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100 word challenge #16 + abacus 

16/1/2015

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The prompt this week is:

…the light was SO bright…


Try to include these words within the 100 words. 

I have also set homework on Abacus linked to today's lesson. Your username is the first four letters of your first name and surname. E.g. jackthom
The password is escomb and the school is esco.

Here is the website: https://www.activelearnprimary.co.uk/
22 Comments
Jamie-Lee
16/1/2015 02:41:05 am

On Tuesday the 27th January it was a very sunny day so I decided to go to the beach! I lived in a beach house so I was sufficiently close, I love the beach, the sand, the ocean I especially loved the donkey rides! But suddenly I saw a tremendous blue light blue was my favourite colour so I went to investigate.. The light was SO bright... that my eyes stated stinging! After that I went for a swim just to be safe I mean I didn't want to be injured or some thing like that. A couple of weeks later I discovered I had this special talent it was playing the piano I had never been good at playing the piano so how come I was so good now? I wondered if it had some thing to do with that bright light I found at the beach?...

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Josh!
16/1/2015 02:54:53 am

On Sunday Robbie,Danny, George and I went to the beach, and discovered a false rock in the cliff we walked inside cautiously and aware of seamonsters jumping out in front of our faces.Right out of the corner of my eye I saw a blue glistening sparkely, pool we decided to camp out next to it.The next day was Monday and we Snook a day of school our mums would be disappointed instead of a normal bath we went into the pool after that we went outside unfortunately our names popped up on a missing poster on a wooden post then our mums turned up!!

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Katie
16/1/2015 04:39:43 am






I lay asleep in my cosy, warm, pink bed. At 1am I got up quickly and we left. The airport, that was busy and bustling became noisy quickly. People, who looked excited, were pushing, which made me cross. As time went by we eventually arrived in Menorca and our hotel, which was gleaming white stone, There was a boy, even though it was dawn. We were shown to our room by a man, who was really tanned. When we settled into our room we adventured down to the pool, walking down the dusty staircase to get there. Through the door to outside, the light was so bright, like a ..........









I lay asleep in my cosy, warm, pink bed. At 1am I got up quickly and we left. The airport, that was busy and bustling became noisy quickly. People, who looked excited, were pushing, which made me cross. As time went by we eventually arrived in Menorca and our hotel, which was gleaming white stone, There was a boy, even though it was dawn. We were shown to our room by a man, who was really tanned. When we settled into our room we adventured down to the pool, walking down the dusty staircase to get there. Through the door to outside, the light was so bright, like a ..........












I lay asleep in my cosy, warm, pink bed. At 1am I got up quickly and we left. The airport, that was busy and bustling became noisy quickly. People, who looked excited, were pushing, which made me cross. As time went by we eventually arrived in Menorca and our hotel, which was gleaming white stone, There was a boy, even though it was dawn. We were shown to our room by a man, who was really tanned. When we settled into our room we adventured down to the pool, walking down the dusty staircase to get there. Through the door to outside, the light was so bright, like a ..........













I lay asleep in my cosy, warm, pink bed. At 1am I got up quickly and we left. The airport, that was busy and bustling became noisy quickly. People, who looked excited, were pushing, which made me cross. As time went by we eventually arrived in Menorca and our hotel, which was gleaming white stone, There was a boy, even though it was dawn. We were shown to our room by a man, who was really tanned. When we settled into our room we adventured down to the pool, walking down the dusty staircase to get there. Through the door to outside, the light was so bright, like a ..........









I lay asleep in my cosy, warm, pink bed. At 1am I got up quickly and we left. The airport, that was busy and bustling became noisy quickly. People, who looked excited, were pushing, which made me cross. As time went by we eventually arrived in Menorca and our hotel, which was gleaming white stone, There was a boy, even though it was dawn. We were shown to our room by a man, who was really tanned. When we settled into our room we adventured down to the pool, walking down the dusty staircase to get there. Through the door to outside, the light was so bright, like a ..........












I lay asleep in my cosy, warm, pink bed. At 1am I got up quickly and we left. The airport, that was busy and bustling became noisy quickly. People, who looked excited, were pushing, which made me cross. As time went by we eventually arrived in Menorca and our hotel, which was gleaming white stone, even though it was dawn. We were shown to our room by a man, who was really tanned. When we settled into our room we adventured down to the pool, walking down the sandy staircase to get there. Through the door to outside, the light was so bright, like a ..........










