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This week you have 5 words that must be put into your writing. They can be in any order but must all be there. The words are:
Pepper Crocodile Orange Forgot Soft It would help me greatly if you could highlight the words in bold so I can see them in your writing. Good Luck!
39 Comments
Josh
26/9/2014 01:14:11 am
One dull friday after school I looked out of the window and seen a peculiar creature crawling down the street I knew strait of it was a crocodile but this was no ordinairy croc it had bright pink scales , a pepper red head and a orange body. I ran all over the close to find it he was bouncing away on my friend robbies trampoline it was so soft it started to cry only crocodile tears78 and now thats the story of how I got my croc guy . COME HERE GUY TIME TO PLAY BALL!Goodbye mam see you later dad !!!
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:31:01 pm
Well done Josh, I like your choice of the word 'peculiar'. Please check 'a orange body'. This is the incorrect article. Here's some tips for this:
beau
26/9/2014 02:57:42 am
Hello I am mire and I love the colour ORANGE. What is your favourite? I am going to tell you a peculiar story to tell would you like to here it? Evan so I will tell you anyway it all started as I was walking down the hill to splash in the stream and I saw the strangest thing ever invented it was real life SOFT ORANGE CROCODILE and it was eating a pile of red PEPPAS that some body had thrown away onto the road side. As soon as it saw me it swam away quickly. When I told mam an dad they didn't believe me but I knew I would never FORGET.
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:32:19 pm
Well done Beau, I like that you have questioned the reader. Check your spelling of peppers.
Kate
26/9/2014 03:24:52 am
On Tuesday the 2nd of august I went to London with my caravan with my mum, dad,Laura and Lucy it was 4:49 in the morning. When we where there Laura went shopping with mum and Lucy,I and my dad on the shopping list there was peppers,crocodile meat,ice creams,oranges and other stuff but then I forgot to bring other things like other soft cuddly toys and other things to play with the next day when everything was set up we went into London on the train it was very busy but I stayed alive I enjoyed it.
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:34:26 pm
Good work Kate. I am pleased to see you have added a clause in your writing. Remember that even months need capital letters.
Lucy
26/9/2014 04:05:15 am
It was a bright and sunny day and i was late for school I forgot three os my planners yep it was another boring day at school I grabbed a orange on the way out. My first class was maths the old and very confusing maths so I said to miss "do we need your pencil cases out" I said she replied "yes you need to don't you" so I had it out and ready for work. Net class was animals it was our last lesson on crocodiles we where we're searching things about them and it was pretty interesting. Next it was cooking class and straight a way about peppers and different peppers so it wasn't that boring at all so it was the end of this story bye.
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:38:26 pm
Well done Lucy, I like the fact that you have included speech within your work. Remember to include a question mark if you are asking a question.
Luke.d.
26/9/2014 04:53:39 am
I was on holiday backpacking around Australia. I came across a smooth glistering river, it was so nice and peaceful that I stopped and had a quick snack beside it. I ate a ORANGE and a PEPPER sandwich, just then I was about to eat my last bite when I heard a voice from the river "that looks tasty" said the voice deeply " give me a bite" it shouted again. I looked around and to my surprise it was a CROCODILE speaking to me. Shocked, terrified and because I'm a little bit SOFT I ran for my life. As I was running I could hear the crocodile shouting to me "YOU'VE FORGOT YOUR BACKPACK". I never went back for it I just kept running.
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:40:02 pm
Super work Luke. I like this story and love the word 'glistening'. Remember if you shout something in your writing, think about what punctuation you could use to emphasise it.
Sadie
27/9/2014 07:11:47 pm
I woke up out of my comfy bed, my hair was so frizzy, I glanced at my dog calendar ''OH NO TODAY IS THE DAY I AM GOING TO A FASHION SHOW, I TOTALLY FORGOT!" I went in the shower to make sure my hair was silky so I will look good in the spotlight. I put on my favorite designer dress and my soft crocodile print shoes. I I took my dog, pepper, for a quick walk before the show. My chauffeur arrived in his bright orange Bentley to take me to the venue. The show was a success!
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:40:35 pm
Excellent work Sadie, keep up the good effort!
bethany
27/9/2014 07:11:56 pm
I was walking in the jungle one early morning and i began to get tired so i walked to the nearest pond and for my suprise i saw a orange crocodile i stared for hours and forgot about my journey i felt so soft and then i threw a giant red pepper at him,it hit him he turned clockwise and he stared at me with his black beady eyes and he did a summer salt towords me and i said to myself THIS IS THE LAST TIME I WILL VISIT HEAR!!! i ran for my life towords my boat
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:42:09 pm
Well done Bethany. I like the adjectives used to describe the crocodiles eyes. Please make sure you use a capital letter for 'i'.
