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100 word challenge #10

14/11/2014

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On 11th November each year, people remember those who have died fighting in wars and conflicts. This year we are commemorating the centenary of World War I. The prompt this week is:

…Remember…

You might like to write about how it felt to be left at home worrying; you may want to write about how it felt to go away from your loved ones and fight in a foreign land; you may like to write a poem about how you feel on Remembrance Day.

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Kody
14/11/2014 03:10:34 am

Just remember the people who were in the army and died. We will always remember them and they will do the same. If they didn't fight we would not be here we would not be on computers we would not be in famous homes so they have a short poem that goes like this. In Flanders fields poppies blow between the crosses, row on row, that mark our place; and in the sky the larks still bravely singing, fly Scarce heard amid the guns below. we are the dead. short days ago we lived felt dawn, saw sunset glow, loved and were loved and now we lie
in Flanders fields






Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

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Kody
14/11/2014 06:25:24 am

Sorry mr turner my mam copyed it

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Josh
14/11/2014 09:15:39 pm

We will remember them. They sacrifeced their lives for our future generations. Every man had to join the army in order to protect the country. John McCrae was a famous poet, his poem was called 'In Flanders Fields'. During World War 1 and 2 the Poppys grew in Flanders Fields which brought colour back to life. He was also a doctor, author and artist. When John McCrae was a doctor he worked in a field hospital. The word Flanders originated in Western Belgium. John McCrae was 17 year's old when he joined the military army. The Poppy is a symbol to remind us of the fallen soldiers.

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Katie
15/11/2014 04:23:56 am

REMEMBER remember
The 11th November
Many men died
Many families cried
We worship and pray
On this special day
As you lay fallen in mud
Red poppy represents your blood
At 11 o'clock we stay silent
To remember the war, it was so violent
Birds didn't tweet
As you stood on your feet
You prayed it would cease
And finally we had peace
The lives you gave
Because you were brave
Remember the people who were in the war
Cos this is who this is all for
On Flanders fields poppies grew
Between the crosses in morning dew
Lest we forget

By Katie

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Sadie
15/11/2014 08:23:13 pm

Poppy Poem

Poppy’s are red,
Violets are blue,
I will REMEMBER them,
And so will you,
Family or not,
Friends or not,
We will still remember.

In Flanders field,
Where the poppy’s lay,
No more guns or bangs,
No smoke or screaming,
Its peaceful now,
So go and visit.

As bullets whistle over heads,
In the dirty trenches,
Where the soldiers sit,
Waiting for the orders,
To go over the top and attack,
They write their letters home,
Remembering their loved ones.

Loved ones sit,
Awaiting the news,
Scared but proud,
The post arrives,
It’s a telegraph!
We will always remember.

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Matthew
15/11/2014 08:53:29 pm

On Remembrance Sunday I went to my Grandma & Grandads for a bit then I walked down to the village were the remembrance parade was. I stood with my Mam, brother and sister while they got lined up in their different groups. Then came a man , with a very loud voice, he got everyones attention as he shouted for the parade to 'quick march'. Ferryhill band led the parade marching all the way around the town hall playing a song to the church. Once they got to the church all the groups and followers who wanted to go to the church service went inside while the band went into the church hall to have a cup of tea and warm up. When the service was finished we all went back outside then they marched back round to the village hall and my uncle played the last post in front of everyone while the flags were lowered to remember all those who fought and lost their lives in the war. Then the band played again while people put the poppy wreaths down. After that I went home it was a great day.

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Madelene
15/11/2014 08:57:28 pm

As I walked through the misty graveyard I thought to myself if they hadn't fought for us then I probably wouldn't be here today. Then a strong wind blew against my face and I said to myself remember the soldiers who sacrificed their lives for us. Suddenly the ground began to shake and the soil from the tops of the graves broke. All the people who died in the war 1 and 2 were walking towards me and pushed me into a grave and covered me up with soil. But I jumped up and pushed them back in their graves. I said to myself huh well that was weird.

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Lucy
15/11/2014 09:31:27 pm

How many words do we need Mr turner

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Lucy
15/11/2014 09:33:58 pm

Remember remember
The 11th of November
Poppies sold
story's told

Solders lied
Children cried
Memories past
Lives never last

Germans where crying
Britain was dying
People where found
In many towns

Never where lost
Never where found
In Flanders field
Poppies where pealed

Poppies grew
Children knew
Paper was sold
With memories told.

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Jeaaica
15/11/2014 10:59:21 pm

We should remember the people who fought in the war because they sacrificed their lives for us and our country. The men were extremely brave! Many people wear a poppy as a sign of remembrance! Lots of families feel sad on remembrance day because some of their family died in the war

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Jamie-lee
15/11/2014 11:49:59 pm

We will remember them they gave up their lives for us for our country! We should be grateful, respectful and show that we care.

In Flanders fields the poppy grows it may be the only thing that survives the war! The poppy is a sign of bravery, courage and loyalty. We need to be proud of them, we need to care
The poppy is a significant flower because they represent the blood of the solders who died! The poppy also grows in Flanders fields. Even though they have died we must still remember them and the good they did for our country.