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josh
16/1/2015 06:31:47 pm

On Sunday Robbie ,Danny, George and i went to the beach only to discover a false rock in the cliff. We cautiously walked towards the flase rock to take a closer look.Out of the corner of my eyes i saw a bright light. The light was so bright it almost blinded us.We were very scared but we walked towards the light it lead us deep inside the cliff.Robbie touch the strong yellow light and he was knocked out. We all I instantly ran towards him. The next thing we knew it was morning.
. We were wobbly but we staggered outside the cliffe and saw our mams and dads looking for us all.

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Guy
16/1/2015 11:21:28 pm

My name is Adam and I am a singer. I dream to go on a huge stage and to sing to people and they will watch and applaud and shout for an a encore. So that's my dream,my nanna thinks I am a wonderful singer, I sing every where at school, pubs, at nannas and in the house. When I go to school I sing to CDs but in school I enjoy sining practice music and the choir but at school we were all in the hall,but then the head teacher said to me would you like to sing on a stage to the school so I said YES!. So I went up on the stage the light was so bright it made me freeze on the spot.

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Luke.p
17/1/2015 07:01:32 pm

On saturday morning I drove to training with my dad and we had to take our trainers through king james school because inside the new king james new school they do not want to get there new floor to get all scratched. My dad and I arived there once we trained with my team it was very fun learning new things.Once we got back to my house i ran up the stairs as fast as I could to go on my playstation. But THE LIGHT WAS SO BRIGHT i had to close the blinds when i got n my room on my playststion all of my friends were online so we played a few games against each other. Later on we had some tea and watched the tv with my family and i went to bed as i had a early match on Sunday. When i woke up my dad told me the match was cancelled as the pitch was frozen then it started to snow. I could not wait to get out and play in the snow.

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Lucy
17/1/2015 07:14:45 pm

The light was so bright in my bedroom. It was my very own bedroom for once, because my big sister had left. I was heartbroken, she loved playing with me. The last time she played with me was when she came and said goodbye. When I turned nine I got a phone, so I asked my mum for her number. I started texting her! When she saw I texted her. She said I'm coming back to have a party, I've got a job I replied and said that's great. Then an hour later she arrived home, now I could finally play.

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Kate
17/1/2015 07:29:08 pm

As I was walking into my bedroom, the light was so bright as I just opened curtains! I was just about to go out the door when my dad came in to see if I was awake, I was. Then he said "come downstairs" the first thing I saw was my mum sobbing. I asked "what's wrong?" She never spoke back. As I was just about to go back to my room, she shouted, "your grandma is dead!" I ran back up to my room then I looked out my window and the bight light suddenly went away. Why me?

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Jessica
17/1/2015 07:41:03 pm

As I walked slowly into the dense forest I saw a blinding light! The light was So bright I couldn't see what it was... As I walked further into the light I finally saw it! It was an enormous diamond! It was supisiously surrounded by huge chunks of gold-i couldn't be live my eyes. We're going to be rich I thought to myself. Finally, when I reached my home, I told my mother;she didn't be belive me uuntilahe saw them. When we sold them thy sold for £1,000,000! I was so happy.

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kody
17/1/2015 07:55:30 pm

It was a dank and dull night where all you could so was a light. The light was so bright that you could see everything, even though it was dark. It was tea time and I was scared ,it started thundering and lighting I was so so scared I ran up stairs. mam shouted down come down and finish your tea "OK MAM" so I went down stairs and everyone wasn't there I knew everyone was hiding so I started eating my tea again I looked behind and every one was a skeleton.

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Cobi
17/1/2015 08:28:08 pm

There was a boy who lived in Newcastle,in darlington who walked to school,because the school he goes to is right next to his house.The boy is called John.Everyone picked on John at school because he was colour blind.There was only certain colours that John can see he can see green and black,so when someone turned a light on it would hardly make a difference.One day John got an operation for his colour blindness .The next day he turned the light on and went down stairs and said
"the light was so bright".
Then every one at school liked him.

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Happy Sadie
17/1/2015 09:22:08 pm

Mam: “Hurry up kids we have to go to the airport!”

Sadie: “Dad can wait because I’m watching a film,”

Mam: “Turn off that I Pad now, what’s more important, technology or your dad?”

Lorna: (Lorna enters the room) “Well its obvious its the technology!”

Mam: “Put your shoe’s on and get in the car, we are going to be late!”

Finally they set off in the dark, on the way to the airport.

Sadie: “I’ve had a text, dad is landing,”

Lorna: “Look! there’s Dads’ plane.”

The light was SO bright as it came into land on the runway.

