relative clauses

14/11/2014

For this weeks homework I would like you to complete 5 sentences, each with a relative clause, and write them on the blog. Here are the 5 nouns you must include in your work.

1. Girl 2. Whale 3. Book 4. Poppy 5. Tree

Here is an example:

1. Snake

The Snake, which lived in the dense forest, slithered across the ground searching for its prey.

You can write one of your own as an extension if you would like to.

47 Comments

Matthew

14/11/2014 01:05:50 am

The girl , who is tall , fell over.
The whale , which is blue , jumped out the water.
The book , that moved , fell off the table.
The poppy , which is magic , made all the Poppy's disappear.
The tree , that is green and brown , stood there like a statue.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:54:24 pm

Good work Matthew

Josh!

14/11/2014 02:29:08 am

The Bible, which is a religous book, is read in church.
The poppy, that is a sign of rememberance, is worn to remember those who sacrificed their lives for us.
The oak tree, that is in the Bishops park, is a century old.
Humpback whales, which are an ocean blue colour, migrate from the Pacific ocean to Antarctica.
The girl, which was poorly, waited at the doctors at Bishop Auckland.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:54:35 pm

Well done Josh

kody

14/11/2014 02:53:16 am

The girl, who hurt her leg, ran down the street.
The humpback whale, which is one of the largest animals to migrate, went to Mcdonalds.
The book, that moved across the floor, is 25 years old.
The poppy, that is magic made all the poppy disserpiar.
The tree, that has apples on it, can shake them all off.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:54:48 pm

Good work Kody

Jessica

14/11/2014 04:56:26 am

The small girl, who was dumb, hated school.
The enormous whale, which was blue, launched itself out of the shimmering, blue water!
The ancient book, which had cobwebs on it, smelt like chocolate.
The small poppy, which was red, had a green stalk.
The tree, wich was brown, stood as tall as a house.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:55:00 pm

Well done Jessica

Katie

14/11/2014 09:21:44 pm

1. I met this GIRL, WHOSE name was Lucy, she had a dog WHICH was golden.
2. I saw a humpback WHALE THAT lives in the North Pacific Ocean, it was swimming with its family.
3. The BOOK I read WHEN I was poorly, made me laugh.
4. We wear a POPPY so we are thanking the people WHO fought in the war, they were brave.
5. There is a TREE, WHICH is green in colour, it's in my garden!

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:55:32 pm

Well done Katie, this is a good effort.

Luke D

15/11/2014 04:53:21 pm

The girl, who was smart, didn't want to leave school.
The blue whale, which was in the middle of the ocean, was eating plankton.
The dusty old book, which was big, got picked up and read.
The new red poppy, which was on a lime T-shirt, was pinned on tight.
The old dark tree, which was in the middle of the misty rainforest, was really frightening.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:55:42 pm

Good work Luke

Sadie

15/11/2014 07:43:01 pm

The girl, who has fiery red hair, loves gymnastics and doing her homework.
The Humpback Whale, which sparkles in the sunlight, hit the ocean with an ear spitting crash.
The book, that is hundreds of years old, was read for only the second time ever in the world.
The red ,black and green poppy, which stood lonely in Flanders field , was getting really old.
The tree, that has a smiley face on its trunk, had its picture taken with the mare.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:55:55 pm

Well done Sadie.

Madelene

15/11/2014 09:05:21 pm

The girl, who had silky hair, flicked it in her teachers face.
The killer whale, who had already eaten 5 humans, ate another.
The book,which was extremely rare, stood on the dusty bookshelf.
The red,yellow and blue flag, blew in the wind.
The tree, which was 9,000,000 years old, fell down.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:56:06 pm

Good work Madelene.

Lucy

15/11/2014 09:07:22 pm

The girl,whose duck ran out side,kissed him
The humpback whale,which was blue,splashed as loud as he could
The book,that was getting read,did not like it
The poppy,which was from remrance,had a big black middle
The oak tree,which was from mine craft,had a lot of leafblocks on it

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:56:16 pm

Well done Lucy!

Robbie

15/11/2014 09:44:36 pm

The girl, whose birthday it was, got loads of presents.
The whale,who was bright blue, ate loads of fish.
The book, that sat on my shelf, was glowing up in the dark.
On the 11th of November I wore a poppy, which was a symbol for Remembrance Day.
The tree, in our garden lost all its leaves, because its autumn ,

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:56:27 pm

Good work Robbie

Neve

15/11/2014 09:47:50 pm

1. The girl, who had jet black hair, was walking her dog around the block.
2. The whale, who lived in the Pacific Ocean, migrated to the Mediterranean.
3. My tom gates book, which had a red cover and drawings on, is my favourite.
4. The poppy, which is a symbol of remembrance, lays in Flanders field.
5. My tree, which is called grandfather oak, lives in my front garden.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:58:13 pm

Good work Neve, I like the sentence about the poppy but in order for it to be grammatically correct, it must be either lie or lay.

