This week we have a photograph. It was taken by Pam O’Brien on Inis Oirr on the Aran Islands off the west coast of Ireland.
Really be as creative as you can and try to use all 100 words.
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Danny
5/12/2014 12:25:06 am
on the 24th may 1893 there was a ship which was strolling through the sea know body was fireing cannons non of them even wanted to go outside. Until There was a ship which was fireing at them then eventually they went outside to fire at them but the pirates of the other ship was on their ship unscrewing all of the cannons until they succeeded they had a rocket launcher and shot.
Mr Turner
9/12/2014 11:42:13 pm
Good work Danny. You have written this as an informative piece of writing. Don't forget to check your capital letters.
bethany
5/12/2014 12:50:06 am
The ship wreak was in the Aran island off the west coast of Irland.An old rustey tin boat was washed-up onto a rockey beach and was named a ship wreak.Pam O'Brien is a femal and has wrote over 80 poems,short stories and articles some have been in a small press or a newspaper.I think she took a picture of the ship wreak to write about it in one of her stories.many people have made videos on you-tube about the ship wreak and were the ship wreak was seen.
Mr Turner
9/12/2014 11:43:12 pm
You have researched the photographer well Bethany. You have included your thoughts and opinions around a subject.
Guy
5/12/2014 02:25:52 am
One day there was a man called Fred he went to different places. One day he went to the west coast of Ireland to find a boat that had been missing for years it had crashed some were. No one knows where it crashed it was on a fishing trip and the worlds biggest storm came and brought it into the shore. So Fred walked and walked until he found a rusty, ripped dessertd ship he thought this is it . He went on board and he was amazed at the sight in front of him there were chests full of gold as far as the eye could see he was rich but he was lost.
Mr Turner
9/12/2014 11:44:12 pm
This is a good piece of writing. You have built a small story around an image. Try to add commas into your writing to denote a clause.
Jessica
5/12/2014 04:34:21 am
One day I was walking along the rocky coastline of Ireand when suddenly I saw a gigantic, rusty ship! When I returned home I researched it and it was called.queen Elizabeth the third. I was extremely shocked to discover my great-great uncle Albert sailed the ship, around the world, in world record time before it crashed into the rocks on a dark, stormy night- sadly all the crew lost their lives that night including my great-great uncle. I was quiet saddened to find this news! The next day I went back to the rocks and laid some flowers besides the ship in remembrance of his honour.
Mr Turner
9/12/2014 11:45:47 pm
Well done Jessica. This is a lovely piece of work. Don't forget to check your capital letters.
evie-mae
5/12/2014 02:29:20 pm
do we have to research about it or do we just say what we think about it?
Mr Turner
9/12/2014 11:44:39 pm
You could write a story behind the image.
Katie
5/12/2014 06:51:39 pm
On a sunny afternoon, when looking for a parking space. My mam said "first one to see the mouldy, rusty, old boat, which used to sail across the wavy,wet, blue sea"
Josh!
5/12/2014 10:19:06 pm
It was one Wednesday and all my classmates heard was CRASH, BANG, BOOM,it was coming from the harbour. At breaktime I found out a Brazilian ship had crashed into a house next to the harbour.At 3:20pm I snook out with the bus pupils, met my mam and told her to drive to the harbour immediately.When we got there firefighters were searching the perimeter of the ship.paramedics were on stand by and police were keeping everyone away from the incident.Right before my eyes, out came a sky news team. They started to Interview firefighters. About 30 minutes later it was all over.
Lucy
6/12/2014 07:24:44 pm
Once on a rusty old ship, there was a man, who was wearing a flat cap, with round glasses and a woman, which had a huge dress on, and holding a dog. Last but not least the dog, who had the wettest noes no one could believe. The woman and the man also the dog went on trip out to see some derelict boats and ruins the dog went in the ship and thought we'd lost him. And we looked and looked but you weren't aloud to go in the ship so there was no chance and we explained to the guard that our dog was in the ship but he looked all over and only a dead dog was found!
kate
6/12/2014 07:42:35 pm
I couldn’t see anything the blizzard was too thick and strong. So I, my mum and Dad and my little sister went to go and see the ruins. The next night I didn’t go to sleep my mum came in with me but that did not do anything. When I woke up my mum was gone then I looked in their bedroom but still then I went down the stairs to have a look there they were standing near the door waiting for me but I did just get up. Then I spotted a photo frame with an old ship...
