The prompt this week is a picture. Look at it carefully and really use your imaginations when thinking about your writing!
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Jessica
18/10/2014 11:59:22 pm
When I went for a walk on Saturday I discovered a forest. As I walked deeper into the dense forest I saw a dark figure standing near a tree. Slowly I walked further towards the figure. The figure didn't stir as I got closer. Once I got passed the thick brambles, that was blocking my view, I then realised that the dark figure was a statue! Beside the statue was a sign which I read and it told me all about the statue. The name of the statue was "The Old Man Of The Forest ".The sign told a story about the statue. The story was a man getting lost in a forest and getting eaten by a bear!
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Caitlin
19/10/2014 12:59:54 am
One Halloween night I went trick or treating. In my pot was a lot of sweets and fruit. As I was walking down the street I saw something out the corner of my eye. Looking again there was nothing there. What had I seen? Was it a monster? Was it a ghost? Was it a ghoul or something unknown? Then it appeared, something strange, black cloak swirling in the wind. I RAN BUT IT CAUGHT ME! Thankfully in a horrid battle I killed the thing but then awoke suddenly in the safety of my bedroom. It was all a dream.
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Madelene
19/10/2014 01:22:52 am
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Lucy
19/10/2014 01:31:47 am
In the night I herd a creepy,creepy noise. It sounded like a o sound. I went into my mums bedroom there was no one there. I searched and searched until I sore the most creepiest thing I'd ever seen in my whole life. A floating jacket with gloves the jacket and gloves opened the door. I ran as fast as I could it ran like mad until. I reached the balcony my heart said don't jump but my head said jump. I kept running until there was a dead end i chopped it down. After that I got my normal life back with a shock but that wasn't the end.
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bethany
19/10/2014 02:09:25 am
In a deadly dangerous graveyard stood a tall lonely statue waiting for its next victim to arrive.Midnight had just struck when a breeze crept past a young teenage girl who was standing outside of the black damaged gates.she heard voices behind her so she span round like a roundabout but nothing then in frount of her was the same voice she slowley span around and was never then was never seen again.ha,so just be sure to be aware on the 31st october at midnight to look out for strange things that are happening in your neighborhood.
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Cobi
19/10/2014 03:13:35 am
While me and my friends were playing in the forest a black creepy figure appeared well we thought it was black but he was definlity creepy.It stood perfectly still no movement at all we couldn't even see it breathing.My friends and I shouted at the figure from a distance but we got no answer we carried on shouting but still no answer.We where all getting scared so we sneaked of to find an adult when we eventually found my friends dad ,we led him to where the figure was stood.He laughed and said don't worry it's only wood.
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Luke D
19/10/2014 05:40:39 am
One dull cold afternoon I was wandering though the creepy forest, when I came across a spooky looking statue. I had heard terrifying story's about this strange looking man. I had listened to the chilling tales about the monk statue that guards his precious forest by day but by night he comes alive and turns people who dare to enter to stone. I looked at my watch it was getting late, within 30 minutes it would be dark, so I left the forest immediately, I didn't want to find out if the tales were true.
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Guy
20/10/2014 12:39:49 am
On Halloween night I ran off to a thick dark dense forest all I could hear was a spooky laugh so I went in to the thick dark dense forest, dusty fog was all around my feet and big spider webs where clinging to the dark trees . As I got deeper and deeper in to the forest the spooky laugh was getting louder and louder I could tell where the spooky laugh was coming from it was in the south . Then I came a cross a man coved in black in the trees he looked like an old Monk he scared me .
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Josh!
20/10/2014 01:40:31 am
This extremely intresting sculpture inspires me into art and history.Next to it looks like some kind of information filled piece of precious plastic from the old day's.Now let's get back to the acctual artistic creation it makes me remember of Darlington's south park with all of the trees on the surrounding area of our countryside.It reminds me of history becouse it looks like its wearing some old cloth of some sort .And is art becouse it is artistic.this desicion of this steel statue was super. this creation is most positively not a waste of space!!
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Kayleigh
20/10/2014 01:50:00 am
I was lost in a deep,murky forest, until I spotted a sign saying "look up,or you will be dead!" So I looked up, and I spotted a friendly gost. It pointed the way out! But I got lost again the next day, but this time I couldn't find the sign or the gost anywhere! So to this day, I live in the forest and survive on yummy fish and nuts! This is my 100 word challenge I hope you enjoyed it!
