The prompt is:
… but when she lifted the lid…
Your piece should be 106 words long and you must include the prompt as it is written.
Don't forget to have this completed by Monday!
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The prompt is: … but when she lifted the lid… Your piece should be 106 words long and you must include the prompt as it is written. Don't forget to have this completed by Monday!
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erin
13/3/2014 05:36:13 am
Strange she was, yes, very strange. Now I am talking about Sophie James, the most weird girl in the class. She had light brown hair with blond highlights which matched her sparking blue eyes. Sophie always carried around her can which held her pet worm, max, but when she lifted the lid she found that max was not there. Could he be on the teachers head? Sophie looked up, and there he was... on Mr smith's head! What was she to do?
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Lauren
15/3/2014 12:42:44 am
She did it she finally did it but when she lifted the lid she saw a huge .... Macaroni she was terrified her face was a picture she screamed and ran leaving the lid open but that wasn't all joe his little brother came along and ate the mouldy macaroni and he liked it with jasmine gobsmaked the tin was empty or was it?
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Elizabeth
15/3/2014 06:13:56 am
Cha Cha Cha, Salsa, Quickstep and tango to name a few.
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Jacob
15/3/2014 06:53:42 pm
One sunny day a girl named Rebecca went to play with her freinds.They had a picnic with sandwiches, tomatoes and yummy cakes. After the picnic they went to play, they played football, tennis and tig . Then Rebecca said to Abby let's go down to the sweet shop to get some chocolate ok replied Abby . After that they started to walk to the shop, Rebecca ran straight in . Then she spotted a jar with sweets in but when she lifted the lid an ice cream volcano erupted and that's why you should ask a grown up to open the lid.
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Abigail
15/3/2014 10:36:54 pm
"I am off to the superb,centre off shops"said Abigail's mum "ok" replied Abigail. She had never been left in her house by her self before. Abigail Is an only child and she lives whith her mum Diane. Abigail heard a bang bong bing and a boo in the kitchen but when she lifted the lid off the bin,there was a baby dragon it's skin colour was bright red and also had shiny yellow wings. The only thing was what should she do with it ? Diane will be back in a bit so abigail went to try and fing a hiding place.
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Pippa
16/3/2014 03:36:53 am
Anna and Joseph were best friends and they both went to High –Hill Primary School. They only had two weeks until the summer holiday they were really excited. Even more as it was sports day today, the sun was shiny bright and it was going to be a really hot day. As Anna was doing so well in her maths her teacher decided to assign Anna with the job of helping with refreshments at the sports day. Sports day was going really well, everyone was enjoying the day and cheering each other on. The head teacher asked Anna to collect the ice lollies from the school freezer but when she got there Anna noticed that the freezer door had been left open! When Anna got out the box of ice lollies she thought they might have melted, but when she opened the lid they were still frozen. Everyone enjoy there ice lollies and that kept them cool.
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Abby
16/3/2014 03:51:18 am
When I was young I was given a box. Since I was given it I have never looked inside. It's tall, it's brown, it's wide and it's special. I had a dream that my mam opened the box, but when she lifted the lid a magical genie floated out just like the lamp in Aladdin. She wished that we could own our own palace and live happily ever after. Suddenly the genie disappeared and flying at full speed came the worlds best five star helicopter. It took us to a familiar place. Wait ... Was this really a dream ?...
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Romana
16/3/2014 04:43:37 am
I remember the day so clearly the day that the truth was told. It all started in the countryside in 1904 and I was just looking around the attic to find something new. After a while I got bored so I started to climb down from the attic but before I left I saw a little wooden box. I started to get nearer to it thinking that it was just a normal box it was only until I opened the lid that I realised inside there was a letter from my father! I thought that my father had died when I was born so how could he have sent me a letter? I started to feel a tingle of excitement down my spine. So I opened the letter and started to read. It said that on my tenth birthday that he would visit me. By that point millions of little questions were jumping in my head . I started to feel a little bit worried because tomorrow was my tenth birthday . All night I thought about him visiting making sure that I didn't say anything to my mother. Than the big day came I dressed in my best clothes and stood outside the front door from dawn to dusk. . As night approached I felt drowsy and started to fall asleep. As my eyes saw the last bit of sunlight I saw a figure , a shadow the shape of a man standing there and to this day I still believe that it was my father.
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Holly
16/3/2014 04:49:58 am
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Ben.d
17/3/2014 01:50:23 am
My sister crawled out of her bed at midnight to try and steal my secret stash of cookies but when she opened the lid she em was pulled in by a portal to another dimension. Suddenly she woke up it was all a dream and she was not in another dimension wich made me quite sad but putting that dream to the test. I opened the cookie jar and uh oh I was trapped in a different world I was sure it would be certain death!
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Lewis
17/3/2014 03:09:10 am
One day a girl called Vanessa was in the house tidying her bedroom because it was a complete mess. So after she had finished tidying she wanted to go outside and play with her friends, her friends were called Polly,Edward,John and Chloe. They were in Polly's house for tea so Vanessa knocked on the door and asked if she was allowed inside for tea. So after her delicious tea she had a cookie but when she lifted the lid a the most dangerous spider jumped out and bit the little girl...
