Questions for you to think about:
Where has it come from?
What does it want with?
Is it dangerous?
As our focus this last week has been on relative clauses, I would expect you to include at least one within your writing.
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This week we have a picture for the prompt.
Questions for you to think about: Where has it come from? What does it want with? Is it dangerous? As our focus this last week has been on relative clauses, I would expect you to include at least one within your writing.
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kate
4/12/2015 10:52:16 am
There once was a town in the middle of know-where. Humans rarely visited because it was believed that there were huge animals there because of a scientist, who kept lots of animals. But one day he was doing something completely different, he was creating a hand cream that keeps you from having germs for up to 100 hours. Unfortunately, he dropped his sample on to all his animals. So later that week, he took a drive and found an abandoned lovely town that looked like a un bought 5 star holiday resort! The lucky man loved the experience of that!
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Liam M
5/12/2015 02:19:33 am
This is Liam Moffatt reporting live in Japan on the 23rd of November 2015. Two hours ago someone spotted a giant sheep floating in the air so we asked the individual where has it come from? He stated that he didn’t know how it got there. We need to find out what does it want and is it dangerous to those living in this area? However, at the moment this information is not available to the public until tests are done. We would advise members of the public to not approach this giant sheep for theirs and their children’s safety.
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Daniel
5/12/2015 04:20:28 am
One early morning in Spain, Mr grumpy who was up very early once again. That morning he came knocking on the door. I got changed and went down stairs to answer the door. Suddenly Mr Grumpy grabbed me and dumped me in a huge sack. Then the sack was dumped on the ground and I jumped straight out. Right before my eyes I saw a giant sheep. Frantically Mr grumpy quickly said “ I have been trying to win the biggest sheep contest “. The next day Mr Grumpy went to the sheep show and won. He was very happy.
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LucyB
5/12/2015 11:05:04 am
Dear diary,
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Connor
6/12/2015 02:31:42 am
I predict this story is about somebody who blew up an inflatable bear in Canada which was in Morrison's car park frightening the customers. One lady was so frightened she drove her car up onto the footpath and burst a tyre, its a good job I was there to help her change it because she hadn't a clue what to do.
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Amelia
6/12/2015 09:59:58 am
one windy Afternoon, there was a huge festival held at the local park. Loads of people were dressed up, had floats or sold food.Everyone was having such a good time, they never even spotted that one of the white sheep floats had gone missing!A little while later, Holly who was passing by noticed it and realised that it was one of the floats.So she went back,drove to the festival and told them that it was stuck in a tree. When they got there,they heaved it out from the tree and took it safely back to the festival.
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Jessica orrell
6/12/2015 10:38:20 am
One sunny hot day I was on route to Summer's birthday party. My Dad was driving and my Mum was in the front passenger seat and I was in the back with my headphone listening to Taylor Swift. All of a sudden I heard my Mum give a very loud scream...''OHHHH MY GOODNESS, what on earth is that ?'' I looked up to see what it was that Mum was meaning . I pulled my headphones off and could see a huge giant white sheep head with a long white nose with black nostrils looking at me! It was.......a bouncy castle!!!
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Emma
6/12/2015 01:05:09 pm
Me and my brother and our mam and dad, were arriving back home from holiday. We had lots to talk about when we went to school. All our friends enjoyed hearing the storys. As our mam was driving us home from school a life like inflatable sheep emerged out of the bushes. We screamed as we belted down the road. Once we were home it was all over the News. Apparently the sheep could talk. It said it was from nursary rhyme land. It wanted all the sheep on the land to do a commercial for Ba Ba black sheep,which is a famous nursary rhyme. He promised to give them back straight away. Soon the government agreed to let him take them. Days later we received our sheep back and every one watch the sheepy advert.
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harry
7/12/2015 12:03:15 am
"Oh, you'll never guess what happened today! I was driving my 4x4 through the mountains and suddenly I heard a rustle in the leaves. I opened the door and warily strolled closer. I swiped some leaves away and.....AAAHHHH!"
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Scarlet
7/12/2015 08:07:22 am
Yesterday morning my Dad sagest going to a cafe for lunch, we had no idea what cafe it is? One thing he said was the manager was very kind and the place is not a threat to human life 😃. 5 hours later it was dinner time 😁! We hopped into the car and drove near my anty's house and parked close to the door. As we entered the lamp building the room was bouncy at that I realised it was a bouncy castle cafe. Next I bonded carefully bounced to the counter orded picked up the food and headed home 😋😋!
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James
7/12/2015 10:20:33 am
Homework
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James
7/12/2015 10:21:22 am
I'm not sure if my 100 word challenge was posted
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Grace
7/12/2015 11:03:24 am
This sheep, however is not dangerous, my opinion is that
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RUBY A
7/12/2015 12:38:08 pm
ONE DAY, I WAS JOGGING ,WHEN I CAME ACROSS A STRANGE BLOW UP LAMB WHICH WAS ENORMUS.I RELIZED HOW BIG IT WAS WHEN I SAW THE LARGE CAR NEXT TO IT.SUDDENLY I REALIZED IT HADE A PEACE SIGN ON ITS EAR.INSIDE THE PEACE SIGN IT SAID LOVE THY NEIGHBOUGHS NOT HATE THY NEIGHBOUGHS.I APROCHED THE LAMB WITH CAUTION, I THORGH IT MAY BE A TOUCH SHY,OR JUST TAKE OFF AND BLOW INTO THE BLUE SKY.I QUIKLY GRABED MY LEGS AND TROTTED AWAY HOME I RUSHED HOME, PULLED MY BAG OF TOLD MY FEARLESS MUM ,THEN WENT FOR A WARM BATH.
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ruby o
8/12/2015 08:18:10 am
How did this mysterious sheep head get hear? is it abandon' t or is it there to scare people.This sheep's head, which was left hear is really freaking me out. His big long nose teaks up all of the walk way. Is that a door i see leading into his head. Is it one of the worlds weirdest hoses? I think its came out of space to steel our woolly friends and take them back to there plant woolly jumper. Who is going to stop this woolly sheep staler super gran and hear knitting needles will save the day .
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Tilly B
8/12/2015 11:44:36 am
This year my family and I went on a road trip. Suddenly something caught my eye. In the bushes there was a giant inflatable sheep!
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Sol
8/12/2015 11:45:50 am
One normal day a family of people went to see the colourful creation centre which is a place of colourful creations.so they set off on their existing joining, so at the centre their was a giant model of a pancake
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Thomas
9/12/2015 12:28:20 pm
First things first, sheep don’t appear in bushes like that every day do they? Well I’ve not seen one before! Is it evil? Is it friendly? Has it come before? Is someone controlling it? Has it been let go (like paper lantens do) from a different country? Anyway if it has it doesn’t be causing anyone any harm (un less people are whaling for help in the car). Most people certainly be whaling for help but some of them (odd and okay) will be in a rush to get somewhere. The massive sheep didn’t cause any harm at all!
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ethan s
10/12/2015 12:00:50 am
“Where has it come from? What does it want with us? Is it dangerous? So many questions to be answered about this thing, which is the right kind of transport to investigate this specimen?””Over to harry in the helicopter,” how is looking at the giant from above,” “the beast seems to be approaching the road side whatever you do not travel in your cars” “ aaaghh I’m in my car what should I do” “just wait there i will come and lift you out of the car, grab the rope when i throw it down to you, will i make it...
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