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Ethan
16/11/2014 01:00:27 am

I remember when my brother cracked his chin open on holiday.It was two more days until we came back to England from Ibiza.He had to go to the hospital to get it stitched up, he was screaming in the hospital so it was harder to get it stitched up.When he came out of the room he was still screaming, when we got back to the hotel he stopped screaming, I thought what a relieve.

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Luke D
16/11/2014 01:43:49 am

Remember the solders who died
Remember the men, women and children who cried
Remember the good and the brave
Remember the men who went to their grave
Remember the solders who returned from the war
Remember the blackouts and the bombs that tore
Remember in silence on armistice day
Remember The 11th hour of the 11th day of the 11th mouth
Remember your poppy and wear it with pride, to show your respect and stand side by side.
We will never forget!

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Luke.D
16/11/2014 01:47:35 am

I accidently wrote mouth when it should be month, sorry!

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Cobi
16/11/2014 02:14:07 am

In the fields were they fought
They were captured and caught
In the air and at sea on the ground they had to flee
They were brave
They were scared
But there families all cared
We wear poppies for respect and spend a minute to think
How brave in 1914 to 1918 our men and women were
Leaving family's,loved ones, friends so young but the
11th of the 11th was the day that we won.
We REMEMBER this day LEST WE FORGET .
The day the British soldiers had no regret .

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Guy
16/11/2014 02:45:43 am

The year is 1914 and I was told that I was going to war I felt broken because I will probably never see my girlfriend again. When we were here the war zone it was very muddy my poor legs were hurting it was a long time to walk. I can't REMEMBER my girlfriends face any more .the banging was getting louder when night fell we slept in a barn full of hay I did not sleep a wink and couldn't stop remembering about my family it hurt so I stopped . When the war was finished I was still alive .

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Kayleigh
16/11/2014 02:47:05 am

it's a sad day
It's the sad day for remembering dead family members.
It's the day when lots of poppies, that are red, are sold.
It's the day when we are silent for one minute.
That is my poin

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kate
16/11/2014 03:43:50 am

The 11th of november its to rember with love,life and death at the end.They saved their is only one day to do this we always have 2 minutes silence to remember the dead for the 11 day of the 11 month at 11am it has been 100 years since out country did for us we will remember the people will lie for us and R.I.P.

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bethany
17/11/2014 01:10:28 am

remember,remember the 11th September
lives at risk
earsplitting explosions
lives lost
and game over
the part of war returning home reunited with family members or the part of war when not returning and a member of the family lost.What to do at war!the choice is keep in contact by letters or just say bye before leaving remember,remember the 11th September many men,women and children risked lives if they never did so our lives would never exist and i would not be hear wrighting this poem hear and now i thank you all who fought and gave me the life I am living today.

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beau
17/11/2014 03:11:41 am

Remember remember the 11th of November
We stand in silence
And they had to stand violence

And the poppies that we buy,
each one stands for a body that lies, in Flanders field.

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bethany
18/11/2014 12:02:10 am

Sorry Mr Turner i did a mistake in my work
September-November
Remember remember the 11th NOVEMBER

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Henry
18/11/2014 03:16:36 am

November is a time to REMEMBER the people that have died, people that have cried a hundred years ago.
Poppies were sold, children were told all about the brave men that have died, the people that have cried a hundred years ago.
Weapons were made, people stayed in the in the terrifing trenches a hundred years ago.
People were found, in the horrifying sound of war a hundred years ago.
The sound of peace, the birds would tweet in the beautiful song of laughter at the end of the world war a hundred years ago.

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Joe
18/11/2014 03:45:57 am

I wouldn't like to be in the war but if I was I'd hope I never had to go over the ladder and out the trench because I could get bombed or shot. If there was no spaces left in the field hospital soldiers would be left to die, its sad. But if I was a medic I would have to be careful going on the battlefield and gathering injured people. If I was a general I'd have to be very very very careful because people would be aiming at me. So remember those who died for our country.

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Henry
19/11/2014 03:19:44 am

November is a time to REMEMBER the people that have died, people that have cried a hundred years ago.
Poppies were sold, children were told all about the brave men that have died, the people that have cried a hundred years ago.
Weapons were made, people stayed in the in the terrifing trenches a hundred years ago.
People were found, in the horrifying sound of war a hundred years ago.
The sound of peace, the birds would tweet in the beautiful song of laughter at the end of the world war a hundred years ago.

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evie-mae
20/11/2014 03:17:00 pm

Weapons for the soldiers
Opportunities to take risks
death in flandeRs field
Lives in trouble
certain Doom for all soldiers

the War ends to all wars
serge Ant stubby was a brave dog
Run for your life

1914 to 1918
WORLD WAR 1
by Evie-mae

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evie-mae
20/11/2014 03:20:55 pm

"How to Die"

Dark clouds are smouldering into red
While down the craters morning burns.
The dying soldier shifts his head
To watch the glory that returns;
He lifts his fingers toward the skies
Where holy brightness breaks in flame;
Radiance reflected in his eyes,
And on his lips a whispered name.

You'd think, to hear some people talk,
That lads go West with sobs and curses,
And sullen faces white as chalk,
Hankering for wreaths and tombs and hearses.
But they've been taught the way to do it
Like Christian soldiers; not with haste
And shuddering groans; but passing through it
With due regard for decent taste.

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Test
20/11/2014 11:36:29 pm

Test 4

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