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The prompt this week is:
… and when I opened the cupboard door … Remember, you must use the prompt exactly as it is written. Make sure you really think about the words you use because you only have 107 altogether. Good Luck!
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Elizabeth
2/5/2014 02:49:34 am
It was a warm,sunny Saturday afternoon, mam and I were spending girlie time together sat in the conservatory,mam was reading and I was painting my fingernails with a refreshing orange varnish.when suddenly I heard a loud bang, I jumped and shouted "what was that?" Mam carried on reading, I went to investigate. I opened every door down and peeped into each room. There was nothing out of the ordinary. I went upstairs and did the same leaving one door till last the airing cupboard and when I opened the it was mam playing games on me, but no when I looked again there was nothing there. It must have been a ghost. Well we do live on an old farm site
emily
2/5/2014 03:25:33 am
it was the day of the trip to my great grandmars house every year its the same talk have tea go home.We all got in the car and started our journey to my grandmars house it was a long journey to were she lives she lives in a masive house down in kent .Fianlly we got there my mam parked the car on the drive and we all got out of the car and stood in front of me was a masive house it looked like it was in fested in creepy crolles.one by one we went into the spookey house even my dad thought it was spooke and he never thiks anything is spooky . We walked into the living room were my granmother was sitting on her chair" go and explore my house" said my grandmother so we went in every room apart from the top room i walked in.somthing was making noises from inside the cuboard i walked over to the cover and when I opened the cupboard door i saw this beautiful doll standing and singing.
Holly
2/5/2014 04:04:43 am
A letter. Beatifully written in blue ink in a golden pattern envelope. Hanging from my cupboard door by a green pin. Open me it says. Open the cupboard door. I think for a moment. Should i ? Even though I'm scared I grab the handle and when I open the cupboard door. I blink endless amounts of times to make sure I'm not seeing things. No. There's nothing there just darkness. I look again. And I never look back. I'll never no who sent me that letter. someone who doesn't like me? I'll never find out. Because ever since I stepped into the darkness. I've been stuck there
Lauren
2/5/2014 04:53:27 am
The door creaked open as I walked towards the cupboard and saw the handle and reached my arm out to grab the handle but when I opened the cupboard door there was a head of a demon I was terrified and so was my friend Abigail we were in fear and shock then the door creaked a figure approached me and Abigail and bang!!! Black out we were paralized suddenly there was a beam of light shining through the dark mist "are we in heaven "we both questions the beam of light screamed leaving me and Abigail defended ahh and we disappeared in the moonlight
Jacob
3/5/2014 05:40:52 pm
My Mam asked me to do the washing up, I found this tedious after a while so I said to my self "I wonder if I could just sneak a packet of monster munch." But when I opened the cupboard door an old mans face appeared,he said"what are you doing you are supposed to be washing up"I slammed the cupboard door and ran up stairs and that is why you should do what your mam tells you to do. I often see the old man's face from time to time so watch out because you could be next ............
Pippa
4/5/2014 12:38:50 am
I am having a sleep over at my friend’s house tonight. We have had our tea which was pepperoni pizza yummy! After tea we went outside to play on our bikes and we rode to the park. It was soon getting dark and it was time to head back to Georgia’s house. We decided that later we would have a midnight feast. So we both headed off to the kitchen to look for some tasty treats like sweets and chocolate, perfect for a sleepover! Georgia said “I think my mum got us some sweets today when she went shopping”, and when I opened the cupboard door our favourites haribo’s!
Abigail
4/5/2014 12:52:23 am
Me and my brother were playing hide and seek in the haunted mansion in smallville. I was counting and Bobby was hiding. As I searched around in the corner of the room was a wooden cupboard when I opened the cupboard door I saw a golden sparkly light.
Abigail
4/5/2014 12:56:01 am
There Bobby was trying to trick me once again with a torch and glitter. So what Bobby does not know is that I will get revenge on him bad and I mean real bad! I am going to hide Behind the door when he walks in I am going to scare him!!!
Ben.D
4/5/2014 01:05:23 am
Last night I was going to put my iPod on charge. So I went to the cupboard and when I opened the cupboard door I realised it was a portal to another dimension so I decided put my hand in. Suddenly something grabbed me and and pulled my arm. Before I knew it I woke up. It was all a dream or was it...