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Molly b
17/3/2014 06:26:25 am
One there was a little girl that loved spiders I know what you are thinking how strange but she did any way one day she found a very poisonous spider and put in her box . A few days later she felt like she had to check him but when she opens the lid the spider was gone oh no she gasped where has he gone so she started looking top to bottom ( but there was nothing there ) at this point she was really starting to worry what if her mum saw this spider oh no what am I going to do
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Jake
18/3/2014 02:55:39 am
Sophie sat on her bed looking around her dark and dinghy room, she thought to herself how much she would like to decorate. Sophie went downstairs and asked her mam if she could go and buy some paint to decorate her bedroom. Sophie and her mam went to the shops and she spent ages deciding on the right paint for her room, the colour on the tin said future! Sophie took the paint home and went up to her room to start painting, but when she lifted the lid her room started spinning and she was sucked inside the pot and transported to a future land.......
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Millie
23/3/2014 07:36:36 am
All was silent, but when she lifted the lid, moaning began in every direction. She ran through the deserted streets, unable to grasp what is occurring. When she looks behind her, a terrifying zombie, with only one arm, suddenly appeared out of nowhere. Soon after, thousands of flesh-eating zombies come from the drains, out of shops and anywhere they can find. Without a moment of hesitation, she dashes for her life. Turning corners, over bridges, onto roads and down ramps. But ... Will she escape.
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lauren
27/3/2014 05:21:33 am
do we have a new 100 word challange
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emily
29/3/2014 12:41:18 am
"goodbye see you when i come back"her mothersaid as she walked out of the house wendy was allwase left inhouse by her self with only her dog to keep her company but he is really boring all he does is sleep he probebly sleeps more then sleeping beauty.behing bord is the most wiedest feeling ever as any nine yearold girl would do she went to go and find something to do .first she went up stairs then she went into her bedroom and there right in frontof her eyes was a beautiful toyboxwhen she lifted the lid .. a angel apaired
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Molly r
29/3/2014 04:00:26 am
There once lived a boy called Jacob he was looking for a job. All day and everyday he went to the job centre searching for a decent job he spent hours and hours looking but nothing suited him. Finally he found a job it was as a bin man. Tomorrow was his first day at work and he was so excited when he got there his boss told him that it was recycling day. He was so pleased because if it was the garden day he would of had to have a bath or a shower. But he already had a shower this morning. So when he went down the road; that was very muddy he picked up his first bin from house number 1 it was empty. When he looked across the road there was another girl that worked at his place. But when Jacob went over to her she was just about to lift the lid up. But when she lifted the lid it had loads of dry egg....
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Romanas mam
29/3/2014 07:43:55 pm
This blog is a really good idea its helping Romana with her literacy skills.
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isabelle
30/3/2014 06:19:34 am
It was a cold morning in japan the streets looked abandond apart from a shadowy figure walking along with a battered box that had tiny holes throgh it.the shadowy figure arrived at a medium sised house and put the box on the doorstep and rung the door bell then he quickly scamperd of.munnits later a girl named eji opend the door and found the box so she picked it up but when she opend the lid the creature hoped out of the box and bounced into the house. It was a lovely looking creature with strange looking spots.as the day whent by the creature begun to be a lot more friendly. At 9oclock we put the small creature to bed.
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Ellie
31/3/2014 04:04:01 am
It was Ellie's birthday and she was bursting with excitment! Ellie was busy opening her cards when she noticed the postman pulling up outside of her house in his red van.From the back of his van,she watched him pull out a large box.She ran to the door and had it open before he even had a chance to ring the doorbell.She thanked him and took it inside.Whatever could it be? Ellie was so excited she could hardly pull off the sticky tape.Eventually she managed, but when she lifted the lid there was a....
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abbie
31/3/2014 04:58:58 am
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abbie
31/3/2014 05:18:24 am
One day a girl called Lucy was walking home from school when suddenly she noticed there was a bright light coming from behind the old oak tree in the middle of the park. She decided to walk over towards it to see what it was and it was a bright gold shining treasure chest and when she lifted the lid it was full of the biggest and brightest jewels that you'll ever see!!!! Lucy didn't know what to do but thought her mam would be the best person to tell so off she ran as fast as she could hoping no one else would find the jewels.
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Ava
31/3/2014 05:19:03 am
one bright clear sunny day Sadie was playing out with her friend in the dusty street, she decided to go and call for her other friends who lived round the block. on the way round she passed a nice apple tree, bushes, and some pretty flowers. As she passed a dirty dustbin she thought she heard a rattle coming from it . Sadie stopped and listened again and yet again she heard a rattle . She carefully walked up to the bin she heard some scratching noises but when she lifted the lid all she could see was rubbish. Sadie thought she must of been hearing things, all of a sudden she heard a rustle and to her amazement a tiny cute kitten jumped out of the bin. The kitten purred around Sadie`s feet grateful to be freed from the stinking dustbin.
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