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100 word challenge #18 + mathletics

29/4/2016

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Today you have been given an image. There is so much you could write for this.
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Things to think about:
  • Give them a character, name, personality
  • Where have they come from?
  • What differences can you see?

There are no challenge words for this, so it is your own creative piece of writing. I'm looking for the best, imaginative piece of writing (punctuated correctly) for a large amount of table points this week.
24 Comments
Ethan W
29/4/2016 08:04:15 am

one sunny day there was six elderly men visiting a beach they had come from a foreign country called reland it was a country where the lost bins went for retirement, ethan jake connor harry Thomas and mark they were all best buddies and loved to talk about dinosaurs. but one day a dinosaur came to wipe out the country of reland they called the reland military fort garbagebin that had many secret weapons like the trash gun. that was there main weapon they used it to destroy the big bins like big bad bob. The Tyrannosaurus rex did not stand a chance against it.

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Jake V
29/4/2016 09:00:05 am

once upon a time there was a boy called jake he deleted his blog for school and then went to the beach and there was these 6 bins sat there on the bench talking about how the worlds technology is so hard to understand but then jake sat beside them and taught them a few things about technology so later on there minds were thinking how much rubbish can he throw into me the other trash cans past out because of the amount he new so when he went home to do his blog the teacher said welldone jake because he sent his blog not deleted it.

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ethan s
30/4/2016 02:48:54 am

I think that all of the bins are really old people and their all talking about how when there were young their all saying that “I went surfing in the sea and it was great fun” said the bin closest to the right, and the two twins (the oldest of them all) called Billy and Bella always complain about the world and how people litter and just how all the cool I phones come out when they’re about to die (get replaced with a new bin and recycle them!) Then the other bins are Danny, gorge, Ethan and Luke they complain about cigarettes being left on their head’s!

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Scarlet
30/4/2016 07:04:19 am

The Tubs
Meet Jade,Tom,Esme,Jack,Carmen and Emit. Their all recycling bins but they dreamed of a thing to be HUMAN! One day a tiny new creature climbed on Carmen,it was called a SMS aorther wise know as the Sea Money Spider. As soon as, it webbed down it left six sea tokens. Then the next day a Sea well, a giant sea...

SNAIL went on top of Jade and said" What is your wish young ones of you the?"
Tubs family," explained Emit
"OK tubs what are your wishes," started again Amber the Sea Snail.
"Well are wish is....... To Be Continued!😎

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liam w
1/5/2016 08:38:30 am

there were once some old people sitting on a bench talking about how much people litter these days and how bad its for the invement, they love to sit there and talk to each other they would sit there in the rain or snow what ever the weather no matter what.they always see litter lying around the place on the road on the path they would go and pick it up all the time and put it in the bin next to them then they will sit down.

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Lucy.B
1/5/2016 12:02:38 pm

"Well to start of the night of, I would like to say that littering is bad. There are lots of bins around so put your rubbish away!" Shouted Bob.
"I totally agree." Interrupted Sarah. "There are plenty of bin around so use them."
"In the morning, when we turn back into bins, I better have some food in my tummy." Said Claire, (the one Who always complains.)
"Claire is right," called Beth. "People should use us more often."
"Yeah it's not like we have anything planned."
After 30 minutes Sarah interrupted (again) "Look, it nearly morning now we're going to turn back into bins in about 12 minutes."
"Good because I'm so hungry!" Claire the who always complains.

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kelsi
1/5/2016 02:05:06 pm

Beside a windy seaside I saw six green bins, they looked like faces and one of them didn’t all of them had a different colour on them red, grey, dark green, white, brown and blue. The blue one looks like it had a mouth and all of the rest looked liked eyes I can see a sea a island across the sea I can see big fluffy clouds in the sky on all of the bins they had a curved arrows one bin sat alone all black with litter on it the sky was as blue as the sea whale.

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Tilly R
2/5/2016 01:46:02 am

One day, two kids ran down to the beach, but then there was a row of bins blocking the path. One of the bins said " this beach is closed"
And the children questioned "why is it closed bin" "I want to go to the beach"
And so, the bin explained "if you want to go to the beach, try to get past us"
So the children kept on trying to get past, but the bins could move. In the end, the children gave up. The children never got to go to the beach in the end but they got to get a massive ice cream.