Dad: “have you missed me?”…

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Ethan
17/1/2015 09:38:04 pm

The light was bright in the morning.Then I went on my iPad Air and went on clash of clans, which is my favourite game.At 8:00AM I started to get ready to go to Danny's house at 8:20 in the morning on Saturday.After that we went to King James to train because there is astro truth football pitches.

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Robbie
17/1/2015 10:13:23 pm

One cold morning there was a lazy boy called Robbie. He never liked to get up on a morning for school even though he had to get up, Robbie didn't like school because he had to get up at 7:30 and he always was in a dream,and sometimes he had to be told 2 times to get up. But if he doesn't get up his mam or dad opens his curtains, which they did one day and the light was so bright he got up.

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Luke d
18/1/2015 12:33:22 am

The light was SO bright it blinded me while I was doing my 25mile bike ride across County Durham. Couldn't figure out what it was because it was really hard to see but just then I heard some weird noises coming from behind me, I looked around it was a strange looking machine . I didn't know what to do it had loads of wires and buttons I looked at it once more I saw a green soft button I thought "I wonder what would happen" so I pressed this weird button AND it made that noise again I looked up the light had gone so I carried on my bike ride.

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bethany
19/1/2015 01:41:25 am

at 8:00am my super ANNOYING mum stormed up the stairs to get me up.when she came up she turned on the lights.THE LIGHT WAS SOO BRIGHT that in the end i decided too get up.And what was even more annoying was that it was football training .And what annoyed me most was that i saw most of the boys from my class.ANNOYING!!!.but the best bit was that we had a mcdonalds and that i spent some of my birthday money oh yeah! i also spent the night at my nanna Brenda's
What a day!!!

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Daniel
19/1/2015 03:35:18 am

Joe,luke.d,luke.w and me went to the movies and bought some popcorn and wached guardians of the galaxy in 3d,and then THE LIGHT WAS SO BRIGHT it nerly blinded us but we survived, and then we went to my house for chocolate cake and ice cream but it was not chocolate because we had no chocolate cake but we had vanilla,cake and then luke d had to go home for tea but me joe and luke w were still at my mams house and made all of the cakes and ice cream and ate all of it.

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Henry
20/1/2015 02:42:02 am

It was one sad rainy day and Henry was doing nothing. All of a sudden his mam shouted "Henry it is time you were going of to the dentist!" "Oh no!" Henry thought. Ten minuets later Henry was climbing into the car and his mam drove him to the dentist. As Henry was waiting he was getting more tired and when the nurse called his name Henry was almost asleep. His legs could hardly carry him up the stairs. When Henry got into the dentists room he got asked to sit down. They put some sunglasses on him and switched on the light. The light was so bright and hot that his sunglasses began to melt. He could feel scalding plastic running down his cheeks like magma from a volcano.

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beau
20/1/2015 03:30:13 am

Every morning I wake up around 6:40 AM and get ready, sometimes I even go on a walk in the field with the dogs and Grandma. When I do, I always get used to the light as it gradually gets brighter but this one particular morning I was walking the dogs with my beloved Grandma through the marsh and suddenly I heard a noise it was like bells but a lot louder. Suddenly I realised it was Grandma's phone I nudged her but she was in a daydream so I reached into her coat pocket and saw A LIGHT SO BRIGHT it made my eyes water I told grandma and eventually she answered the phone!!!

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Joe
21/1/2015 04:00:04 am

Once there was a spy called Tony String he was on a top seacret mission to find the cristal sword of elements. Not many people have held it before getting blinded. Some people beleved that THE LIGHT WAS SO BRIGHT that it had to be hidden in the darkest, deepest places ever. He knew he wasn't the only one looking for the elements sword, right now Tony was at South America at the other agency. He got told everything he needed to know. On the journey he blinked and CRASH!!! He was in a car accident with his enemy, the Flaming Skulls, to be continued...

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Matthew
23/1/2015 11:55:24 pm

There was a boy called john who was living on the streets in a bus shelter that was 8 foot tall. John had nothing accept clothes and a drink of dirty water. One day a man with brown hair give him £5.00 to spend on clean water so that day John got up and went to find a shop to buy some water. John eventually found the right lane then he picked up a bottle of water and went to the check outs after he payed he went back to the bus shelter to enjoy his fresh clean water and from that day on the same person give him £5.00 every day so he could buy fresh water.

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Kayleigh
25/1/2015 02:11:52 am

After the dust storm, daffodil got closer and closer to Torquay, the place were she lived. Red spotted a sign that said "Torquay 6 miles." But the sunlight was so bright, Daffodil did not seen it.

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