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Beau
20/10/2014 03:23:22 am
Maybe it was made to represent queen Victoria was in mourning and only wearing black for forty years! I think it was very sad but forty years she basically wasted half of her life on it.
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Joe part 7
20/10/2014 05:17:04 am
As the lego men flew through clouds they accidently flew too high and came to 'reality'. It was a big place, humans which are so called 'reality monsters' live there. Many toys have been lost in this wild, mad and crazy world. They saw a giant hooded figure surrounded by trees. He suddenly raised his hand and CABOOM!!! It was like a wizards spell hitting the helicopter, because it was, dark magic smashed into the helicopter pieces went everywhere. They crashed into a big tree. The mysterious reality monster went from sight into the forest.
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evie-mae
20/10/2014 03:26:37 pm
A little girl was once doing her homework and just been told off.She was crying in her bedroom and suddenly standing next to the window stud a
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daniel
21/10/2014 12:52:06 am
One day I was in the dark woods and I saw a wizard. He cast an evil spell on me and turned me into one of the corrupted. As night fell i was changing fast and all the mud was turning purple around me , my body felt as if it was on fire , i am scared . A stranger appeared out of nowhere he was all in white and shining brightly , " here take my hand if you want to live " he said . I took his hand. I felt comfortably safe as i closed my eyes . when i awoke there was no one here just a statue standing by the side of the road .
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Ethan
21/10/2014 03:28:18 am
The wizard was looking for the new house what he bort two weeks ago because the house that he was living in was to small for him.When he arrived at his new house he was amazed what it looked like on the outside and the inside of the house as well.When he went into his bedroom e felt reel happy that he bort this house.But when he went down is stares he stumbled across a door on the floor and he opened it,he saw...
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Henry
21/10/2014 03:37:25 am
One day in a dark and gloomy forest a strange wooden sculpture appeared that no one had seen before. No one built it, no one moved it no one knew where it came from. People say that it has been all around the country others say that it means this area has been cursed no one will ever know. The dark curse was a sigh that you are in danger big bad danger! People say that you will be infected with a disfiguring disease and bad luck will follow you all your life! Other people say that the sculpture would always be whaching you...
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LUKE P
21/10/2014 06:20:21 am
One evening my family and I went out for a meal at a big spooky looking castle.Once we had finished our meal we walked out side then we saw a statue of a black metal person and I jumped as soon as I saw it it also had very detailed trees around the spooky metal person but I don't even know if he had a face or not because the statue had its black cape dangling down in his face so we could not see. I thought it was very annoying of the statue to have its Cape down but I still enjoyed my day out to the spooky looking castle so my family and I travelled for about an hour To get home we arrived back home and I thought my day was great. I was not frightened as it just looked like a Halloween costume. My little brother was terrified he did not dare look.
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niall
21/10/2014 07:21:36 am
I was going on a trip to the local forest I had never been there before. I thought it would of been so fun I did have a good time because I went with my friends there were differant fact s about lots of differant things. The firsf thing we seen was a statue in a black coat it was kind of scary. When we went home I found a gift shop it had a replica of the statue I bought one and put it in my room , I thought it was kind of cool my friend got jealous.
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Katie
22/10/2014 02:42:52 am
DISCOVER THE FANTASTIC, ENTICING, MAGICAL HARRY POTTER TRAIL !!!
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George
22/10/2014 04:54:32 am
This man looks like an assasin .he looks like he's sad .he seems like he's trying to sell some stuff .the setting looks like he's in a forest just of a road ,I wonder why he's got his head and looks like he could yous some help .
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Sadie
23/10/2014 01:51:19 am
As I was strolling through the dense woods I stumbled across a strange but familiar looking figure. What is it? Where have I seen it before? I saw a faded sign, so it must have been there for sometime. I felt scared and it was getting dark so I decided to go home and do some research. I ran upstairs and looked through my history book, there it was, in front of my eyes, the same statue as I had seen outside. It read that it was a Monk and legend says that when you touch it you turn to stone...
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Matthew Hetherington
1/11/2014 09:45:22 pm
I was in the woods with my freinds we were playing ti until a goastly huded munk came and chased us all the way through the woods until it ran into a tree and lost us after that we started playing tig it was fun but we couldn't find way out because the huded munk chased us so we all split up into twos and ran around the whole of the forest to find our way out me and Bob found the way out and we shouted OVER HERE! OVER HERE! after that the huded munk found Bob and and chased us we found everyone else on the way then we all turned around and the huded munk fell into the river and died.
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