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Connor
2/5/2016 03:29:19 am

The Green Bin Brigade,

They lived on Green Gate sea front in quiet corner of the car park , they had beautiful view at wind farm out at sea. They collected litter ever 5 minutes the blue bin was topped up every 15 minutes by the many dog walkers that had been walking along the beach front.
Once a week a ice cream van came to visit the car park to sell ice creams and lolly pops to the visitors , which helped fill up the Green Bin Brigade as part of the recycling program within the car park.
The Green Bin Brigade was visited by Dennis the big truck who came to empty the bins.

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michael
2/5/2016 03:48:52 am

Once there was a family of bins, a family with 5 children in it and a Dad and a Mam. The children were called Plastic, Cans, Green Glass, White Glass and Brown Glass. There parents are called Litter ( thets the Dad ) and Carboard ( that’s the Mam ).They lived on a tarmack path that lead on the sand to a Tahiti Bora Bora. They loved it there but were they were people were litteres so the family was very hungry since they live on rubbish. Im surprised the family isnt fat since they used to live on rubbish.

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Deyla
2/5/2016 04:59:35 am


“What has the world become?”Bob sighed as he stared hard at the ramshackle street covered in litter that stood before him. Just across the road some bins were picking up a conversation “what do you think he’s doing?”Whispered Eco the recycling bin. All of a sudden a man hurled open his front door and strode out with a juice bottle. The bottle bin got very excited but when the lazy man had finished he just threw the bottle on the floor. “b-but,” stammered Bertie bottles. He couldn’t get over the shock he just had. The bins then decided to make their own posters to stop littering.

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Amelia
2/5/2016 06:28:51 am

One sunny but extremely cloudy afternoon, Mrs. Jars, Mr.Card, Mr.Shoes, Mrs.Tins, Mr.Carrier-bag, Mr.Pots and Mrs.Smith the mangeress were arguing-arguing wether or not they had the most rubbish/litter. It was a very long argument and one small helper ( Mrs.Jars ) was quite sick of all these loud and aggressive voices. That breezey night, Mrs.Jars had a plan, it was to SWAP, yes, swap the old labels around so everyone could have a fun turn at winning! It took round about a hour's time- but it was worth it! The next morning( it was a Tuesday ) all the recycle bins were very joyful, it was awesome. As the days slowly passed by there was no more arguments.

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Kate
2/5/2016 08:02:37 am

One dull, dark and misty night, at a beach there were smashed pieces of glass on the remains of the beach about to be torn. There was litter, wasted food, boxes (that were used to deliver the chips in) and there was cut metal cans and all sorts! The next morning, it was sunny but the mess but the mess had not left it’s ‘holiday.’ In weeks the council decided to pay for the damage and tidy the mess, now therefore there are now litter bins for people to put their rubbish in instead of leaving it laid around everywhere.

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ruby o
2/5/2016 09:39:30 am

In a row 6 green bins stood and one normal one.The bins had eyes and a mouth (can they talk) all the bins were stood like statues and they looked like old ladies stood in a row waiting for a cup of tea. They stood silently waiting for rubbish to fill there tummies for there lunch. When they are waiting they always talk about (rubbish). We now no to always put our rubbish in our bins.

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Casper
2/5/2016 12:21:28 pm

Once long ago rubbish entered our atmosphere and crashed. The aftermarth was horrible, rubbish was everywhere. The planet cleanup sent Bottle who cleaned up glass, Cloth who cleaned up material, Plas who cleaned up cleaned up plastic, Metal who cleaned up cans. Litter cleaned up anything that could not be recycled and Boxy was leader, he cleaned up cardboard. They all looked very similar, green in colour with black eyes. Every night, when the humans had gone to bed the team would come to life and collect as much rubbish as possible and sort to each other. FOOD resources!!!

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Sol
2/5/2016 02:03:57 pm

"Meet Jeff he complains about everything"said Dave "no I don't "said Jeff . "Plastic bins what ever happened to metal bin harrrrrrr" Jeff complained "Jeff why do care about bins"said Dave ''because plastic can melt eaisely "reaplied Jeff. " jeff jeff jefff the bins won't melt unless someone gets a magnifing glass and hold it up to the sun"said Dave . "Nooooooooo! The wrong items are in the wrong bins whyyyyyy"shouted Jeff "calm down Jeff" said the bin "who said that"said Jeff "me Gary the talking bin" "how is there a bin talking to me" said Jeff. "arhhhhhhh few it was a dream "hello" arhhhhh!!.

