It looks like one of the photographers little people has got themselves into a bit of a difficulty. You have 100 words to write about this picture. Make sure you use your imagination!
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Guy
15/5/2015 01:58:40 am
There was a lonely little boy that was very bored. So he started to play with his small Lego figure, in the back garden, on a tree stump. He was pretending the bird seeds were lave, he played for hours and hours until his mam yelled "tea is ready", so he gathered all his Lego figures,but that's what he thought he had left his favourite one! That night a crow found the figure,so the crow took it back to its nest. His baby's fought for it and they chewed it and ripped its head off and the boy never saw it again.
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:38:27 pm
Well done Guy. You have created an interesting story from the picture.
Beau
15/5/2015 06:03:58 pm
Once there was a girl who loved feeding the Lego birds. She loved them so much she fed each and every one of them twice a day! One day when she was going to feed the birds she found a Lego oak tree, which was unusual because they were very rare. She found a hole at the bottom of the trunk and decided to climb inside of it. When she got out of the old oak tree she saw real birds, which were fury and soft. The girl threw some bird feed to them and surprisingly real birds liked it even better than Lego birds! Eventually she decided that it was time to go home so she climbed back into the tree and went back to Lego land.
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:39:08 pm
An interesting story Beau.
Josh!
15/5/2015 08:33:29 pm
In this picture, it looks like a little Lego figure is on the trunk of a chopped down tree and it doesnt know that there is bird seed on the trunk of the tree and a black bird lands to eat the bird seed and it sees the Lego figure and goes after the little play minifigure. Would it survive?
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:40:30 pm
Interesting theory Josh. Good use of rhetorical questioning.
Lucy
16/5/2015 06:48:09 am
I was high up in a tree in great foliage in Brazil's great rainforest. In the heart of the Amazon. Where there are plenty of seeds for the birds to eat. On the southern side of the forest I saw a great tocotucan swooping down for the food. But instead he picked me up in his enormous beak I was in a vice like grip I could feel my feet leaving the platform higher and higher now above the tree tops. I was dropping and hit branches my head feeling all of a days where was I next...
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:41:49 pm
Lovely Lucy. You have used short sentences and punctuated well.
Wonderful Kate
16/5/2015 07:11:48 am
Carefully,I was making my way back home. I was walking the usual way,when I had been to drama, hoping to get a part in the play. Finally I had a part. My friend, Leila,and I were walking but when we got to the half trunk we went in different directions. Leila went left, I went straight on, stepping on to the half trunk. But when I climbed up there was a woodpecker having its dinner. Really, I thought it was the end of me, but it wasn't. The woodpecker picked me up by its beak and I thought I was gone.
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:42:20 pm
Good use of the clause Kate. Keep it up!
Evie mae
16/5/2015 04:49:02 pm
A girl was born on the 9th April but nobody knew her mam was pregnant with a child. The child is different to others, her body is small yet she has a really large heart and shows it to everyone, poor and rich. As time passes, its now her 16th and she gets a present from her mam, a bird but the bird took her and she started living with her bird.The end
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:42:44 pm
An interesting idea Evie-Mae.
evie
16/5/2015 05:02:23 pm
i've done my mathletics
Sadie
16/5/2015 08:49:57 pm
I used to love playing with Lego; my family bought it on certain occasions. Oh yes, last month I became a teenager; it was going great, until I opened my presents. This year I expected some new shoes or even a phone but as I started to unwrap my first gift, I owned another box of Lego. My mind was blown; I assumed that I wouldn’t receive any Lego this year. Soon after I found myself on a Lego hunt and one of them was on a tree stump, covered with seeds, a bird stood by it. Worst Birthday Ever!!
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:43:21 pm
This is well punctuated Sadie.
Robbie
16/5/2015 11:39:24 pm
There was a lonely little girl, who just stared and stared at an Eagle she did not move a muscle. The Pray stared and bent his head over her shadow . She threw seeds out onto the slippery slimey wood. The Eagle majestically snatched the seeds, HE WAS REALLY hungry . The little girl was really pleased about helping the big strong bird. And took food back to his nest for the baby birds.
