100 word challenge #10

13/11/2015

This week's 100 word challenge is linked to Children in Need. There are lots of superheroes in the world (they don't have to always wear a cape).

You have 100 words to write a short story about a superhero. It could even be a member of your family or someone you have invented.

Our focus is to use a wide range of punctuation correctly within our writing.

40 Comments

thomas

13/11/2015 07:49:53 am

My super hero is … MY WONDERFUL DADDY, because every night he says to me on Saturday do you want to have a farther son night, down the cricket club (basically so he can go on the booze). But I find it rather amusing because it annoys my mam. My mam is always like this “go on then” but inside she is like great he is out at the mucky pub again. At least he is spending quality time with his superb son. And when we go home at about 9:30 he says “do you want a domino’s pizza son.”

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:42:36 am

A very honest account there Thomas. Good use of brackets. Don't forget to punctuate your speech.

Liam M

13/11/2015 09:58:49 am

A man who lived at Escomb called Dane was in the army but got fired, he hadn’t had a job since, so he thought out loud “I want to save people” but how could he do that? “Maybe I could help someone like do someone’s shopping”. One day that happened... there was an old lady crossing the road and there was a bus coming towards her so he ran as fast as lightning and pulled her out the way. Everybody was cheering, he was a hero and was in the newspaper. His new job was now saving people and his new name was Super Underpants.

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:43:21 am

Good work Liam!! You are beginning to use a wide range of punctuation within your writing.

Ruby o

14/11/2015 07:52:10 am

(Super Lizzie) Is my best friend shy is all ways there when i wont her. Lizzie is very fury and she blends in with the carpet. she is a dog and i love her to pieces. Super Lizzie is black and (NEWCASTLE)
This is how she saved me so i could get a ice-cream
it was a sunny day and i had my Sunday lunch and my mam said if you down eat your greens you wont get a ice -cream. bububut i down like my greens. Sneakly i but my greens on the floor so super Lizzy could have them.

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:44:30 am

A good effort at punctuating this piece of writing Ruby. We will be working on brackets again in the upcoming weeks.

LucyB

15/11/2015 02:24:57 am

It was a new day, the sun was shining bright, and the flowers were blooming. A beautiful day in New York, as always. Sally was strolling along the stone path, as she noticed something strange, something that she had never noticed before in all 15 years of her life. A person, a girl standing on top of the Statue of Liberty. "What are you doing up there?"...There was know answer. "Well who are you?" Still know answer....
"What are you doing talking to a statute?" There was a small giggle behind her. A shiver of wind blew her blonde hair across her pale face. A girl flew above her head, a superhero with a yellow bear and her name was Pudsey! And that's how children in need came along!

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:45:21 am

Lovely work Lucy! Good use of the comma throughout.

kate Sunter

15/11/2015 04:43:00 am

In a small town, that no-one knew about named ‘Superville,’ lived a little girl all alone because her parents were on a mission. Not knowing what she was capable of, she decided to run a bath even though she was two. Minutes later, she was out of the bath and sitting down having a sandwich. Suddenly, the door opened, she thought it was her parents but little did she know it wasn’t. It was a robber trying to steal her parent’s gold award for super respect but the little super hero teleported in front of the robber and trapped him!

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:45:48 am

Well done Kate. You have completed this week's challenge.

daniel

15/11/2015 05:14:25 am

One afternoon, an old lady was out shopping at Asda. Out of nowhere a robber grabbed the ladies bag what had a £million in. The robber jumped straight onto his bike and zoomed of into the distance . Suddenly, superman quickly chased the robber round Asda. Soon the robber’s bike ran out of petrol, then Superman pinned down the robber and grabbed the woman’s bag. Superman kindly handed the bag back to the lady . Superman grabbed the robber and threw him straight out the window. Everyone cheered and thanked Superman. Superman then zoomed off for his next big adventure.

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:46:19 am

A good effort Daniel. Try to add a wider range of punctuation next time.

deyla

15/11/2015 06:33:52 am

Anyone who does good things is my hero; to be a hero you don’t have to be: strong, fast or have super powers you just have to be kind. For example a friend could be your super hero; or your parents as they look after you. People who risk their lives for other people are definitely heroes… for instance in, wars soldiers are your heroes. Heroes don’t have to save the world for everybody, just make one person feel happy! It is not always easy to put somebody else first. It could mean that you end up in trouble though.

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:46:43 am

Good work Deyla. You have used a wide range of punctuation.

