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Now, this week’s prompt is all about the sense of touch. It is:
…what was that I could feel?… Make sure you think carefully about the tense – when did it happen? Check that the story makes sense and that your ideas link together.
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Josh!
23/1/2015 12:56:43 am
One day I decided to go on fort boyard ultimate challenge, I was just doing a challenge of not hitting any of the wooden bars WHAT WAS THAT I FEEL beneath my feet it was a rat a unhygienic little rat it started nibbling on my right Nike trainer it bit right through it I sprinted towards the large stainless steel door to my surprise it was locked.The CCTV cameras and security officers saw me struggling , ran towards the challenge door and quickly unlocked the door suddenly 1000s of rats were realesead on the 1st floor and,the pest control resolved the accident and everything was fine.
Jessica!
23/1/2015 01:40:34 am
It was a sunny Sunday morning when i went for a walk with my friend, Jamie-Lee. We walked over to the river at the other side of my house. Then she felt a fury hand on her leg but when she looked down she couldn't see anything! "WHAT WAS THAT I COULD FEEL?" asked Jamie-Lee.
Katie
24/1/2015 04:15:14 am
It was a bright, sunny morning when I woke up nervously because Ant and Dec told me yesterday that I had to complete the trial.
Kate
24/1/2015 06:19:43 pm
I was at my grans house but then I heard something I asked gran if she heard it but she said no.i was thinking about asking my gran if me and her could go to high force but my leg weren't working,so I went slowly down the stairs and it was 16:12 then I heard the front door shut, what was that I could feel? My gran came in talking about when I was going home but I ignored her, so she said "are you listening to me" and I whispered "yes well kind of" I froze!
Lucy
24/1/2015 06:22:01 pm
One midnight in the hotel. Everything was black or just my imagination. I was holding a candle. I said "what was that I could feel?" It felt like I was the only person in the hotel! I was mortified, when I saw all the dead people! My heart was pounding, so I started running to my room. It was locked! My mum would say, put all the lights on to see where you are, but the lights didn't work! I woke up from my dream and looked around, it was just a dream, but remember put all the lights on!
Smiley Sadie
24/1/2015 07:16:16 pm
What an amazing weekend I had! I had just come back from filming a new children’s program. I was one of the very first contestants on ‘What Was That I Could Feel!!?’ It was a fun game show that tested my skills and bravery. The worst thing I had to do was put my hand in smelly boxes that were in a scary cave and guess what was inside. Sometimes there was only slime but often there were creepy crawlies. The most enjoyable part was at the end when all contestants had to race down a water slide to exit the building and win a prize.
neve
24/1/2015 07:58:11 pm
It was Halloween night and I was visiting a haunted house and I was wearing a Halloween costume, which was a zombie school girl, I looked petrifying, it took ages to get there. At last we arrived at the haunted house of horror. what was that I could feel, It was a spider I was screaming like mad! AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
Luke.p
24/1/2015 08:26:32 pm
Last Saturday I travelled to spenymoor swimming baths with my brothers football team and my dad and little brother.Once we had got changed my family and I put all of our clothes and what ever we did not need in a lockert for safe keeping.Then we got into the pool I had lots and lots of fun but then as soon as I had a swim and played some water polo the great huge yellow/ orange slide it was really wavey
Jamie-lee
24/1/2015 09:10:06 pm
On 7th August I was finally moving house, we were moving into an old castle! It was even believed to be HAUNTED! I didn't believe in ghosts or monsters though, but suddenly I felt some thing on my back...what was that I could feel... I thought it was just a gust of wind. The castle was bleak and deserted, then I went up to explore my bedroom. It was just the same as downstairs there was no colour the rooms were all black and grey, so I decided to decorate, mum said the decorator would be hear in a few weeks, but I couldn't wait that long!
Luke d
24/1/2015 09:36:05 pm
What was that I could feel? it was the middle of the night and the electricity went out. I was down stairs looking for a torch, but when I put my hand in the cupboard I could feel something gooey. I didn't know what it was, so I put my hand in the next cupboard but I felt the same thing again. I kept on searching for the torch and I found it amongst the goo. I quickly turned it on to find out what it was, phew!! it was only a smashed jar of jam.
Matthew
25/1/2015 12:06:26 am
I was asleep in my nice cosy bed until my horrible brother Adam turned the bed room light on so I got up and got clothes on and went down stairs for my breakfast Ihad mini chocolate weetabix after I Had eaten it sat down in front of the tv and watched youtube it was boring so I asked if I could to the park my mam said yes.I went to call on my friend john and asked if he wanted to come as well he said yes.John quickly got his shoes on and ran outside and slammed the front door. We both walked slowly to the road to cross it took a while but we eventually got across the road then we ran the rest of the way there soon we were at the I went down the slide when I got to the bottom I said to my self what was that I could fees ?
