesse . Ricky found cheese irresistible. On his way to the champion ships he spotted some lovely mature chesse but poor old Ricky did not realise the cheese was a trap layed by the farmers wife Margret. He dived straight in . Bam! Ricky thought the cheese was delicious , but I'm afraid it's the last one he said as he said his last words on his way to rat heaven .

Pippa

12/7/2014 09:53:33 pm

I was on my way to Alton Towers. I had been waiting for this day all of the summer holidays .I’m really excited because I will be tall enough to go on the smiler this year. When we arrived the queue for the ride was extremely long, the waiting time was 3 hours .So my friends and I waited and waited and waited. The line was slowly going down, in the background I could hear screams of excitement. Finally after a 3 hour wait it was our turn to board the ride. OH no! The barrier has come down, a tired weary looking man said “but I’m afraid it’s the last one.”

Abby

13/7/2014 06:52:22 am

The packet of Oreos had almost come to an end. Only one Oreo remaining. He couldn't resist for any longer. His sister told him to eat it. He just couldn't. "I would but I'm afraid it's the last one." He said. In the end he realised that he was being stupid and so he ate the last remaining Oreo what in seconds turned into crushed pieces in his throat. Jack was begging to regret his mistake. He cried out in pain. He cried himself to sleep. His dream came to an end. And not long after he woke and saw his full Oreo packet staring at him in the eye.

Romana link

13/7/2014 07:39:03 am

Its still dark in the coal mine . The workers are still working ,trucks are still moving but the happiness is gone. I am Marcus . I work down in the dreaded coal mine . Its miserable down there , but I have made friends , there is Michael , john and Paul . We were strong men . Well you had to, to work in the mine . The dirty dust really slows you down five people this month left the mine and one I am sad to say died . Well he had worked in the mine for twenty years so what did he expect . But this is the day all that changed. We were working with dynamite all day to blow up some of the coal dangerous work really but it was all for our families. "Is there anymore dynamite Paul ! " I shouted . " Yes but I am afraid its the last one " he said. So as happy as happy can get a lit that stick of dynamite I through it as far away as I ... wait it was stuck on my hand . No really it was stuck on my hand ! I nearly fainted it was stuck it was stuck tight is was stuck I hesitated then ... BOOM ! My head still hurts my neck still broken. It was over my heart was sinking. In fact its sunk ... but its never sank.

Lewis

14/7/2014 02:11:15 am

It was still dark in the house I couldn't see a thing. It was so scary it was dangerous that I didn't see a thing because I could break one of my bones but all of a sudden ... I fell over some thing sharp and broke my leg and cut it really badly. I couldn't get up at all. But 'I' m afraid it's the last one" he said it's going to be all right.

Molly b

14/7/2014 03:06:49 am

Bob was afraid because it was the last day at school but it's the last one he said of my loving school and then I have to go to secondary school I'm so afraid if I get bullied my dad said that it is more likely to get bullied in secondary then primary HELP ME ! I will miss you all but at least my best freinds are going or are they ....

Holly

15/7/2014 04:18:37 am

The packet of sweets had come to an end. Only one haribo remaining. I could see the fear in his eyes was he going to give it to me , or Isabelle. "Give it here" I scream grabbing the packet out of his hand , an empty packet "Jacob!!" I shriek realising he's got the sweet in his pocket. A smirk crawls across his face as the light green harino makes contacts with his lips " I would give it to you but I'm afraid it the last one " he said and with that the Haribo is gone, He's ate it. Well he ate it fifteen years ago. No ones seen him since . Whatever could have happened .....?!

Jake

15/7/2014 04:31:29 am

Today I went to Grainger games to get the Lego the hobbit game for my PS4 . I picked it up and took it to the counter . My friend Jacob then came in and asked for a copy of the game but I`m afraid it`s the last one he said . Jacob then started saying it was my fault that he didn't get and he`s going to get revenge . So that night he came up to my house and chucked some eggs at my bedroom window and woke me up . That night I didn't get a wink of sleep!

Ben. D

15/7/2014 04:51:25 am

The other day me and my friends were stranded on a desert island it was so scary sharks circling the island intimidating us so we couldn't leave but the next day the ocean was clear so me and my friends tried to build a raft. We used all the wood and other resources until my friend brought a large plank of wood so I asked him if he could get me another one "but im afriad that's the last one he said. As my friend sailed of to safety I was stranded there for eternity and if you are still wondering how I wrote this I am not real you are not real nothing is real!...

Elizabeth

16/7/2014 05:39:32 am

Monday 14th July 2014.
.....but I'm afraid it's the last one he said.....the sentence mumbled by Mr Turner, who was standing at his desk, situated at the front of class. Indeed this was our last ever week in class 5, before the six weeks summer holidays. I felt all humbled, goose pimples on my arms but excited for my holidays all together. Realising that when I return to school in September I will be in year 6, my last year at Escomb Primary School. Thinking to myself, I knew I must enjoy my last week in year 5. thank you Mr Turner.

Jessica

11/9/2014 01:33:40 am

I love the video

obat kencing nanah link

21/9/2014 08:51:59 pm

eggs at my bedroom window and woke me up . That night I didn't get a wink of sleep!

obat kencing nanah link

21/9/2014 08:52:36 pm

eggs at my bedroom window and woke me up . That night I didn't get a wink of sleep!

Madelene

8/10/2014 03:39:12 am

so funny

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