Connor

15/11/2015 08:53:20 am

Clark Kent is an ordinary dude who works for the local news paper down the town but unknown to his colleges he has superhero powers. He can fly faster than a speeding bullet and has more power than a south bound freight train. He can leap tall buildings and see through steel. Whenever there is a crime taken place he uses his superhero powers and senses where it`s taken place. Off in a flash he runs into a telephone box and he changes into his superhero costume and fly`s off at hyper speed to fight the bad lads and take them off to the police station.

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:47:18 am

Well done Connor! You have written a lovely account about a superhero.

Grace

15/11/2015 10:09:37 am

"Help super Sebby , help," a doll cried to the
3 year old boy called Seb . He was very brave and
always wanted to save his toy friends. For an example
the other day he saved Thomas the tank engine from
falling off the tracks. Todays mission was very exciting, His
big brother, Zak had let his lego figures run around
the house like crazy. They had trapped all the dolls
in a spider web, however he only had one more
to save. He got a chocolate bar out of his pocket which
made him feel very strong, he yanked the doll out of the web. YEH, SUPER SEBBY HAD SAVED THE DAY AGAIN.

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:47:56 am

Well done Grace. Try and include a wider range of punctuation next time.

Scarlet

15/11/2015 11:21:36 am

My superhero is my Dad. He looks after me and my sister all week, taking us to school and swimming three days a week. He makes our tea sometimes. His hobbies are Photography and acting. He is learning to sing for the pantomime and I have been helping him with it as I am in the pantomime as well. I am an octupus. He is also making my costume and my sisters. He also helps me with my maths homework. He looks after me when I am ill and sometime gives us treats as everyone needs a treat sometimes!😀. Some times he is cross with me but I understand why as I can be naughty. I love my dad and he will be my hero forever.💙

Mr Turner

25/11/2015 03:48:30 am

Good use of short/ complex sentences Scarlet within your writing. Try to use a wider range of punctuation.

Lucas.Gaines

16/11/2015 11:16:27 am

It is 1941 and the world is in the throes of world war two. Steve Rogers wants to do his part and join America's armed forces, but the military rejects him because he is too small and skinny. Finally, Steve gets his chance when he is accepted into an experimental program that turns him into a super soldier called Captain America. Joining forces with his friends, Captain America leads the fight against the German Red Skull. He has an indestructible bullet proof shield that he carries on his back. He never gets older and I would like to be him

Amelia

16/11/2015 11:50:44 am

"Help me, help me! " screamed Paris, " I'm stuck in the ice and I can't swim."

Earlier that day, Paris and her sister decided to visit the new outdoor Ice rink at Auckland Castle. When they arrived they noticed that there was a massive sign which said, ' Danger,ice still setting.' But they couldn't wait to try it out so Paris and her sister took a huge risk and went on!" Uh,oh " Suddenly, Paris felt the ice move.
A few seconds later, she was stuck in the freezing cold water! Then a girl named Matilda ( who worked in Auckland Castle ) was coming home from work, when she realised that Paris and her sister were in trouble. There and then Matilda took a huge risk and used her superpower to fly over the ice and save them. A couple seconds later they were out of the ice, Paris was so happy she nearly cried with laughter. Then they said 'thankyou' to Matilda and they all went home.

Alicia

16/11/2015 12:09:37 pm

One of my superhero's is my Nana (Joyce). She has always been there for me since I was born. She used to look after me every day when my mam and dad went to work; she used to play games with me and take me to the park everyday. She is good to talk to and I love spending time with her. She is very kind and caring.
When I have got older my Nana has shown me how to bake cakes and we go shopping together. My Nana is a very special person to me; she is my superhero because she does everything for the whole family and always puts us first.

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 04:15:45 am

Good work Alicia. You have completed your hero challenge including brackets.

kelsi

17/11/2015 08:29:36 am

one day

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:58:33 am

harry

17/11/2015 09:10:05 am

Meet Sid. Sid is a superhero although he is a dog; and he is made up. Anyway, Sid helps dogs when times are tough For instance, a dog is not being taken out for any walks; so Sid goes and helps them by taking them for a stroll himself.Sid also has owners of his own, but to them he is a normal dog living a normal life. All the dogs on the neighbor hood appreciated Sid's time and effort, so one day they all had a big party to....." Oi, Sid, walkies,good boy." It was all a dream...

