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We have a fabulous photo from Jane Hewitt this week.  Look at it very carefully and use the best creative vocabulary you can to make a wonderful story. Please make sure you link carefully and that you write about THIS picture. As usual, you have 100 words only.
Once again, good luck!
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Millie
18/2/2014 03:33:52 am
Unexpectedly, streaks of light beamed directly at the window of the Ramshackled cabin. Almost sensing it instantly, a girl named Abby skidded towards it. It bounced of the walls, reflecting on the mirror it's physically impossible to not reconize. Taking a closer look, Abby caught a glimpse of a shadow lurking behind a tree. At first Abby was scared and perplexed but as time passed on curiousness became the better of her. Her body shifts to her fluffy ragged slippers and then she flicked them on. Closer and closer she came to the door. Right until her hand touches the knob rotating it to the right. When she steps aside, surrounding her were ALIENS!
Abigail
23/2/2014 03:25:38 am
Hold ONI thought what is those beaming lights.Is it a alien invasion or ogres trying to take over the world?"Help me"people where staring at me like I was the stupidest person on the earth.They carried on walking to a green and red lite shed which was balenced on wood stilts.Are they ogres and aliens or even worse Oginis.Oginis are the most powerfull beasts in the world they have bat wings a pig nose and pointy ears.Its Halloween I can't belive I have forgotten
Abby
22/2/2014 12:24:51 am
Streams of flashing light shone down from above blinding passer by's. Luckily Millie survived the pain allowing her to rest until further notice. This was no ordinary young girls life for Millie as her mother was suffering from different symptoms. Millie realised she had to help the flashing light disappear or else the town would be in big danger. She dashed to the light before saving the people gathered around her. Millie's family was watching out of the window from the house above the flashing light in severe panic.
Elizabeth
22/2/2014 02:34:21 am
Dazzled and dazed by the light so bright, as though the North Star was landing on top of us. Is this the ending?, as they say, are the aliens landing to explore?,as we explore their land.
Ben D
22/2/2014 07:21:29 pm
As I was was running through an old burned down forest I discovered an area full of life. Suddenly out of nowhere lights appeared showing the front of an old green house then a ladder fell right in front of me. I was exetremly nervous but I used the ladder to climb up to it and to my surprise it was all a dream or was it...
Holly
22/2/2014 09:56:05 pm
I dogged through the tall oak trees.Flashes of light beamed out from under an old cabin. Vibrant colours filled the lush green forest. I slowly walked towards the blinding light. "Is anyone there" I called walking towards it. I could hear voices coming from inside the cabin. As I got closer I could see shadows all around me but no one was there."come closer" whispered a voice "closer,closer,closer." The voice got louder and the lights became brighter. "CLOSER!!" Chanted the shadows for one last time...
Pippa
23/2/2014 02:10:51 am
Malcolm, the wise old owl, awoke one dark evening to find some magical lights had appeared in his part of the woods. The lights shone red, green and yellow. The most dazzling light was the bright white luminous blinding light that looked like the sun’s rays. The night sun shone up into the trees and looked radiant.
Erin
23/2/2014 03:58:28 pm
It was an awfull night that night. Everybody walked towards the old abandoned tree house. Then a massive bright light appeared in the scene. What do we do? Well I don't know. Bravely I took the lead of the troop. We walked closer and close. Then to my surprise I saw... a terrible monster! What should I do?
isabelle
25/2/2014 03:44:27 am
In the forest all you could see is an illuminated old ramshackle cabin . That dark night was no ordinary night it was illumination night were all of the sitizens of the town gatherd in the forest. On this magical night so many things can go wrong like a spider infestation!there was one problem that would wreck every thing and that is A RAT INFESTATION!!!! hours past by and the grand final was peering around the corner and as it got to that point rats came roling in. We managed to fight themoff.the illuminations and the fighting it was SPECTACULAR!!!! Huge cheers and claps were given as every one left. This years illumination festival was a WINNER!!
Jake
25/2/2014 04:31:27 am
A boy named Simon was hunting with his father late one evening, he spotted a deer in the distance and suddenly it disappeared into the thick bramble hedge. A strange light was glistening through the bracken, his father looked through his binoculars and saw a strange creature appearing through an ancient door in the sky. We slowly approached the light and saw a dilapidated gateway to an ancient land from a distant universe. Simon and his father began floating into the air towards the light and they grasped onto each other shaking with the fear of what may be happening.......