Bethany

15/11/2014 10:15:36 pm

1,The girl,who was bored,fell asleep on her desk.
2 The whale,which was blue,sang with his friends
3 The book,from the harry potter movie,flew out the window
4 The poppy,which was blood red,lies in Flanders field
5 The tree,which was made from oak,grew like a army of men

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:58:23 pm

Well done Bethany

Jamie-lee

15/11/2014 10:58:05 pm

1.The girl, who was running very fast, fell over.
2.The humpback whale, which is a migrating animal, is a giant of the sea.
3.The reading book, that had a red cover, was filled with information about mammals.
4.The poppy, which is red, grows in Flanders fields representing the fallen soldiers.
5.The old twisted tree, which had a large trunk, was blooming with delicious apples.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 10:58:41 pm

Good work Jamie-Lee

Luke.p

15/11/2014 11:46:49 pm

1. The girl,who had a ocean blue mohican and liked bananas
2.The whale who,was friends with another white whale
3.My book that,was purple and told me all of the information I needed to know.
4.My poppy which,was bright red and had a sparkling black circle in the middle

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:00:32 pm

A good effort Luke. Try to set the sentence out like so:

The girl, who had an ocean blue mohican, liked bananas.

Cobi

16/11/2014 01:11:47 am

1.The girl,whose favourite colour is red,always wears a red dress.
2.The book,which I loved to read,is all about football
3.The poppy,that is 100 years old,is very colourful
4.A whale,which lives in the sea,is a blue whale
5.The tree,in my nanas garden,has dark red leaves

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:00:45 pm

Well done Cobi

Danny

16/11/2014 01:45:41 am

The Girl, who hurt her leg, went to the hospital.

The book, which sat on the shelf, was due to be sold.

My poppy, which is a year old, was remembering the soilders

The humpback whale, which lives in the middle of the Pacific ocean,was searching for its prey.

My tree house was starting to fall apart.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:01:12 pm

Good work Danny. Check the last sentence.

kate

16/11/2014 01:56:53 am

1.The girl,who loved flowers,bought a masive bouquet of red roses to cheer her self up.
2.The book,which was magic,had made a new spell
3.The poppies,that were red,represented the people that fought for us.
4.The tree,that was haunted,killed you if you went near it.
5.The whale,that was 25 ton,
never moved from the pacific ocean

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:01:55 pm

Good work Kate

Guy

16/11/2014 02:05:53 am

The girl,who had long dark silky hair who had no home or famly,whent to school.

This is where the whales migrate every year,wich has all they need green sea weed fish and some rockes, it is unbelievable

Bookes are full of stuff ,when you pick up a science book they are normally heavy,so whatch

The poppy ,that is red and you can put on you tshirt for a special day called , rememberance day

The tree,which is very big and has lots of branches , got chopped down.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:03:22 pm

A good effort Guy. Always check back through your work and make sure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Kayleigh

16/11/2014 02:36:38 am

the girl, who loved chips, ate a vegetable.
The whales, which ate people, ate chips.
The book, which was ancient, was read for the first time in a generation.
The poppy, which was in a big field, got picked.
The tree, which was planted, grew.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:03:34 pm

Well done Kayleigh

George

16/11/2014 03:42:51 am

The girl ,who liked football ,was hacked
The whale ,which just had a McDonald's ,had a KFC
A book ,which was riped ,was fixed the day after
The poppy ,that was red and black , represented the people,who gave there lives for us and fought for us

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:03:47 pm

Good work George

evie-mae

16/11/2014 04:10:05 pm

the girl,who went on holiday,hated chocolate
the whale,which was blue,ate a hamburger
the book,which was a bible,was brown with a magical dot on
the poppy,what is very special,represented the people who died for us.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:03:59 pm

Well done Evie-Mae

beau

17/11/2014 03:26:27 am

The girl, who was almost 10, jumped up and down excitedly.
The whale, who was peckish, ate some mussel.
The book, witch was called The Hungary Catapilla, was read by all the school.
The tree, witch was green and brown, in my garden.

beau

17/11/2014 03:28:47 am

The poppy, witch is red, grew in Flanders field.

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:04:44 pm

Well done Beau. The Hungary catterpillar? Interesting!

joe

18/11/2014 03:41:36 am

There was a gorilla who picked his nose up a tree.
There was a robot whale which had gone crazy.
There was a man that stole a poppy from Flanders Fields.
A book is where you can explore your imagination.
There is dumb guys who said 'whose a girl?'

Mr Turner

20/11/2014 11:05:20 pm

Please check your work Joe.

The gorilla, who picked his nose, was up a tree.

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