The prompt for this week is part of a sentence. Please remember you must use it in your writing as it is. You can add 100 words to it. The prompt is:
….pushing through the earth….
Good Luck!
….pushing through the earth….
Good Luck!
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Erin
27/2/2014 01:26:29 am
Me and my three friends were walking down to the park and we heard a tapping noise, it was something pushing through the earth, the more it appeared the more I froze to the spot. We were not quite Sure what it was until... The ground was trembelling. What do I do? How do I save my friends? I quickly pushed my friends out of the way. Then what ever it was that was shaking appeared. It was a giant fluffy pink monster! What was he doing here? Do you think I'm could keep it as a pet?
Romana
27/2/2014 04:05:37 am
Amazing! Terrific! Worms! Ok that might sound disgusting but worms are actually really nice creatures even ask your local farmer. They make the soil really clean and nice so it makes the plants grow beautiful and tall. Ok I will admit there really stupid floppy slimy bug but I really like about them is when they make them holes when they start pushing throw the earth so I can make mud pies after there finished. I will admit that I have squashed worms before but that was a accident I bet you yes you have squashed one before haven't you?
Molly b
27/2/2014 04:53:12 am
I was strolling across the path and I saw a worm pushing through the earth it was wriggling constantly . I walked along the path a bit more and I saw another worm wriggling along silently but it suddenly turned and looked at me spookily and turned its head back again it was really wired . I ran and ran as fast as I could from all the worms until I could see no more of them so I was really relived . All of a sudden I saw another worm digging and digging towards me I ran and ran again no stop until I could see my house up the hill . I looked back and guess what I saw a WORM ARMY!!!!! in the distant I thought to my self oh no what am I going to do think think what am I going to do ding I got an idea.
Rachel
27/2/2014 05:17:47 am
This sounds good
Lauren
28/2/2014 03:51:00 am
"Well I was in the class and someone Called me a name I was so furious with them, but I didn't show it"tom explained to the head teacher,mrs Molokai."but then I slammed my hand on the table and it made a banging noise pushing through the earth. Miss tannins said that I was going to your office I've never been here before so what do you do here then do you relax or what "he exclaimed willingly.WOW! This is amazing he thought she's even got her pens lined up. What will my mam say if ...
Abbie
1/3/2014 06:43:48 pm
Yesterday I woke up and could hear some banging.I looked out of the window but could not see anything. My mam said I could not go outside because it was too cold. Slowly I crept downstairs to see if there was anything there but there was not. In the kitchen the blinds were open and when I looked out there was a big, ugly, red and yellow spotty monster pushing through the earth! I shouted to my mam but she did not know what to do so we just hid in the house closing all the blinds and curtains because we were too scared to go outside hoping the monster would just go away.
Ellie
1/3/2014 06:55:12 pm
Hundreds of diggers were pushing through the earth when there were some new shops getting built in Darlington town centre. It felt like it was taking forever to get them all ready to open. One of my favourite shops was going to be built there. The day it opened me and my friends got there very early so we could buy all the things we wanted. When we got to the moshi monster aisle they were completley sold out making us very upset so we bought some sweets and shared them out between all of us. The sweets were very tasty indeed.
rachel
1/3/2014 07:31:48 pm
In a lonely old forest an old cabin was just sitting there and across the road lived a girl called Molly she was an outgoing girl. She loved to find out things. One day she decided to go and see the old cabin. One morning she got up and went to this cabin she investigated the outside only. She said to herself “ I will go inside tomorrow “. The next day came but things had changed there was a rattling inside the cabin so she went in and there was a massive hole pushing through the earth and then…
Holly
1/3/2014 09:13:34 pm
I walked down the deserted street. Rain was falling rapidly and thunder roared in the distance , paper and rubbish flew through the air because of the strong wind. the breeze was cold and it sent a shiver down my spine . Suddenly , the ground started to shake , trees fell over and tiles slid off people's roofs. The ground started to slowly crack open , pieces of rock and dirt breaking off one by one. People screamed in terror as the crack started to get bigger and bigger until eventually it stopped . Something started pushing through the earth and I stared in horror at what lay before me.
Ben d
1/3/2014 09:17:42 pm
As I was strolling through the forest I saw a creature pushing through the earth but as I crept closer I realised it was an alien! I couldn't believe my eyes it was a real alien but something was wrong he was bleeding but it wasn't red blood it was purple then if that wasn't enough five UFOs were flying above and as soon as they came down to earth I woke up luckily it was just a dream or was it?
Millie
2/3/2014 02:33:20 am
As I looked down from the cliff, the waves were pushing through the earth, tearing it into microscopic shards. Speed boats were chasing the endless currents. In the distance the sun was rising, blinding everyone that got caught in its path. Bang! From below an avalanche was forming making the surface I stood on Shake. I was going to topple with the rest of the rocks. Further and further I fall and scorching stones scold me in the process. Now I've nearly reached the beach or what's left of it. Crowds of people gather and the fire brigade is helping ... In every way they csn
Pippa
2/3/2014 02:34:09 am
I was out one morning walking my dog in the freezing cold snow. When suddenly the ground started shaking, something right in front of me was pushing through the earth. What was it? Where had it come from? Where was it trying to get to? So many questions but not enough time to answer them because it’s coming!!!! It’s a robot monster from planet techno, he came looking for food as his energy levels are decreasing .Its source of food was my mobile phone. It began to chase me I sprinted home but I could see the robots flashing lights gaining on me…HELP! Suddenly I woke up it was all a dream the flashing beams was just mam opening the curtains time to get up for school!