Abby
4/5/2014 07:14:32 pm
I was stranded, I will never know where. Nothing but cobwebs hung from the ceiling. My voice echoed through the corridors, screaming help! I began to walk further into the building. I stumble into an opened door. Directly in front of me is a cupboard, and when I opened the cupboard door, at least fifty bats flew to my head. I ran as they chased me into one of the corridors. As I came to the end of the corridor my horrible experience came to an end. The bats slowly disappeared and the cobwebs pealed of the ceiling. Was this just one of my dreams ... Of course !
ben.s
4/5/2014 08:57:33 pm
I was sitting in my living room that was very tidy , I opened the cupboard door and a huge roar came out. I shut the very fast but I was so amused I slowly opened it to have a peek. there was a baby dragon in it ran out like a jaguar, it ran around my living room knocking every thing off the shelf's. it ran and ran till it got trapped in a corner it tried to get out but I didn't let it I picked it up and let it out side. it started to fly in to the sky until you could not see it any more.
Abbie
5/5/2014 03:48:02 am
One sunny Sunday afternoon I decided to go for a walk to the park with my sister and our dog Scooby. When we got there it was very busy with lots of other people walking their dogs too so we did not stay long because it was already getting quite late and Scooby seemed rather tired and hungry. It seemed to take ages to get home but once we did I suddenly remembered my mam had bought some new doggy biscuits especially for Scooby so I went into the kitchen but when I opened the cupboard door it was empty.
Romana
6/5/2014 07:38:30 pm
This blog is amazing!
Jake
7/5/2014 04:55:23 am
One Saturday morning my mam told me to tidy up the kitchen . As I was putting the dishes away I heard a peculiar racket in the bottom cupboard . And when I opened the cupboard door a giant rat bit my nose OUCH!!!! . and it was red for a few hours ... only joking it was red for WEEKS!!!! . Well that serves me right for being nosey .
Millie
7/5/2014 06:02:53 am
Silence intoxicated the isolated room, tearing everything apart in a matter of seconds. Suddenly a knock came at the door, followed by a loud bang. Robbers of all shapes and sizes entered the room, filling all the open space inside. They rummaged through tables and down couches and armchairs. Like a gazelle chasing its pray, I ran upstairs to my slightly messy bedroom. I locked myself in, rattling with fear. Moments passed and then I just remembered..... The gun in my bedside drawes. I dashed over to it and rummaged through it for my life. Then, i go down to the cupboard, and when I open the cupboard, I find that it is empty
Lewis
8/5/2014 01:36:25 am
One sunny day I was playing outside. Then I came in for my tea. After that I went back outside for another hour. So I came in and when i opened the cupboard door and skeleton and some bones jumped out and scared my to death.
Ava
8/5/2014 05:02:27 am
When I opened the cupboard and I had a fright a small spider with long legs was curled up in the corner of the cupboard so I decided to scoop the small creature up in my hands and I leaped into the air the spider transformed in to a huge man-eating spider although it looked cute my heart was thumping like a million frogs and a million butterfly's were in a plastic bag but this wasn't all the spider looked like it was going to eat me I Was afraid but it actually saved the world so smallville was a happy town again We all love reading books whether we are swinging on vines in the jungle with Tarzen or doing spells and enchantments with Harry Potter . But I am here to tell you about one story that hasn't been told before , in fact its been a secret since the dinosaurs but I am here to tell you it and you better not tell anyone. Ok, here I go. It all started on a scorching day in a land where only humans lived you heard me only humans! But there was a little girl who wanted to see an animal so she went on a massive search and by the way the little girl is me Jennifer . My journey went on for years then I came back home one day I had a celebration with my family then I went upstairs to my cupboard and when I opened the cupboard door ... Now like I said don't tell anyone .
Ellie
12/5/2014 05:43:01 am
It was a dark stormy night in the middle of October.I was wide awake listening to the rumbling of the thunder and the flashes of lightning, when suddenly out of nowhere I heard a peculiar sound coming from down stairs. I froze with fear and my heart was pounding I did not know what to do, should I go go downstairs and investigate or lie still hoping it was my imagination? A few seconds later I heard the same sound but even louder this time so I decided I should go and see what was causing it. I slowly crept out of bed trying not to stand on the creeky floorboards as I made my way to the door. I turned the door handle very slowly then tiptoed quietly down the stairs and made my way towards the kitchen as thats where the sound seemed to be coming from and I slowly opened the door and went in and when I opened the cupboard door there was nothing scary at all just a tiny field mouse sat staring back at me! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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