Jessica I
27/9/2014 07:23:39 pm
Once there was an ORANGE CROCODILE who lived in the sewers of London- his name was Bob.Bob had massive green eyes and claws as sharp as daggers!He liked to eat PEPPER but it was very hard to get pepper in London so Bob decided to eat fish.One day ,when Bob got up out of his SOFT bed he FORGOT to look for fish the day before so he was starving! Suddenly Bob saw a fish but it was way ahead of him so Bob followed it. After five minuets Bob reached a place full of fish (salmon). Bob would never starve again!
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:43:22 pm
Good work Jessica. I like that you are experimenting with parenthesis (brackets) and that you are using capitals to emphasize your writing.
Katie
27/9/2014 08:26:40 pm
Tia was a little girl who lived at Buttercup zoo with her mam and dad. She enjoyed having leopards, tigers, monkeys but most of all the green CROCODILE. Tia sometimes FORGOT that some people were scared of crocodiles! Occasionally her dad would ask "do you want to help me feed the crocodile?". Tia loved to help her dad go and get the SOFT red meat and prepare it for it's lunch. Next Tia needed to put the meat onto an ORANGE tray and slide it into the hungry crocodiles cage. Tia called her crocodile PEPPER because all of her family loved pepper on their food.
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:45:27 pm
Well done Katie! I'm pleased to see you including punctuation in your writing.
Cobi
27/9/2014 09:43:40 pm
Before we had our pet goldfish we had a pet CROCODILE and his name was Snappy.We let him swim about in our small ORANGE paddling pool which had SOFT sides so if Snappy banged his nose which he did sometimes it wouldnt hurt.We found out from the vets that he had a skin allergy called (scalysoftyus) the only way to help cure him was PEPPER.We put the pepper on Snappy after he got out the pool we never FORGOT.Snappy skin got better but he grew to big so now he lives in a zoo and we visit him every month
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:44:18 pm
I like it! I'm pleased to see you experimenting with parenthesis (brackets).
McKenzie 5
28/9/2014 01:42:28 am
A crocadile is lost in the woods trying to get home his name was pepper as he walked he found an orange tree full of oranges he picked one up and it felt soft, as he eat loads of the oranges he forgot to go home when he realised that he got the oranges in a bag and went away.🐊🐊🐊
Mr Turner
6/10/2014 05:46:57 pm
A good attempt McKenzie. I'm pleased to see that you have added all the words required into your work. Don't forget to include full stops in your writing to break up the sentences.
Guy
28/9/2014 02:42:55 am
On Wednesday Sara came into make some Spanish meals and we all went to assambley to eat and cook the first meal was like a tomato soup, in the meal was PEPPER it was a funny shape the pepper it looked like a CROCODILE. Next she put some onion in some chopped up tomato, she put the blender on and stopped it immediately and said she had FORGOT to out in some SOFT cucumber. When it was finished it was like a cold ORANGE tomato soup the next dish was pialla which was served to the family they would put rice and seafood in it or anything they could find.
Neve
28/9/2014 03:43:06 am
Last night I had a dream that I was a few years back in time. The landscape was deserted and was covered with sand and cactuses. In my dream there was a purple, scaly crocodile. He had a tiny red hut and a pool of dirty water. He forgot a lot his name was sir forgotalot. Sir forgotalot was soft he didn't like fighting or anything to do with it! His favourite meal was fish covered in pepper followed by an orange, he ate it everyday. The weather is always sunny it never snows, never rains or there's never storms.
Robbie
28/9/2014 03:43:34 am
One day there was a big scary crocodile who lived in a big deep dark river within the rain forest . His skin was orange and had little spots which looked like sprinkled pepper . He had a long tail that was soft and squidgy. He loved to swim in the river with his friends he wasn't a angry crocodile he forgot all about being an snappy crocodile and he liked to help the other animals. He was called mr turner and he liked to play rugby . His faourite thing to eat was fish and chips . He ran REALY! Fast just like the wind .
Ethan
28/9/2014 04:21:58 am
When I went to have dinner at my Grans birthday party , I put salt and pepper on my food. MY Gran had a crocodile and I had a orange to start off with. My orange was soft but sweet as well, my dad forgot that we were at a party. For my main meal I had stake and it was the best thing I ever tried but right in the middle it was a bit juicy. My mam had fish for her main meal and she said it was delicious . At the end we had a picture of all of use.
Daniel
28/9/2014 04:56:24 am
Bob and I were going down to the woods to look for the orange crocodile that Kody told us about .