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Tilly b
3/5/2016 10:17:23 am

Hello, I am one of those big green bins, you see in rubbish tips all over the country, and I'm not happy! People like to think that with bins you kick them and dump rubbish right next to us but that isn't how it works!
We have stickers on us clearly saying what to put in each of us and what not to put in. Are you humans just too lazy to put your own rubbish in your bins or ones that are provided in tips? Or even worse just dumping your rubbish anywhere, on paths and roads!
So next time you are putting rubbish in the bin just be more careful, and put your rubbish in the correct bin and don't leave it on the ground! Keep Britain tidy!

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daniel
3/5/2016 10:40:29 am

One bright early morning, a man was on his way down to put some litter in the bin. When he got there, there were lots of different types of bins to choose from. It could have gone in any bin. They all started to argue about which bin it was going to go in. The bin that had the most litter at the end of the day would get the honour of being the bin that stands outside Buckingham palace and get’s litter thrown inside. The man had a hard decision to make… he threw it in the normal bin.

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ruby a:)
3/5/2016 12:07:44 pm

Vivian wanted to be the waste queen but Polly was and Eddie was king Vivian was a young lime green waste princess her father had died when he was 30 he was called Tommie and her mum was called amber she was a waste model she was butifull.vivian wanted to kill Polly but Eddie was strong and always with Polly she discussed to put a king cobra snake in her bed both Eddie and Polly died and Vivian the new waste queen made her big brother john the waste king he had to keep her safe and the gards did.

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Emily
3/5/2016 12:09:08 pm

As the waves smashed against the rocks on shore, an old man walked past with his dog."Oh dear Bella, one day no one will litter". "There are loads of bins, I don't think that they're put there to look pretty do you Bell? Bins are out there for a purpose," He added.He and his dog watched the people throwing rubbish on the floor for a while and eventually walked to the pier."Oh," sniffed the man, "Your mam liked to come here, and sit by the bench listening to the squarks of seagulls.", "When we were young, there wasn't any rubbish at all," "I bet she will remember that time when we were dancing and I fell into the sea," laughed the man " But don't you worry, she'll be watching us"... (130)

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Alicia
3/5/2016 01:16:08 pm

As the sun set on Yabbee Creek boulevade the gigantic tubs of Yabee Creek wait patiently for their next delivery. The tubs known to you and I as recycling bins are a huge hit amongst the locals. So much so they have all been named as Betty, Boris, Booboo, Bob, BIll and Bessie. The bins stand proud through all weathers knowing that do such a wondeful job to help the environment. Each bin is individually marked on the front with a colourful sticker, the locals think ths is to indentify what goes inside the bin, however the bins say its more to match their personalities. Betty is flamboyant and likes to stand out with red. Whereas Bill is more careful and opts for a white sticker. The bins become so excited when strangers come and deposit rubbish into their mouths, even more estatic when they get it in the correct bin.

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Emma
4/5/2016 09:12:41 am

As I was working for the community (litter picking) I saw 5 green bins I thought I'll empty the bin bag, as I was about to tip the rubbish In the bin but suddenly the bin spoke at first i did not know who was talking until I looked at the bin it seemed to move, it said " no no no, them cans go in that brown bin over there, glass goes in me so just rember that ok don't won't to mess with eco system right or the world will dismantle." " ok and thank you see you next time."

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James
5/5/2016 11:55:27 am

Homework




Nigvdureizx (nig-va-doo-ree-zon-ex) is a planet far away in a different Galaxy (not the chocolate bar) and 6 aliebins called: White stripes, Red-cycle, Purpely, turquwoise, blank, coco and blu. They are on a mission to find out why some people litter because on their planet littering is so bad that if you do, you get kicked out. White stripes is a robot who eats anyone who dares drop litter. The aliebins always complain that the world is too messy and how that since people never put rubbish in bins, all of the aliebins are hungry.

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Jessica
8/5/2016 04:21:53 am

One bright sunny day a little girl was walking along the beach with her Grandma. Grandma asked the little girl to put the rubbish from their picnic into the recycling bin so off the little girl went. When she arrived she saw all the green bins and imagined them to be like aliens sent to Earth to help us recycle our rubbish.Three of the bins are triplets and constantly bicker and fight over the glass bottles brought for recycling.The metal can bin is very grumpy as he sits next to the noisy triplets, however the plastic bottle bin is very relaxed and spends her days practicing her yoga. The last bin is very greedy and is always chomping newspapers through his big, wide mouth. At the end of every busy day at sunset they fly back to their planet in the last grey bin which is really a spaceship, or so the little girl imagined...........

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