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For this week’s prompt, we have got another of those wonderful photos from the talented Jane Hewitt. 
Before you start, you will have to make some decisions about what is real size and that will then influence your story! Make sure you really think imaginatively. Choose your 100 words carefully and make sure you pay some attention to your punctuation.
19 Comments
Jacob
14/6/2014 07:16:07 pm
One summers evening I went into the house for a cream egg because I really like them. I got one out of the box and the egg made a ssssss noise I wondered what it was . It was quit suspicious after a while I put it on the wooden birch table . Then suddenly a huge hole popped out and cream egg was exploding every were then little men came out and "this area is for workers only" they surrounded the egg with tiny red and white cones . So next time you go to the super market to get a cream egg check if there is anything in it first before you dig in .
Erin
14/6/2014 09:07:34 pm
It was warm summers day in July and me and my friends were playing in the garden. Then suddenly, a massive cream egg rolled towards us. Oh, did I forget to mention that I am tiny.
emily
14/6/2014 09:25:06 pm
It was a easter sunday i was plaing out with my friend tilly wheni went inside to get a cream egg.So I went in the frige an acident i dropped the cream eggs.So i shouted my mnam to come and clean it up . She said she was busy so I was going to have to do it by my self so i weht in the coboard for a when paper twol and when i torned aroud Isaw the loads of small people starting to clean it up.There were loads of cons every were and three people with hard hats o nit was like a construction site.
Pippa
14/6/2014 09:57:37 pm
Breaking news! The Monday morning traffic has been stopped after a giant cream egg has fallen out of the sky. The egg narrowly missed a bus full of children on their way to school. As the egg hit the ground, the gooey insides spilt out all over the road. Workmen quickly tried to contain the gooey, sticky, sweet cream, as the school children from the bus scrambled to eat it. Our reporter on site, Rita Foil said she had never seen so much excitement since the giant Oreo biscuit fell from the sky last week. I wonder what will fall next week…..
Holly
14/6/2014 10:12:23 pm
I snatched the cream egg from my brother and bolted upstairs , seconds after I could here him trying to break my door down. I laughed wickedly as he screamed loudly ... That was until I realised he was still downstairs. I stared in horror at the cream egg and dropped it on the floor in panic , the minute it dropped on the floor it smashed into pieces and three little men walked out. I watched them as they pretend to build. I've given up working out a reason for how they did it.
Ben. D
14/6/2014 10:40:55 pm
One autumn me and my friends were on a mission to find the giant Cadbury cream egg but it was way trickier then we expected. In the end we found it but it was cracked and all the stuff was leaking out. Suddenly a chocolate drago hatched but he pushed me into the liquid and so that was when I realised ghosts can die but will always be resurrected.
Elizabeth
15/6/2014 02:44:12 am
"Hello, emergency services would you like Police, Fire or Amublance" the lady's voice asked me. "The fire please, there is a chemical spill in the kitchen and steam is coming from the egg type filling. My address is ......" I gave the call center my details. Three strong, brave firemen came to the rescue, wearing orange hi-viz vest and hard hats, placing traffic cones around the area. While two inspected, one decided to investigate, not a wise move as he became completely stuck in the white gluey sticky lava. Buzz, seria, Oscar , whiskey send an engine to....Harold is in a sticky mess an anxious voice reported.
Millie
15/6/2014 03:23:09 am
The creame egg waterfall was huge, bigger than I imagined. The smell was lush, finding its way to my nostrils. The taste was divine. But now, I'm starting to thing twice. We're getting closer to the edge, unable to stop, about to plummet to our deaths. Suddenly, I have an idea. Masses of gloop we're racing down the rapids carrying trees attached to the river bank, if only I could grab one... And I did. A massive burst of hope flooded my insides, releasing it into the open air... Then I loosen my grip and it all goes black...