isabelle
2/3/2014 02:45:44 am
it was one fine spring morning and the birds were starting to cherp. there was dew on the ground and there was a slight mist in the bottom of the valleys. there was a scuffeling sound coming from below my feet.i saw a little wet nose and sharp eager claws pushing through the earth at great speed.as i watch in anticipation as a huge mount of earth appeard infront of my eyes.when the digging finally came to an end a small fury inqusitive face came into view.it was the cutest face i have ever seen! sadly it was was only a fleeting meeting but i will remember this chance meeting for a long time to come.
isabelle
2/3/2014 03:00:52 am
It was a fine spring morning, the birds were starting to sing there was dew on the fields and thier was a light mist in the bottom of the valleys. From beneath my feet, I felt a slight rumbling sensation. To my amazement, a small, wet nose started pushing through the earth close to where I was standing, followed by a pair of sharp, eager claws.The mole which had appeared was the cutest little chap that I had ever laid eyes on. His fur was soft, brown and very sleek. However, it was a fleeting meeting, but one one which I will remember for a very long time to come. As soon as he had arrived, he was gone.
Ben s
2/3/2014 04:01:04 am
I looked out of my window the moon was as white and round as a dinner plate.moon light filled the streets. footsteps were all you could hear.It was 11:30pm i saw a black scruffy mole that pushed through the earth like a drill going through a wall.It struck midnight and every thing went quiet people went home cars stopped moving all stopped moving.i rushed out side to see the mole but... It had scurried away and left mole hills in the muddy field.
Abigail
2/3/2014 04:46:14 am
There is something pushing through the earth. Each day it grew larger and larger. Until on the fourteenth off May it has popped out off the ,mossy green,ground. But we did not know what to do whith this great big thing. Plus we didn't know what the thigh was ! So we had examined this master piece off all sorts. It seems that it was a m m monster awsome I thought. Maybey i could look after it and clean him there is loads I could do whith him! But my mum said that I was not aloud to keep my monster in the house for any longer
Elizabeth
2/3/2014 03:32:42 pm
As the grand tour started so did my Brother's excitement. After all James had VIP treatment of a tour around his beloved White Hart Lane.
Jake
2/3/2014 03:41:18 pm
As I was trotting along the rocky path I saw a suspicious drill, pushing through the earth. As I went to investigate a peculiar flying mechanoid beat me to it and shot two poisonous darts at two American spec-ops protecting the weird machine. As I looked down the incredibly deep hole there was a pit full of molten hot iron boiling and bubbling in the cavern....SPLASH! I had dropped my bag into the hole containing my radio, how was I going to call for help? Was I ever going to get away?!
Abby
3/3/2014 12:03:38 am
The waves were pushing through the earth. The trees were blowing through the sky and beyond all of that layed a girl named pippa. Pippa was adventurous. Pippa was stong and pippa loved a challenge. Her parents weren't exactly the best lucking people in the town but luck on the bright side Pippa still loves them. Pippa lives in a stranded house on the east coast of Wales. She never really leaves her home as there is always a problem she needs to sort out. Unfortunately pippa has no friends and usually hangs around with her cousin named Hannah young.
Lewis
3/3/2014 01:03:33 am
One evening a house stood in the distance. It was just a few centimeters away from the big blue ocean. A man was in this house. He had heard in one year time a drill was going to go straight though the middle of the earth. One year later the drill became pushing though the earth.
Zak
3/3/2014 01:21:19 am
As I looked on the ground I saw loads of insect like catapiller,ladybird,
emily
3/3/2014 04:55:48 pm
I was walking back from the most amazing party ever it was Laurens’s 10th birthday we did ice skating. We all loved it. We were walking past a monument it was of a footballer and a miner. Suddenly the ground started to shake something was pushing through the earth or that’s what it sounds like. The footballer and the miner started falling over,” or now said, Molly Bowker and Joshua then something poppet out it was a ginormous turtle it was trying to find somewhere to lay her eggs it was a speaking turtle as well, cool.
Jacob
4/3/2014 12:38:08 am
Just as I was walking home from my grandmas house I saw a giant hand pushing through the earth. I was scared at first but captivated by its size. It was humongous then suddenly it stroked me on the head and gave me a giant peace of chocolate it was delicious . Then I realised it was from the best chocolate maker in the world Willy wonker . Then the giant held up a sign saying bye bye enjoy the chocolate. I was the first person to try a wonker bar it was so delicious . It was gorgeous
Molly r
7/3/2014 06:41:44 am
Me and my best friend had a hope and a dream they both linked to the same thing. We always wanted to fly up into space and be an astronaut so we asked our mums if we could have some tape a hammer some pins a fork and a old sweaty sock because me and Ava (my best friend) we're going to build a space rocket that could hopefully get us to space and back safely with no damage caused. So we built and we built until ... Finally we had finished it was looking so smart and well presented we went to take a break and got some blueberry muffins. After they had finished their muffins they jumped into the rocket and fired it up as soon as they got into the sky they kept pushing through the earth and then they were so close to reaching the moon but suddenly the rocket ran out of fuel so as they were falling from the sky there heads were going crazy filling up with junk they don't even need. Whe fell they had a super soft landing it
Ava
11/3/2014 06:42:51 am
How glad I am that the weather is changing. I love this time of year as I can start on my favourite past time gardening. I can start planning what I can grow this year , maybe flowers, maybe vegetables , but as usual I think it will be both. Looking out of the window the sun is shining brightly, time to get my gardening tools out . Dressed in my gardening clothes and welling tons and tools in hand I head for the vegetable plot. I dig into the soil and to my surprise I find the worms working hard just like me as they are pushing through the earth to see the first of the sunshine . Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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