Guy
25/1/2015 12:28:51 am
Hello my name is Josh and I am a deadly spy,I work for mi5. I am the top agent, I spy on people that have stolen stuff like for example money,crowns,laptops and even people! It is a tough job and I have never been caught. To day I am after a man called jack he stole lots of money. He is in Poland and so are we, he is in the factory up ahead we are in the factory, we were walking backwards but then I thought . To my self what was that I could feel?...
cobi
25/1/2015 01:22:54 am
In 1945 the second world war began between England and Germany . But they were not the only countries in world war two there were also France, Canada, Australia ,New Zealand and America they were the countries on Britain's side, however the Germans had back up as well but they only had two other countries and they were Italy and Japan. America drop two atomic bombs on Japan after the war had ended the Japanese were shouting " WHAT WAS THAT I COULD FEEL ? " After the second bomb was dropped the Japanese surrendered as there moto was to never give up even when the war was declared over.
Kayleigh
25/1/2015 02:17:11 am
Daffodil didn't know that she was getting near Torquay, but Red did. Once they were there, Daffodil was amazed. But Daffodil lived near Havisters...
bethany
26/1/2015 01:13:14 am
When i was at the beach,a warm sunny day,i was having the time of my life until the wind picked up and what was that i could feel? the rough sand sweeping past my face.i did not like the thought of sand scratching across my face.so i ran towards the sea my sister ran after me and made me laugh so much that i fell into the water and got salty tastless sea water in my mouth i was nearly sick but i was not.i ran back to my parents who had been collecting sea shells all day
Madelene
26/1/2015 03:08:13 am
As I walked through the damp dusty hallway i glanced at the painting on the wall I reached out and touched it and I thought what is that I can feel then I looked and it was a picture of a dark mysterious house. "Just like the one I grow up in" i whispered to myself. It was then at that moment I remembered the person who looked after me while I lived there my awful stepmother. Suddenly the door slammed "you" I said "there you are" the women said.
Beau
26/1/2015 04:27:30 am
One day Millie set out on a walk. She didn't know where she was going or how long she was going to be. She just knew she was going on a walk! As she toddled off her feet seemed to take her into a Forest. The Forest was bright and cheerful with nature hanging from the trees and moving on the ground. Suddenly a dark cloud came from the south slowly heading in her direction. At her amazement a shower of rain thrashed against her skin. After the cloud had cleared up she wondered to herself what was that I could feel? Soon she realised it was rain because as soon as she got home everyone was saying to her "did you see that rain as it came so quickly and then moved on?" "Yes! I did" she said in a confused sort of way.
Henry
27/1/2015 02:56:09 am
I was walking through the fair ground and I saw a new ride. It was my favourite type of ride. A ghost train. So I said to my friend, "shall we give it a try?" "Yes why not," responded my friend. So we hopped eagerly on. The ghost train set off with a clank and a jerk and soon we were speeding through the dark. Half way through the ride my friend and I jumped off and ran behind the track and then we started to cause mayhem. Suddenly I put my hand in a mysterious hole. Then I asked myself "WHAT WAS THAT I COULD FEEL?
Ethan
27/1/2015 03:21:14 am
At the midle of the night.What was that I could feel.But it was only my cat called Jinjer so I fell back to sleep.Then I had a night mair and I shouted for my mam.Then she came though and said are you ok "yes mum" "what was the matter"."I just had a night mair all right then, should we go to sleep now yes.
Daniel
27/1/2015 05:09:00 am
Last week i was taken hostage in california and they asked me questions about my friends and family, so i didn't tell them any thing about my friends and family but then they put a blindfold on me and I had to walk around and then I touched something and i said "what was that I could feel "i touched slime and it felt like water mixed with grapes mashed together.I was being beaten up with baseball bats and sticks but my dad came in and helped me defend myself against these thugs .Then we made our escape from them and we went abroad.
Lucy
30/1/2015 02:05:27 am
In the caravan during the day, I was stood next to my mum then suddenly she froze! So I ran to the phone and called the hospital. "what's that I can feel in my pocket"! It was my mums phone! I ran as fast as i could to get someone, when I did they froze! Then I saw the ambulance coming and I asked, "will they be ok"? They replied "Yes they just got a shock from what had been and happening or they started to feel dizzy and froze, this is just temporarily and we will get them sorted in no time!"
evi
7/2/2015 04:25:16 pm
sorry but i couldn't do this Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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