Romana
15/6/2014 04:28:52 am
Just in a second I saw something that would change history as we know it . These things are small very ,very small even microscopic. It all started on the 2nd of November 2003. I was just messing around with my friends Brittany and Molly . We were playing our favourite game hide and seek. I was hiding. I was hiding I a little place a tunnel even. And then I saw a gooey crème egg on the floor ... moving ! I started to look closer and I realised it was alive. Now that was 500 years ago and your probably thinking how I am still alive well that's another story .
Abby
15/6/2014 05:25:24 pm
My sister has quite an addiction on cream eggs. The worst addiction I've ever seen. Every cupboard in the house is beginning to burst as they are all full of ... Yes you guessed it, cream eggs. I do hate my sister so I decided to eat some of them! After a while I beacame full but My sister was coming my way so I decided to eat another. I cracked it open and I realised that something was wrong with this cream egg. Men were scattered inside and there was cones just like an accident had just occurred on the motorway.
Molly.b
15/6/2014 11:11:59 pm
Aggggggggg I dropped my cream egg. And all of a sudden these miniature figures came marching in and started to put some little cones around it I bent down to get it and they started to use it like it was a water park I wanted a go but I would just get it over my new skirt very very lovely indeed one of them where stuck so I bent down again and helped him out (he was very gooey ).
Jake
17/6/2014 04:40:21 am
One sunny summer evening I was taking a walk on the path near my house and then suddenly I heard a BIG CRACK!!! I quickly ran up the path and there was a big humongous gigantic CREAM EGG!!! what could I do eat it , leave it or smash it Hmm... I think I'll eat it . But then I saw three incy wincy tiny construction workers and they were trying too repair the cream egg maybe I could help ... what do you think ? ...
Abigail
17/6/2014 06:09:37 am
All of a sudden my cream egg cracked as I was going to pick it up my mum called me to go back to the car. I left it. But in fifteen minutes these little, miniature men came and placed tiny cones on the sand. I peaked around the corner just for a second there was dressed in mini suits. I thought I had seen something nothing like it. But once we got home a tiny knock on the door a cream egg was on the door step. Thankyou mini men
Lauren
18/6/2014 07:20:31 pm
A baby dropped its cream egg and it started to cry so lots of small men came to fix it the men wore blue and green frolecent jackets on but they could not fix it so the mother of the baby was a magical wizard and she magically fixed the cream egg the baby was so happy and the men were in shock they couldn't believe there eyes the baby was extremely happy and she and the baby walked hand in hand home the end
Lewis
18/6/2014 07:24:41 pm
One summers evening there was a delay on the A66 a cream egg had fell from a tree and cracked in the middle of the road. We no one could get past this giant cream egg. It was indestructible. Some men were trying there hardest to get this out of the way. There was a delay for 7 hours. You couldn't believe that a egg could have fell off a tree and crack in the middle of the road then there was a relief it had been moved everyone cheered HORAY HORAY!!!!!
Rachel
18/6/2014 07:34:46 pm
Last Sunday I opened my Easter egg and NO!! I dropped my Easter egg on the floor. After that these men came out and stated eating my Easter egg. So I called my friend Isabelle to help me discover why they where eating my Easter egg so we whet over to the kitchen Isabelle said I know they are the Easter men they are a bad thing to have at Easter. They go round and eat Easter eggs
Rachel
18/6/2014 07:35:57 pm
So she give me the number and they came out and shoved it
Kian5
18/6/2014 08:08:31 pm
Last Friday I opend the couberd and a chocolate egg raper in the corner of the courbord and all of a sodden little figures started to put cones around this broken egg at the outher side of the courberd and the little figures were starting to fix the broken egg with in minutes the egg was fixed and then they started to fix the egg into the wrapper with egg cream it took some time first they hade to glue the ripped parts and then they hade to flatten the cresses and by the time I blinked my eyes the little figures were gone and the chocolate egg was good as new. One Easter I went for an Easter egg hunt up my grans. The first thing I found was a delicious cream egg , I opened the wrapper and the egg started shaking in my small hand I carefully split the egg in half and these small men jumped out of the cream egg putting orange cones in front of the egg I thought what were they doing? Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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