100 word challenge #23 + MATHLETICS

27/3/2015

This week the prompt is five words that you must put into your piece of writing. This means you should use 105 words altogether. They are:

PIPE SWAM GREEN CAREFULLY HORSE

If you can, try to highlight the word so that your readers can see you have used them all.

Have a lovely Easter and don't forget to complete the Mathletics workbooks for the Monday back.

26 Comments

Jeesica!

27/3/2015 04:56:21 am

As I jumped onto the horse, that was GREEN, a small man ran up to me...

"Help me!" he cried
"Why," I replied
"Because a pipe SWAM over to my house (that was in the middle of a lake), I'm cursed!"
"Ok" I whispered to myself because I thought it was rather weird. So I CAREFULLY slipped out of the old stable. Thankfully he didn't see me! I galloped away, on my horse, as fast as I could to my granny's house.

Finally, I got back to my granny's house and I told her what the old man said to me and she said he was probably drunk- I was extremely surprised by this because I had never seen a drunk man before!

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:03:11 am

Well done 'Jessica'. You have included all of the challenge words within your writing.

KAYLEIGH

28/3/2015 02:21:37 am

Suddenly Daffodil was going down the same country road that Milo had been down, and she was excited. She saw the GREEN grass and then chatted to the whether man, then set off again.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:03:30 am

Good work Kayleigh.

Ethan

29/3/2015 12:57:04 am

I was riding carefully and my green horse, though the smelly pipe.It was discusting because the pipe that I was riding on was the Sooers.The I saw Danny with his brite yellow horse so I cort up to him and were chating how the day has been and so far we had a wonderful time but now it was getting dark so we went Bach home on our horses.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:04:27 am

Well done Ethan. You have included all of the challenge words. Please read back through your work for spelling mistakes.

Guy

2/4/2015 07:33:07 pm

Hello my name is Stan and I work in the sewers,to day I have to go down to the sewers because there is a blocket PIPE " let's go". It stinks down here, the water is GREEN and there is a SWARM of rats. I can only see 3 meters in front of me. I could hear a HORSE that was above me, people think that the sewer is a horrible place but I quit like it. We are here the pipe is bloked with waste I need to be carefully. So I CAREFULLY took it out mission complete now I can go home.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:04:48 am

Good work Guy! I really like this story.

Bethany

7/4/2015 12:22:17 am

their once lived a HORSE who loved to swim but one day whilst he was swimming he saw a big GREEN PIPE! the horse was shocked and he was very scared but he also felt like he needed to do it.so the horse very CAREFULLY hopped out the water and plotted the plan...he was their at the green pipe after swimming and SWAM he reached it.he was not sure what to do but before he could do anything he felt a breeze he looked it was the green pipe! and the horse was never seen again DUN DUN DUHHHHHH!

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:05:46 am

Good work Bethany. You have included all of the challenge words. Check back through your work for errors.

Josh!

7/4/2015 01:33:44 am

On Easter Sunday we went on a horse to barnard castle on a horse but the handler crashed and we fell in the sewer carefully we climbed down the ladder to the green smelly pipe and swam towards the nearest exit out of the sewage system and went back home and had a shower to get the smell of us.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:06:18 am

A good effort Josh

Jamie-lee

7/4/2015 04:55:02 am

Today is very exiting for me because its my first ever HORSE riding lesson! My mum said that I'll get quite dirty so I think I'll wear my GREEN jumper. I just remembered that I'm going swimming today too, so I'll be very tired. Last week I SWAM excellent! Yesterday one of our pipes broke, so water went every were! It was a big round black PIPE. At the riding centre were I'm going we're allowed to bring carrots, apples and even sugar cubes to feed the horses! I think that I might bring some apples. I wonder which horse I will be riding today I usually ride Frazier.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:06:43 am

Super work Jamie-Lee. I really enjoyed reading this story.

Summer Time Sadie

10/4/2015 08:30:51 pm

That feeling of amazement has already started passing through my lungs, it is like I have just won the lottery or even won the Olympics. This is the day when all the adults bet on a HORSE. My Mam has bet £5 on a horse called Wind PIPE!

Today is the Grand National horse race, where horses and jockeys race to win lots of money, I am so lucky because I'm going to see them race. The jockeys CAREFULLY groom their horses before starting the race. A horse SWAM elegantly in the bath to freshen up. Fresh GREEN grass stands out brightly within the racecourse.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:08:12 am

Well done Sadie. You have written a very interesting story.

Katie

10/4/2015 09:53:31 pm

Emerald was a stunning HORSE and he was galloping through a magnificent deep canyon. Whilst he was galloping his mane swished and danced in the light, summer breeze. He was called Emerald because of his GREEN charming eyes. He saw large green trees, which stood like giants with PIPE like brown trunks. Eventually he stopped running when he reached the fast flowing wide river. He CAREFULLY SWAM across to the other side to be reunited with his lost family. They had lived in the canyon for many years and he was unbelievably happy to be with his family again and missed them a lot.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:08:40 am

I like the use of adverbs within your writing Katie.

Cobi

12/4/2015 04:30:22 am

As the clanging of the PIPE got louder the family became more and more suspicious of what was banging and making that mysterious noise was it a bear, HORSE or even an elephant. as the family CAREFULLY walked threw the GREEN lake forest In Africa. As the family got closer the noise it got louder, know body knew where they were at. The father could see some thing at the other side of the lake there was only one way across you couldn't go around it or over it so you had to go threw it, so the family SWAM threw the lake, and they found out it was a bear.

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:09:10 am

Well done Cobi. You have used a comma to denote a clause.

Matthew

15/4/2015 01:12:32 am

One sunny Saturday morning the farmer went round the fields to check on all the animals to see if they were all there. He went the horses field next. There was a massive puddle with a bright GREEN PIPE in the middle. A HORSE SWAM through the puddle and CAREFULLY pushed the PIPE to the side. The farmer picked it up with his tractor and took it to his trailer. After he had put it in the trailer he went over to the far field and he saw a blue alien lying on the GREEN grass it was weird. After he saw it up close he fainted and no-one knew if he ever woke up...

Mr Turner

30/4/2015 12:09:27 am

An interesting story Matthew.

Time for Lucy's

3/5/2015 04:32:56 am

In a big beautiful castle, there was a princess trapped with no where to escape. One day she was sick and tired of the terrible tower and dug through the pipes and eventually swam through the mote of the castle. Carefully she rode the horse far away through the fields of fresh green grass. After years of searching she finally found her handsome prince. When she found her true love they were married and sent to find the most prettiest castle in all the land. They were soon married and it was then that the beautiful princess found her happily ever after with her beloved prince.

Kate

3/5/2015 08:19:15 pm

I was in the GREEN field next to my house it was really hot outside, and I needed a drink of water but the PIPE had burst and there was only lemon juice but that was too sour. The HORSES in the stable were being fed, they live across the old road. I really wish there was a well, then I would only have to get a cup and CAREFULLY bring it to where I was sitting. We did have a paddling pool because it burst, I SWAM with a needle in my hand to have a little fun, but it burst!

Beau

4/5/2015 05:52:41 am

One day a green horse, a purple dog and a yellow pig were wandering down the endless road when a salesman, smoking a pipe stopped them and took them back to a circus. Where they saw cats juggling, elephants swimming and hamsters dancing! He put the green horse on a tight rope and he told him to carfully walk it. Eventually he reched his goal. Meanwhile the pig learnt to sing and the dog learnt to bark the alphabet!

The crowd loved the whole act.

beau

8/5/2015 05:30:06 am

I just thought I might tell you all that we are 25th on the leader board out of the world

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