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:44:37 pm
A good effort Robbie. I love the use of the adverb 'majestically' in your writing.
Neve
16/5/2015 11:40:55 pm
One day a little girl called Charlotte, who lived on a farm, let the chickens out on the field. The field was large and open, which ment that the chicken could Rome free anywhere. Rover, the chicken was an adventurous chicken,he pecked at a big pile of hay and suddenly found a little figure amongst it. He held it in his mouth and strutted back through the the gateway following the other chickens.From this day on he brings that figure everywhere with him.
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:45:11 pm
Well done Neve. You have used a comma to denote a clause very well.
Cobi
16/5/2015 11:58:29 pm
One day a boy went to the shop and he bought some Lego,when the boy got home he decided to play with his figure on a tree stump in his back garden. As the played with his Lego figure he came across some bird food and as he went to sweep it off a black crow swooped down and grabbed the tiny lego figure. The boy started to cry. The boys mum asked him "What is wrong" the boy said "A black crow just pinched my Lego figure". The mother said again "I paid £6.00 for abosolutly nothing.
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:46:02 pm
Interesting story Cobi. Don't forget to add punctuation within your speech especially when asking a question.
Katie
17/5/2015 01:09:27 am
One shiny sunny day, I was playing excitingly with Lego toys in the garden. My mam shouted me in for tea. Hurrying, I left my favourite Lego friend on the grass. Later when I had finished my scrumptious tea I skipped back outside to play again. Oh no, one was missing, my favourite! Looking around I saw it perched on an old tree stump which my mam used to put bird seed on every morning. Next minute a blackbird scooped down and started picking at the food. I wonder if he had picked the Lego figure up from the lawn?
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:46:37 pm
Lovely story Katie. I like the use of the rhetorical question at the end.
Madelene
17/5/2015 01:26:39 am
Deep down in the mystical woods, a boy named Charlie was playing with his fathers new invention...The Lego girl! He through it up in the air he chucked it on the ground and had so much fun. Then his father Charles came out and yelled for Charlie to come back inside. Little did Charlie know he left the Lego girl alone on a tree stump where Charlie layer the bird seed every Autumn... Suddenly a huge bird flew in as if from nowhere and stared at the little Lego girl. The birds huge claws appeared and scooped up the Lego girl and flew off into the sunset. A month later a man found it lying on the streets and from that little figure the brand on Lego began...
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:47:05 pm
Good work Madelene. This is an interesting story.
Jamie-Lee
17/5/2015 01:27:14 am
Let me tell you about my favourite story. I believe that stories can be very exciting! So any way on with the story, once there lived a young girl. She LOVED to play with Lego, and when I say LOVED I mean LOVED Lego! Her favourite Lego character was a little girl with short red hair. The little girl was named Emily , she called her Lego character Em you know short for Emily. They went on lots of fun and exiting adventures. But suddenly one day some thing tragic happened! Emily lost Em! Now let me tell you how. A few days ago Emily and Em went on a walk through the woods together, but Em fell out Emily's pocket she fell on a tree stump and was left with a huge bird of pray.....
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:47:43 pm
Lovely work Jamie-Lee. You have used a wide range of punctuation.
Luke.D
18/5/2015 05:52:03 am
"May Day, May Day, Calling all Lego figures".
Mr Turner
9/6/2015 03:48:18 pm
A really interesting idea Luke. You have done something that no one else has done.
Connor
8/9/2015 09:26:37 am
At the weekend my brother and I went to the Lake District and visited our Gran and Granddad at their caravan. We packed our rucksacks with our pack lunches and walked Woller crag which was around six miles. On the way back we went for the bus and my Granddad walked to the caravan. We went to the lake fishing for little fish. We had fish and chips for our tea. I had a shower and watched X factor then went to bed. Next morning I had breakfast and a shower put on my clothes and set off in the car for home. Along the road we got stuck in a traffic jam for around half an hour until it cleared and finally we can get on our way back home. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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