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This is the penultimate prompt of this year. That means there is one more prompt after this! Your writing is getting so much better with some excellent story lines. This week the prompt is:
…the forest seemed alive as… Don’t forget to only use 105 words altogether. Make sure your writing makes sense.
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Jacob
7/7/2014 03:46:16 am
Last week my dad took me to brazil so I could see the rain forest (the amazon rain forest) on the plane I was so exited I couldn't wait to see all the brilliant animals that habitat there . When I got there we got sorted in to our hotel there was a goose feather bed a smooth floor and a birch table and chair . The next day we set of to the amazon rain forest ,after a couple of ours we finely arrived at the butiful mind blowing forest . The forest was alive as I stepped into the amazon it was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen .
Erin
8/7/2014 01:53:43 am
As the animals awoke the forest seemed alive as I stepped further into it. Suddenly I felt a cold finger run down my spine, I turned around in shock! To my surprise I saw all so many am
Molly r
9/7/2014 02:55:13 am
Two young girls wandered through the forest. But deeper and deeper they got, they found that the forest seemed alive as a video that had been put on a time laps. The forest was alive they couldn't believe there eyes. One of them was so shocked that she magically started to jump up and down very fast and she couldn't stop. The other one was doing the same but she was shouting " I'm jumping for joy. We're jumping for joy. Weeeeeeee " how would they stop?
Romana
9/7/2014 05:49:04 am
The amazon rain forest was swaying in the wind. The animals were allowed with noise and you could here the ripples of water in your ears ringing like a bell ,every second. it was so lively the forest seemed alive . But now in the year 3000 AD Its a hot pile of malted rock with melted metal. How do I know all this well .. that's a another story !
lewis
9/7/2014 05:49:07 am
My family took me to Brazil for a special holiday. We went to a forest. The forest seemed alive as the animals all started to dance to I like to move it move it. It was crazy we were all shocked. So we started to have an adventure around the fascinating forest. We heard about the score with Brazil versus Germany 1-7 what a result the goals were amazing because we watched them on BBC sport on the laptop. There was a really good reception of Wi-Fi in the forest.
Holly
11/7/2014 08:04:10 pm
They wondered through the forest , not knowing where they were going. It was dark and rain was slowly beginning to fall. They were terrified. The forest seemed alive as there shadows began to dance. The animals whispering secrets from years and years ago. A deserted wooden cabin lay silently in the middle of the forest , the sound of a fire burning coming from within. The two girls looked at each other and the older one of the pair stepped forward. She lay her hand on the rusty door handle and pulled it open. A bright light shone into her eyes and someone began to speak. They spoke the words no one could ever repeat.
Molly b
14/7/2014 03:15:07 am
The rain forest was quiet to quiet but round the other side of the forest the forest seemed alive as a wild bear. But the quiet side of the forest was sunny and the other side was rainy I thought to myself this is strange . But then I saw that there was a waterfall on the rainy side and that's what was making it rain .
Elizabeth
16/7/2014 04:28:14 am
The sun was shining,so Dad decided he would take James and I to Hemsterley forest on a bike ride. Dad packed the car, pincnic, bikes, and helmets, check. We drove the short 10 minutes to the forest, when we got there the forest seemed alive as the bight rays of sunshine shone thought the trees onto the forest floor. There was a breeze as we rode along the cycle paths, making shodows on the floor in front as we rode further into the thichet of the forest. The steam trickled alongside us, it was like music to our ears. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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