Jamie-lee
28/9/2014 04:58:49 am
Down by the lake there lived a huge green CROCODILE. He was a very unusual crocodile because he loved to eat ORANGE PEPPERS. One day crocodile realised that he had no more orange peppers so he went to go and look fore some more. After he had finished searching he found a green pepper. He bit into it with his razor sharp teeth it was delicious. He fort that it was so delicious that he went to go and pick some more green peppers. Then suddenly he forgot were to put them so he put all of his freshly picked peppers under his bed.
niall
28/9/2014 11:12:15 pm
I was going to a zoo with my family it was a long wait it was 2 hole houres. When I finally got there I wanted to see the ORANGE CROCADILLE I thought it was brilliant it was rare est CROCADILLE in europe. I actually got to stroke it because it was a trained animal,it felt SOFTand smooth . It was ment to have PEPPER sprinckled on its back to keep its skin healthy but the zoo keeper FORGOT to 76 next we went to see the penguins , they were fluffy and cute but there was one of them that was scruffy and had a broken foot he looked like had been in the trenches from world war 2.
bob
29/9/2014 12:59:18 am
hi my name is bob and I am from America. I will start chatting with you later on in the year. I am going to do some of the challenges you have set for year 5.I love the work and pictures you put on the blog.the work is so interesting.
Kayleigh
29/9/2014 01:35:09 am
Once there was a orange crocodile that was soft and kind, and loved red hot chilli peppers so much, that he forgot to eat his vegetables! But today was special, it was the chill-eating contest for all the orange crocodiles! So he asked his mum, "Can I go, please?" She said "No you're too small,and your doing a test about the Maya's!" At that very moment,he had a tantrum! "Ok you can go!" And he went! But he was too small, so instead he went to the park, and it was fun! This is my 100 word challenge I hope you enjoyed it
madelene
29/9/2014 03:37:45 am
“What would you like for dinner?” Dad asked
Luke p
29/9/2014 04:01:33 am
At the weekend me and my family went to a resturant for a family meal I had chicken with a PEPPER sauce with chips and vegetables it was very nice. My brother had chicken nuggets and chips. When we sat at our table the waiter asked what we wanted to drink I had a SOFT drink and my dad had a beer, my little brother had a ORANGE juice. Then my mam realised she had FORGOT her CROCODILE skin handbag in the car so my dad had to go back and get it.
Luke.p
29/9/2014 04:37:58 am
At the weekend my family and I went out for a meal we had chicken with PEPPER sauce and vegetables and my brother had chicken nuggets and chips. We at the resturant and the waiter took our drinks order my dad had a beer I had a SOFT drink and my other brother had a ORANGE juice. When we first arrived my mam realised she had FORGOT her CROCODILE skin handbag so we had to go back for it.
Joe part 4
29/9/2014 04:44:48 am
When Bob was looking for the sheriff he forgot about the dynamite. The sheriff set fire to it and it was barely 10 seconds till the bomb went off. Bob jumped in to the water, the bridge exploded like an egg hitting the ground. One crocodile came up to Bob then he found himself surrounded, he didn't think he would make it but suddenly there was an "oy". It was Dynamite Joey, he was back. He sprinkled pepper into the crocodiles noses. He had a soft orange rope he flung it and it swept to a relieved Bob.
kody
30/9/2014 01:13:59 am
As the crocodile was drinking a glass of coke he started to feel hungry. he walked through the jungle and found a large, orange pepper. He took it home and cooked it until it was soft." I cant wait to eat this," he said, as his mouth was watring. But he forgot the roly boly bird's warning that the large orange peppers were the hottest in the world. as he ate it his mouth went red like a volcano was exploding, and his eyes popped. also his brain fell out and he didn't know anithing and that was the end of the crocodile.
kody
30/9/2014 01:15:27 am
Sorry Mr Turner I forgot to change the capital letters
Henry
30/9/2014 03:58:14 am
In London Zoo there was an enormous, terrifying crocodile named Pepper. One dull and damp day, a group of tourists visited Pepper in his enclosure. They wanted to feed Pepper some soft orange carrots but they forgot to ask the zoo keeper for permission. As the silly people entered the enclosure, Pepper gave a mischevious grin before licking his giant, shiny chops. Before they knew it, they were in danger of being gobbled up. Quickly, Pepper snatched the carrots out of their hands and swiftly blocked the exit so they were trapped. The crocodile tied a napkin around his neck and stared directly at them...
George
15/10/2014 04:52:57 am
Once upon a time there was a orange crocodile called pepper.Pepper lived in the London sewers ,she lives with her mum her dad and her two brothers .every morning she had to turn the tap on so they can drink but one morning she forgot and they thirst for a day .After that she went to bed in her new soft bed,she slept it of and it was all the same again the end . Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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