He was shocked to find…
Tips: Remember to describe what is in the sack and explain what happens to the Lord of Nulth and his guards after he opens it.
Good luck young zoo-keepers!
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Good evening and welcome back to the Night Zoo. You join us here in dark times I am afraid. The evil Lord of Nulth has declared war on imagination and his reign of terror is in danger of destroying the Night Zoo and creativity once and for all. The Night Zoo needs your help! Your first task is to watch and listen carefully to this short story about the Lord of Nulth. Now complete the story by writing 100 words, beginning with:
He was shocked to find… Tips: Remember to describe what is in the sack and explain what happens to the Lord of Nulth and his guards after he opens it. Good luck young zoo-keepers!
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Mr Turner
20/11/2014 11:07:03 pm
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Test
20/11/2014 11:22:20 pm
Test 2
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Mr Turner
20/11/2014 11:38:08 pm
Test 5
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Mr Turner
22/11/2014 04:06:03 am
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Mr Turner
22/11/2014 04:08:33 am
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Sadie
22/11/2014 07:48:23 pm
He was shocked to find a Ninja Kitten, that had bright blue eyes, red and black stripes and razor sharp claws. He leaped out of the sack and immediately attacked the Lord of Nulth. But what the Ninja Kitten didn’t know was that the Lord of Nulth was actually friendly inside and something was bothering him. No one knew what it was except the lord himself.
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Josh!
22/11/2014 07:59:45 pm
Help help cried the captured villager.The lord of nulth was shocked to find as he and his guards opened the brown sac was Mr.Mushroom the school teacher whom was captured at 12:32pm in science room 4.Call in 2 robotic spiders to take this man down to the dungeon.Said the lord of nulth with a sly grin on his face.Once Mr.Mushroom had left the underground lair he said call in Mr Maker to make some more electric shields and If he can buy some more swords and arrows from the blacksmith shop.
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Katie
22/11/2014 08:21:58 pm
He was shocked to find a Labrador artic seal whose bright blue eyes , sparkled like the northern lights,coming from the inside of the brown soggy sack.
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Lucy
22/11/2014 10:53:45 pm
He was shocked to find one of the zoo keepers but... He went to chuck him but after he looked back I the bag he was gone! And the only was to get him back was to search he told his robots to try and try but it was no use he had gone.suddenly a peer of light came to him and then he could see himself in side the nicest person but he ignored it and sore the person again and said get him so they went outside but the light was to strong and turned to dust and went in thin air.
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Cobi
22/11/2014 11:58:09 pm
He was shocked to find a little creature which was a rabbit but when he took it out of the bag It was in fact the lord of the night zoo,who can turn in-to any animal he wants whenever he wants.The lord of the night is the most powerful man on the planet,because of his powers he can do magical things.After being released from the bag the lord of the night zoo first destroyed the guards then he had a battle with lord nuth.He turned into an elephant and sprayed his stored water over lord nuth which killed him then he freed the trapped animals.
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Guy
23/11/2014 12:03:07 am
He was shocked to find a colourful peacock with a tail that shone like a rainbow . Nulth was angry because he thought that being the dark lord he had conquered all things bright,bold and hopeful . The peacock got out the bag while Nulth was having a tantrum and ran round the room . The brightness of the peacock was making the dark grey robots bang in to each other and of the walls . Nulth was getting smaller and smaller until he was like a fly ,the peacock came over and ate him the sun came out and every one lived happily ever after.
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Matthew
23/11/2014 12:18:42 am
He was shocked to find a bright pink pig, the pig jumped out of the sack and kicked lord nulth in the face like a ninja then the pig attacked lord of nulths guards. So he could escape lord of nulth got up and chased the pig all the way through the building until the the pig jumped out the open window to freedom. The pig, who was angry , ran through the street destroying things . Lord of nulth came up with a plan, his plan was to buy a gun to shoot the pig. That day he got a gun and stood at the open window with his gun waiting for the pig to run past, he stood for a hour then the pig ran past, bang!!! he shot a bullet and the pig died, the the maddness was over.
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Luke. D
23/11/2014 12:33:19 am
He was shocked to find that inside the old smelly and damp sack a ... A frightening night crawler, this creature had 8 red eyes, 2 poison dripping fangs and 12 hairy legs.It looked up out of the sack at Lord Nulth whith all his fearsome eyes
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Kate
23/11/2014 12:47:34 am
He was shocked to find that more children, that loved imagination. He felt like there was a heart break. He didn't know what he had done but it only looked dull, nothing was there, he didn't know so he just went to sleep! Their was a sudden CRASH! He looked out of the window there was nothing but Zombies all over the place he couldn't say anything. Their was another SWITCH of a light, that scared him, but he wasn't scared of anything he was to tough to get past there was no animals no nothing it was all gone!
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Luke p
23/11/2014 02:05:22 am
He was shocked to find a whole family of starving meerkats and they all jumped out of the shadow grey sack and scattered all over the floor and they travelled to all diffrent directions so the dad meercat went into a direction over on the left and the mam meercat scuttled into a random direction on the right and the boy meercat hopped
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Daniel
23/11/2014 11:58:08 pm
He was shocked to find a cyborg from the night zoo ,he never knew what it was but he always thought it wouldn't hurt him because it was part robotic as all of his guards were. So he never hurt it but it walked around his lair ,and he was suspicious about the latest version it was.It was better than the original robots he had, but he was happy as well because it looked menacing .But he shouldent of trusted it,it shot a bullet through his hands and his legs but ther was a bullet hole in his chest.
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Kayleigh
24/11/2014 01:15:52 am
He was socked to find that an animal , which was old, was in the sack.
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beau
24/11/2014 02:23:26 am
He was shocked to find that all of his animals were gone where were they? He thought are they ok he asked to himself. Then suddenly he heard a THUD an elephant fell from the sky, hiscccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhaaaawwwwwwwwww that one was the snake choking as it reached the grey concrete, bang went the giraffe. All of this noise was the step brother of the zoo keeper who hated him he owned another of the zoos in his city. This was jelousy. ''But why?'' he asked but he was gone.
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Jamie-lee
24/11/2014 03:11:01 am
He was shocked to find... a creature this unusual it was a leatherback turtle at first he didn't know what it was, well that was until he googled it on his steel grey computer. Lord Nulth wasn't sure if he would be able to turn it into one of his guards! Suddenly as he grabbed the turtle out of the sack their was silence then...there was an attack. The leatherback turtle let out a grate calling then an army of leatherback turtles broke in! The turtles freed all of the animals that had been turned into guards and Lord Nulth was never seen again.
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bethany
28/11/2014 12:41:58 am
He was shocked to find
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evie-mae
29/11/2014 10:30:24 pm
PART 1 HE WAS SHOCKED TO FIND...a dusty old man standing in the middle of the room with cob webs surrounded him.He walked forward and looked straight in the eyes.Suddenly he punched him in the neck and kicked him out of the room.
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