Cobi
7/12/2014 12:45:40 am
This is how I think this ship ended up in this peculiar place.The boat was travelling in the sea and there where dangerous animal in this sea like sharks and whales there are lots of other animal but sharks and whales are the most dangerous animal in the sea,back to the story the boat was travelling through the part of the sea where it is bright the people inside saw a lot of colourful fish and then suddenly it went dark the people looked out the back window and they saw a huge whale coming to them and BANG! The whale crashed and suddenly the boat was on the rocks.
Still fabulous Sadie
7/12/2014 02:11:43 am
In 2007 around summer time the O’Brien family were packing up for a little family trip to the beach “ when are we going? ’’ moaned the oldest child, Conner, who was waiting at the door and playing on his tablet. “ Soon Conner just be patient,’’ said Dad feeling fed up!
Daniel
7/12/2014 02:54:36 am
There once was a random ship catching fish and then they caught a shark,but the next day they noticed that the shark had eaten a cannon ball. They let the shark go and when they did, it destroyed a enemy ship. In all the commotion they made their getaway but they ran into a typhoon. They managed to dodge it only to have an awful crash onto the rocks on the west of Ireland. All aboard perished and now the ship is a wreck and lies there for all to see .
Luke d
8/12/2014 12:22:10 am
One day me and my family went to the Aran Islands first thing we saw was a old rusty ship what looked like it had been their for years."can we stop here and see more about this ship,"I asked, my mam said "yes we can stop to see". When I got up close it was a huge ship I thought it might of been a fishing boat but underneath was a plaque what said this was a cargo ship and was called the plassey it was built 50 years a go the boat went down 10 years later in 1960 with only 1 who survived I really wanted to find out more
Kayleigh part 2
8/12/2014 01:07:11 am
She found herself back in reality one year later, after all the nonsense and busyness (and having her fingers called pork sausages) of the LEGO world, she stepped out of the portal and smiled. Daffodil was proud to be back. But she was now facing a old, tatty bort in the middle of nowhere! Will she see her mum again...
Neve
8/12/2014 01:40:13 am
I've found another blog that includes the exact same words
Luke p
8/12/2014 02:35:01 am
I think the picture looks like a old looking rusty brown shipwreck that has been toppled over on the burnt wood looking wood chips for the floor it has a massive big funnel with a tall rusty wrecked flag that was so old that it never moved. Because it looked so old and at the front of the boat there is a massive big chunk missing out of the front of the boat it looks really recked as though something might of hit it in the past, It's on lots of stones and rocks I think the tide has gone out and it has been left stuck between rocks a lot of years ago. It's paint has gone rusty of the salt water and it was too heavy to get it off the rocks so it has been abandoned.
Robbie
8/12/2014 04:10:35 am
he ship rocked and swayed in the Pacific Ocean as The captain shouted we've hit a big rock. Water was rushing in from the front of the ship. It was freezing cold night. The ship floated on to shore where it stayed for meany years, shipwrecked.
matthew
8/12/2014 05:22:19 am
I sailed the seven seas for hundreds of years discovering different sea creatures but one day all the sea creatures died because my crew threw poison into the sea to kill everything under water so the big killer whales couldn't tip my boat over. One of the sea creatures that lived was the shark, the shark knew something was happening because he saw what happened to the other fish so he held his breath. After a few days I crashed my ship and the shark came to the top of the sea to see what was happening and we Iived the rest of our lives watching the sun go down over the horizon.
Madelene
9/12/2014 12:00:18 am
1000 years ago a pirate ship sailed the 7 seas looking for treasure. but a storm came and sunk the ship. several days later it washed up a shore on the coast of Ireland. Pam O'Brien then found this wreck and took this picture then he decided to investigate inside the ship and in there where an endless amount of skeletons and the captain sitting on the chair with a mug in his hand and in the mug was diamonds rubies and emeralds "wow" Pam O'Brien said to himself.
Jamie-lee
9/12/2014 01:58:36 am
It was July 2014 Sunday the 18th I decided to go for a stroll along the beach. I stumbled over the ginormous rocks, all was silent until, suddenly I heard a noise. As I staggered across the beach I came towards an amazing ship it looked very old and rusty,it was even bigger then the huge rocks. I wondered if it was a display I had my phone in my pocket I quickly grabbed it out. I had an wonderful view I couldn't believe my eyes. Now I had the perfect picture and story for my school project. I was very excited to get started!
beau
9/12/2014 02:40:30 am
This is a very old rusty boat with a light burgundy colour to it. I think it could of sunk a lot of years ago due to its state and colour and it just has been found under sea! A crew of sailors might of spotted it whilst on a sea journey perhaps catching fish and called home and told someone to get there as quick as possible and tow it to safety just in case there were passengers on it! Then they realised it was totally empty!!! And that's how it got there. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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