Lewis
25/2/2014 04:41:12 pm
At night unexpectedly a light flashed from an old rusty cabin. A boy named Lewis saw the light from miles. He went to see what this strange light beam was. He approached this bright light he went inside. He found a light that was from a bright torch. Then he saw a shadow upstairs. Every time he moved that moved further away and away. The shadow looked like a wolf so he went up the creaky stairs and found a little boy playing with a toy wolf.
Romana
27/2/2014 03:45:25 am
The fascinating light which shone as bright as a star lit out of the crumbling cabin at the top of the hill. It hypnotised me and many other people we all started walking towards the light I am called Jenny by the way. Me and my family were going camping for my birthday but got lost then we saw the light and got drawn to it like moths get drawn to the light I thought that the other people were lost to but I noticed most of them were carrying maps I knew they were there for a reason but I didn't know why?
Lauren
28/2/2014 04:22:11 am
WOW !! I can see illumines colours bursting flavours. The light shone in my eyes which nearly blinded me . I could hear carol voices singing like birds on branches . There were sweet harmonies everywhere
Jacob
3/3/2014 01:49:44 am
I was just walking home from school and a bright light shot in my eyes ,I wondered what it was. Suddenly a voice said greetings we come in peace.I was shaking like an earthquake then a shadow appeared, it was an alien he was from Mars . The alien was very nice actually and there was not just one alien there were three aliens one said "hello do you like cheese " yes I said . And since then I have never been scared of aliens. Well until the alien told me about the evil king marshan he tries to take over the world of cheese he loves party cheese...fresh.
Mollyb
3/3/2014 02:21:49 am
The lights shone brightly on the old ramshackled shed turning different colours as it zoomed past . The protector lifted up and down on the dark people colored only black and white from head to toe the trees turned red and the fence turned blue but all the things that didn't have a light on was clearly black no other but only still black all around me until the protector focused on the ramshackled shed all was silent until one little girl slowly walked towards the shed and said I love this shed and so should you it's been here for century's standing here bravely.
Abbie
3/3/2014 04:31:42 am
One day while I was walking through the park with my dog Scooby he suddenly began to bark as we noticed beams of light shining brightly through the trees. All the other people in the park noticed them too and we were all amazed by the colourful bright lights which were as bright as the sun and we could hardly look at them. At first I was really scared but my dog Scooby carried on barking and began to pull me towards the lights but what were they? Could it be aliens, the northern lights OR SOMETHING ELSE?
Ellie
3/3/2014 04:41:15 am
I noticed a peculiar light which was glowing through the jungle ahead of me. I wandered slowly towards the beautiful beems of mulicoloured lights. The closer I got to the lights the stronger and brighter they seemed to get and my eyes began to hurt so I had to try and look away from them shielding my eyes with my hands. I was all alone and began to feel frightened but intriged at the same time but what do they mean? Was my mind playing ticks on me or was there suddenly a strange black shadowy figure in front of me! What was it and what did it want? HELP!!!!!!!
emily
4/3/2014 03:19:43 am
i was walking through the most amazing forest ever there was lights every where it was spectaculer view by day normal forest by night a beatiful ballroom.most of the vistes came at night because of the views and the lights they came to dance their cares away and waltze in the moonlight every night every month every year,. the beatiful moon shone in the night sky.the ladies where waring ball gowns and the men were wearing suits ties things that you would where to a wedding very posh things.my gramother and my grandfother used to dance in this forest they were champian dances they could do the cha cha cha or the tango you name it they could do it all rite.
Ava
11/3/2014 07:16:15 am
One cold but bright December afternoon my dad told us to get ready as I have got a surprise for you all . We jumped into the car not knowing where we were going to, all he kept saying to me was "wait and see..."I felt really excited . We turned the corner and to my amazement we came up upon beautiful illuminations glistening through the trees making it light up like a rainbow but at the end of the road there was the most magnificent grotto all lit up ready for Christmas . It makes us realise how magical and wonderful Christmas time is for us.
Lewis
28/3/2014 03:57:19 pm
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