Sol

17/11/2015 10:01:35 am

Once upon a time there was a super hero called president horse legs.
He has a human head but horse legs. He has big bushy eye brows his
Legs can jump as high as the clouds because his mam was a kangaroo And his dad was a horse , his grandma was a human. He has a league of super hero friends his company is called the USC ( universal silly council ) his friends are called intelligent fart bot , cockadoodle poo, grass hopper green mush and lady legs. His worst enemy is called Evil Brian Smarty pants. His other superpower is when he kicks somebody he knocks them out for 15 minutes but if he gets really mad he can kill somebody.

Casper

17/11/2015 12:32:15 pm

A great cry shook the world a hero was born, a baby named Clark Kent. (6 years later) ‘’Clark time for school’’ shouted Clarks mum, ‘’five more minutes’’ shouted Clark ‘’two’’ said a voice it was his father.

During class Clark was asked a question but Clark could see inside everybody’s skin so he ran to the storage room scared. Miss Welsh shouted over the door ‘’ we have called your mother Clark’’ at that same moment , Clarks mother walked over and said a few words, he calmed down and came out ‘’I could see straight through them mum’’.

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:57:04 am

Super work Casper. You have used brackets within your writing.

Tilly Bramhald

17/11/2015 12:47:27 pm

My hero is Pudsey. All of the children who have disabilities, diseases or do not have the right care, rely on Pudsey. Many people raise money to go to charities including children in need. Pudsey help raise thousands across the UK. Everyone recognises Pudsey with the classic dotted headband wrapped around the bright yellow mascot ‘ Pudsey.’ No one saves Britain like Pudsey does. The amount of money Pudsey has raised is unbelievable! Pudsey has been here for 30 years & it was his birthday this year! He has done a remarkable job like no other. All children in need, need a hero and Pudsey is the bear! He might not be your hero but he’s my HERO! This year he has helped raise over £37 million pounds and it’s still rising.

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:56:36 am

Good work Tilly. You have written about Pudsey the bear. There are some interesting facts here.

ETHAN STOKES

18/11/2015 11:31:28 am

One miserable morning, two young boys were walking past the scrap yard and heard a loud unusual rumbling sound. Being nosey the two boys went over to check it out, the first one saw a rather large eye, soon the boys started to head back with dissapointment on their face but as soon as they turned their backs, monsters jumped out all over the place. One of the boys said “what should we do!”
“I don’t know, just follow me.” So the two boys went running back down onto the main road and crossed without looking, the monsters did the same.(bang)

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:54:51 am

Good use of fronted adverbials Ethan. Remember that you do not need to end the sentence to add brackets. This is the 'additional information' as part of the same sentence.

Emma

18/11/2015 12:08:43 pm

It was just an ordinary day when Pudsy was taking a stroll down near the forest. Where there stood a hollow oak tree. He could hear a young girl calling "HELP HELP SOMEONE PLEASE !" Pudsy sprung into action and leapt up high and swirled into a super suit, and dashed toward the girl hanging from the tree branch. He lifted her to safety, she thanked pudsy. The news reporters came and introduced him, after what he did there came a company called children in need to help the young with problems (and people hanging from a tree.)

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:53:15 am

Great work Emma. You have used brackets and dialogue within your writing.

Tilly R

4/12/2015 09:40:22 am

Once in a fishbowl lived a fan tail called Ava, she could talk, fly and breath out of water. I could only hear her talk but everybody else could see her fly, they were amazed by Ava. One normal day she decided to take a little stroll ( fly ) out of her fish tank , so she did. She flew round the house, with no cape on ( they don't have to always wear a cape ) so on and on she went round the house and Ava got too carried away. With her self. But soon she was back in her cage safe and sound.

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:52:48 am

Good work Tilly! You have used brackets within your writing.

Emily

10/12/2015 08:55:48 am

A hero doesn't have to wear a cape, or have super powers they just have to be someone that you won't forget for what they did.My hero is Mr.Duncan Stewart.
Mr Stewart was the plastic surgeon that brought back my smile after my nasty accident.I thought that I wouldn't be the Emily I was before but because of Mr Stewart I am. I might have a big scar on my face but I've got a story too.....
Im learning to accept what has happened and how I look different but I know that I will always be thankful to Mr Duncan Stewart.He isn't just MY super hero.... He is my mam and dads too. He didn't just help ME smile again..... He made my parents smile come back as well.💗

Mr Turner

26/2/2016 03:51:53 am

A wonderful recount of your hero Emily. I love the opening! Super work!

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